Traveling Through************

The biggest advantage of this book is that the setting of Tomb Raider Notes is explained relatively clearly, so people who have never read the original work can understand it. The writing style in the later period is much smoother than that in the early period. Overall, the score of 6.9 Is a bit low, and it should be considered a mid-range level of writing. Let me give you a few small suggestions, I hope they will be helpful: 1. The beginning was not handled well. The scene where the male protagonist first meets the Iron Triangle is a bit awkward, especially the younger brother's reaction. Other than surprise and meaningful, other words could be used, otherwise it would look a bit awkward. Moreover, the male protagonist's early combat power is too high. It is unreasonable to beat the black blind man with just a beginner. Although the black blind man has poor eyesight during the day, he will not be defeated by one move. It is estimated that many people were persuaded to quit at the beginning. 2. The plot is relatively bland and lacks highlights. It is highly repetitive with books of the same type. The features are not very prominent and it is not engaging. Maybe you can try to add more creativity of your own. (Like some knives?) I still hope the author can work hard and give me five stars for encouragement. At least it's not like some books that overwhelm the little brother. The characters are relatively close to the original work, and there aren't any messy CPs. It's just a serious brotherhood. (At least it's serious for now)

Very healthy, come on!

Very good, very good, very good. The secret behind the ultimate. Alas, it is endless darkness, endless abyss, endless whirlpools, endless pits, and endless black holes. Who knows? It seems that only the third uncle knows this. Ha ha ha ha

Really good, okay?

It's very interesting. I just want to ask, who is the protagonist CP? Male or female?

Thank you to the author. Can I ask who the protagonist's CP is?

I want to know what the protagonist's bloodline is for?

It's very good. The author should update it quickly. Please update it more. We don't like the scheming girl Aning if An Ning dies, but don't let Yun Cai die, otherwise the fat man will regret it for the rest of his life. Don't let Pan Zi die. If Pan Zi dies, Wu Xie will feel guilty for the rest of his life.

Are the protagonist and the little brother sitting here CP, or are Wu Xie and the little brother CP?

Nice! Come on, author!

This book is super good, highly recommended! (／≧ω＼) The plot of the whole story is also perfectly connected. There is no phenomenon of digging holes but not filling them. The only drawback is that there are few updates and it is not enough to watch! (ﾉωﾉ) The relationship between the protagonist and the tomb-robber triangle is also very harmonious. Coupled with some of the author's own understanding, this tomb-robbery novel seems very real. So I, the author, have given you so many praises. When will you update? (┯_┯)

Come on, the author, the writing is great [Like][Like][Like][Blow a kiss]

Author, go and do your best

Yes, but the structure is a bit loose. The characterization is also very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It's pretty good so far. I hope I can fill in all the pitfalls of Third Uncle.

The details aren't handled very well, but overall it's okay.

Nice, but quite short

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

Is the heroine coming?

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author [like][like][like][like]

The main character's bloodline is of no use.

This is so interesting, it makes up for all the pitfalls of the third uncle.

Why are there only 7. So many such good books?

Without further ado, five-star praise. [Code hold]

It's very interesting. Please keep updating the author! | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

The plot of the story is very unique. I like it very much. Thank you very much.

It's okay to write this now

Personally I think it looks pretty good

It's actually pretty good-looking [thinking]

The author's writing is really beautiful