The Young Man from Chang'an City

It can be seen that the author has something, but this style is not popular in Tomato. Nowadays, everything is in a fast-paced style. It is really not easy to read a "slow down" novel. It is just a bit lacking. Please keep up the good work, author.

Come on, I "personally" think it will become a masterpiece if it doesn't collapse later. Of course it is a masterpiece in my heart. Don't scold or bully me. After all, it is a masterpiece that I think [I understand][I understand][I understand]

The writing technique is good, and I was fascinated by it. But the content of the story is a bit confusing, and too many interludes are used to solve the riddles. The story is deliberately not connected and depends on your own understanding. In the early stage, I felt that there was no target direction, and I felt a little too confident. I moved here and there, and there were all pitfalls. I didn't know if I could fill them all in. Most of the space was used for explanation.

A very good story, and the author is also a very good narrator. The writing style is very ordinary, but just like Wang Xizhi's calligraphy, it is ordinary when viewed individually, but together it makes people intoxicated and amazed.

Don't worry about those malicious comments, after all, Tomato knows everything. I feel that the writing style of this book is really good, and it is also very good to read. I like this book very much. I hope that the author can continue to work hard and not let others affect his writing mood.

Come on, the writing is very good and worth reading, but the writing is a bit cumbersome. The author can write more concisely.

It looks good, but my little princess has more scenes [laughs evilly]

Very good, too lazy to talk about the advantages. If you like Sword, you can read it. Although the writing style is not that good, it is much better than the many white articles on Tomato. If you like cool writing, you can leave it. There is nothing cool about the group portrait writing, but it is not hot enough. Come on, author. I like the character of Wang Moyan very much. Find him a family as soon as possible!

Regarding the end of this book, I can only say that it is really... Such a pity. This book adopts a narrative method of selecting one main line and many branch lines. However, each branch line is described extremely delicately. IQ is online. However, there are too many messy branch lines, which are like a pot of colorful, fragrant and exquisite stew. Some cover the main line. The first and middle stages of the book are a bit confusing and confusing, but it does not affect the excitement. I personally like this narrative method. It gives people a strong sense of substitution. It is a very good book.

I thought this book was a tit-for-tat, happy-go-lucky kind of book, but I didn't expect it to be more everyday. It's not my type but I like it. The description of the environment and background inside is quite good.

The book is very good, but the author is probably a newcomer. There were too many foreshadowings at the beginning, and the plot was a bit poorly controlled, but it does not affect the brilliance of this book. And the writing is getting better and better in the future, please come on, author, please update more.

This is a very patient, tortuous and... Very delicate story. The meticulous deduction of extremely wise and demonic characters; the intricate relationship ties; the rise and fall of various clans under the sky and stars; the foreshadowing chess game that spans thousands of years... Whether it is a destined love for several generations, or a long-term stay with morning bells and dusk drums, or a heart-to-heart understanding... There are almost no passers-by in the story, and behind everyone there is a wonderful story, most of which have some regrets, but the author has added a satisfactory ending. The vivid stories are intertwined with each other, the fog blows away, the blue clouds peel away, a world comes alive in the words, and a group of clever creatures are written. The story of the gentleman and the little princess... This is such a pity!

After watching it for four days, I can only say that it is really good-looking, as long as you can be interested in him. The relationship between Princess Yan Xia and Li Mu (junior teacher), Li Mu's previous life (Mu Liang, the young lord of Mu City, the old city where the stars are herded) who was killed. What kind of chess will Jun Zu play and whether Li Mu can play the chess game. . . To predict what will happen next, please listen to the breakdown next time (fold the fan)

Looking at the full text, the author's plot design is original, the narrative is vivid and natural, and there are no flat characters. The writing technique is also worthy of praise. The writing is smooth and natural, with no deliberate sensationalism and no sudden turns. I still like the clear and elegant writing style of the first volume. Whether it is describing daily interactions, competing in martial arts, or telling secrets about old events that have been hidden for a long time, "beauty" is reflected in every aspect. It is not just the "beauty of words" displayed simply by using some gorgeous words, but also the "beauty of connotation" of restrained and implicit emotional expression. For example, at the end of the snowy day, the little princess insists on waiting for Li Mu to come home. There is no explicit description of the little princess's psychology. However, the moment when she found out that Li Mu had left, the falling snow, the red face from the cold, and the insistence on waiting until dawn are shown in the dark, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the feelings of the person involved. In contrast, the later story turns to the protagonist's decryption adventure, with a completely different style, and there is a feeling that the protagonist has been taken away. Of course, the plot design and use of artistic techniques are very good, but it just didn't touch me as much as the first volume. I still want to read the story of the Seventh Princess and Muzi. I guess this kind of delicate writing style has a small audience in Tomato, so the author gave up on this style, which is a pity.

The introduction has said it, but you have to struggle with the pit buried in the first volume. It is very deep, very confusing, and you can't bear it. You can start commenting after reading chapter 70 or 80. It's better to start from the second volume. The stories that touch people's hearts one by one are really good, and the writing is also very good. There are many difficult feelings and touching people's hearts.

