The First Champion of the Ming Dynasty

Hope you all like it... I won't reply again in the future, and I won't care about comments. It affects the mood of writing a book too much. Some people really give negative reviews for no reason. They just scold you if they don't like a word... Pull them down... You can comment whatever you want? Write your book well and stop worrying about it.

The subject matter of this book is novel, the plot is exciting, and it is well written.

In fact, the plot is okay, but the emotional aspect is a bit unclear. If you want to open a harem, let alone open a harem, if you want to accept a few more girls, just accept them generously. Don't exaggerate the protagonist's affection for his first wife. It is not the original owner who has such deep feelings. This is a contradiction, when a woman does not get along well with the protagonist. When lining up, you don't need to dwell too much on emotions and details. The second thing is to keep the mentality of taking things as they come. If you can't turn the world upside down, don't overly ignore the current environment. You must have an open mind and come here to help change something. If you always ignore the current environment, it is easy for readers to feel depressed. It's just a small personal opinion. Keep up the good work.

Very good, very good, just don't break the chapter.

If you like reading, cheers for the author

The writing is very good, the language is natural but not boring, the plot is continuous and climaxes, and the plot is reasonable and interesting (of course, personally), but thinking about other women after marriage is not very comfortable for a loser like me who has never been in a relationship. Of course, this is in ancient times, three wives and four concubines are normal, there is no other meaning, just to talk about feelings, the author, cheers [Sending heartfelt wishes]

I have read so many books about the Ming Dynasty. This book has a very high literary level and a compact plot. I hope it will be more interesting later on.

Clear writing, great book

A very good novel about the early Ming Dynasty. The writing is good. Cheers to the author [Like] [Like] [Like]

The plot of the story is very tight. I hope the author can give the protagonist some self-protection. After all, the emperor of the Ming Dynasty guarded the country, so force is very important. It is not impossible to add some technology and hard work [Thinking][Thinking]

Are Nanbei Bang and Lao Zhu's death connected together?

Why every good book is so short-lived

Who can read this? Come on, one more chapter, one per person!

It's well written, I hope it doesn't end badly in the end

Five stars are given, and I hope the author can code quickly.

Pretty good, come on

Who can see this little bit?

Very good. The score is a bit low.

Not bad, I quite like it

Good book, worth recommending

The follow-up article is in the status

You can also play with your mobile phone

Super exciting, five stars support the author

Not bad. Hope to continue working hard.

Heart-touching, masterpiece!

Except for the awkward relationship with Miss Xu, everything is great (mainly because the readers don't like this kind of relationship)

Except for writing about women, the rest of it is pretty good. Suddenly I almost got interested

It's really good, but for some reason the score is a bit low.

Now that I see it, I feel like I can give it five stars. If it turns out to be bad or toxic later, I'll give it one more star.

I like this way of writing. I think the timing is good. It's not the same as other similar stories I've seen before. The characters are pretty good at the moment. Come on.