The novel is very good. I followed it from beginning to end. The last few scenes were particularly explosive. I just couldn't get enough of it. The various foreshadowings and knives caught people off guard. It was really excellent. The author's imagination was even more original. It is indeed a very exciting slow-burn novel. The only shortcoming is that the rating is too low. I hope every reader can carefully read the introduction of this book before reading. It is very appropriate and useful. (Don't comment if you don't like it) [To be honest, the rating is really too low]

In the early stage, there were shadows of Ruoyouruowuzaitianji. The description is delicate, but the macro is insufficient. The details are somewhat cumbersome and confusing, making it difficult to read. Also, there is always sadness in the article, and regardless of whether it is related or not, the male and female protagonists find it difficult to calm down. Maybe this is what the author wanted.

The writing style has a fresh and refined flavor, which makes people's eyes brighter. It is really good. However, some places do focus too much on redundancy, which makes people easily lose the desire to read. The plot of Jiangu is indeed very similar, but it is different. Overall, five stars are worth [note][note]

I came here after the completion of The Immortal Emperor's Son. Personally, I think this novel is very good. Compared with many of the mindless novels about system time travel, this one is much better. The story of Bashu makes people endlessly daydream. Readers constantly guess the direction of the plot. I also keep guessing, but every time I am impressed by the author's imagination. The author often saves nearly a hundred chapters of foreshadowing, which explodes within a few chapters, and some even make me amazed. Whether it's the black water and white water in The Emperor's Son representing 0 and 1, or the terrifying disease in Nanmu City in this book that gave me chills down my spine. The author's book gave me the feeling of watching Jian Lai. It is a group drama and everyone is three-dimensional. The beginning of "Jian Lai" made me unable to read and even more confusing. The two have similar approaches but the same purpose. I hope the author's book will become popular and I'm optimistic about the author!

From another book. New book lovers may consider starting from Volume 3 to see if they suit their taste. Or read another book by Hongdou, "The Son of the Immortal Emperor" (it's a good read, it's not a bad book, it makes people happy, it's highly recommended) In the first and second volumes, Hongdou Laodeng's usual "The Riddler's slow-paced narrative" is actually quite interesting, but it is really annoying [smile]. Requires better patience. The characterization and writing are very good, and you can eat it with confidence. This book does not belong to the category of "killing monsters and upgrading all the way to fighting is fun". Some book friends should avoid it first. Don't leave negative reviews after reading a few pictures that don't suit your taste. This book shouldn't have such a low score [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] After reading it, it's a pity that it stopped at the end of a certain branch. It's quite interesting, but if you want to read the complete story, you should avoid it. I'm halfway through the main plot and I don't know if it's there ╮(╯＿╰)╭ I hope Badou Laodeng can continue this story in his lifetime [smile]

It's nice to watch. You have to read it bit by bit. There are too many foreshadowings. If you don't pay attention, you might not understand it (*´I`*)

I really like group portraits, but it's a pity that the swordsman is so broken. I really hope that the author can write this book well. It's a bit too bland now, both in terms of plot and characters. I hope there will be a bright feeling later on, even if one character shines, come on, author

This book is really well written, and I suggest you read it carefully. However, the ending is really too hasty. Although this book is "finished", it is not finished. I look forward to the day when it will grow from the teenagers it is now to the prime of life.

The story line is very divergent in the early stage, and the author's plot is very big. Later, the story line is slowly converged. I was looking forward to it at first, but unfortunately the ending was very abrupt. I felt like there was still a lot left unwritten, so I probably couldn't support it anymore. But it's good to see this kind of book on Tomato.

The writing is very good, the story is excellent, and it is refreshing in tomatoes. Those who like to watch Beacon Fire, Mao Mao, and Plankton may consider it [Thinking][Thinking]

Four-star encouragement, it smells like Mao Ni, but it doesn't have Mao Ni's writing ability of bright and dark lines. A little white, a glance at the female college student!

It's quite interesting to watch, but I still don't understand [laughing and crying] [covering face] Later, I can practice again, and there is a suspense at the beginning, which makes people want to watch but also makes people unable to understand me [crazy] [angry], it's a waste of my brain, or my level is too low. Let's continue reading

Such a fine book has such a low rating. The author's writing style is stunning, the layout is profound, and the plot and characters are very carefully drawn. It gave me the feeling of reading something fishy, ​​a really good book! I hope more readers who like Mao Ni will definitely not be disappointed if they read this.

Personally, I think "Before Pai Yao Tu Bao" is really good to watch. Each story is well written and coherent without being abrupt. "Tu Bao Arrives in the Sea Kingdom" starts to follow the traditional route of big story upgrades and burial pits. The pace is not as tight as before. It is recommended to read it after you have fattened up.

Coming from Changsheng Laodeng, Hongdou's style and writing are very good [I admire]. It's a pity that this book can only end hastily due to various reasons [crying]. The later books also have the shadow of this book. The emotional story between Li Mu and the little princess is very delicate and well written [heartfelt]. Hongdou's new books are always blocked, Hongdou come on [please update]. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and it can be seen that the author has a lot to write about and is grand, and the setting and world view are very novel [like]. There are many things that the author did not do well in writing a book for the first time, but overall it is a very good book [heartfelt]. If it had been written normally, it would have been over 1,000 chapters before it was finished. I really like the story of Li Mu and the little princess. The love between them is hidden in the subtle words, expressions, eyes, and deepest in the hearts of both parties [crying].