Mourning at Dawn

Well written, this book fits my understanding. I have always thought that Lu Mingfeihe and Eri Yi are a couple, and the two little monsters redeem each other. I hate other authors who write about time travel. The protagonist becomes a couple with Eri Yi from a pity point of view. They don't understand Eri Yi's loneliness, they just feel pity for it. The plot is also very reasonable, no logical problems, full marks.

Emmmm completely conforms to my imagination of the "grown-up" Lu Mingfei. If the concubine Ming in Long 1 2 3 is more of a loser than a hero, and Long 4 and 5 should be in the opposite direction (but I understand everything Jiang Nan writes). The concubine Ming in this book does not want to be as heroic as other fans, and mixed with the loser, it is completely the first time I read the first chapter of Dragon 4. Other characters also have their own story lines, which is really a great book with rich images. Everyone has scored points, so I won't. I think the author has quite a low self-esteem. Author, don't try to mess it up. I'll just take online classes and watch them at home. Please update me soon.

It's rare to see such a restored Dragon Clan fan on Tomato. The author is a big nb. I highly recommend it [Like] [Like]

It's very good-looking. It scores 55 million points. Although the emotional line ends a bit abruptly, the girls are all good girls. This is the first time I hope that the male protagonist can have mitosis. Lu Mingfei, can you do it? Give one to each of the little wanderers who share warmth, the sleeping underworld princess, and the little queen who lives and dies together.

This book is very well written and I have read it on other platforms before. This book is different from most fans who like to play the first two chapters. He admits and accepts the fact that Lu Mingfei was a complete loser in the first three books. In other words, why should we erase the period of Lu Mingfei's unawakened life? In fact, Lu Mingfei's declining life was the direct motivation for him to start working hard. This part, starting from Long Si, not only saves the huge regret of Eri Yi and the two brothers, but also takes over the foreshadowing of Lu Mingfei's training and transformation. Very well written

It's very good. It's similar to the writing style of the original work. No, no, no, this is the original. Jiang Nan is a fan writer.

This is the first time I've seen such a beautiful Dragon Clan fanfic.

This is a book that restores the Dragon Clan. To be honest, this is my first time doing a book review. This book is a fanfic about the Dragon Clan. I have been reading Dragon Clan 3 since I was in elementary school, and then I read Dragon One, Dragon Four, Dragon 5 intermittently. I found that the framework and plot of this fan novel have the flavor of Jiangnan itself. Still very good. If you feel dissatisfied with Jiangnan Togen of the Dragon Clan, you can read this book to find out the charm of Jiangnan's writing back then. Although some of the plots may be a bit bizarre, I think that when I read this book to the end, I believe that the author will give us the answer we are still looking for.

Reading it gave me the feeling that I was watching Dragons. I'm very glad that Tomato has such a novel and I can read it. Good luck to the author!

@ Is one of the best dragon fanfics I have read so far. It makes up for some regrets. The new plot is also very exciting. I hope the author will continue to persevere. By the way, will Mingfei have a harem in the future? If so, how will the plot unfold?

I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, and the style also has a Jiangnan feel. The details can be considered. It is probably the best fan fiction among the few fan fictions I have read. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better. I hope the author can reply to me and express his own opinions. What kind of ending is worthy of this journey of wandering?

Very good, not only Jiangnan's pen but also my own pen, not only Jiangnan's style, but also the eunuch has been imitated. To this day, do you still remember that summer four years ago, when you wrote this piece of your indignation. I hope that although the author's novel is discontinued, his daily life will go smoothly, and he will not only gain recognition from us here, but also gain recognition from others and himself in life. Come on, Bancheng Qingxia

It's beautiful, similar to Jiang Nan's writing style. Come on, author. [Praise]

No problem. It seems that the author is a little unsure. To be honest, this is the only Dragon Clan fanfic that can be read on Tomato. I really like this kind of fanfic that is full of details. Come on, keep updating soon.

It is closest to Jiangnan's writing style, better than Jiangnan Dragon Four and Dragon Five's plot shaping. It is a story about the continuous growth of a real bad boy. I personally think it is the follow-up story that is most in line with the development of the dragon clan. (The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you.)

The bad kid is not bad anymore, he turns out to be so handsome! Come on, author!

I declare this to be the only fanfic I've seen so far that I'm fascinated by. The characters I like seem to have become more complete in my mind. As an author who writes fan fiction, he is willing to spend time polishing the books he writes. His writing skills are infinitely close to those of the author of the book I am following, and the original book The author stopped writing in 19 years. I couldn't bear that a novel I had been following for twelve years was so hastily left to collect dust in the corner of my memory. I hope someone can pick it up again, dust it off, and continue writing this fascinating story. And Bancheng Qingxia, my friend, you picked it up. You did not pursue the speed of updating, but could project the situation of the characters in the book into my mind in just a few words. You made my rotten mind that had not been touched for a long time appear again in a scene comparable to a movie. Bancheng Qingxia, my friend, you are my new author god in this world! ! !

It's really perfect, very Jiangnan style.

The most beautiful Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever seen, come on

The writing is very good, very similar to Jiangnan. Even the dragging looks like it. Four to five updates a year, updated during the New Year [smile]

It is a slow-burning type, with rare descriptions that are accurate without being procrastinating. It has a very deep grasp of the character's personality. It is indeed of high quality and very restored.

The writing is good, it turns out to be a different fan of "Dragon Tribe 3", and it also writes a different story between Lu Mingfei and Hui Liyi. It also writes different plots and character relationships, which is the best dragon fanfic.

It's really well written, and the level is so high that it can be said to be very rare. It's not a mindless cheat or an industrial saccharine. It only changes the ending of Long San and allows the whole plot to proceed in a reasonable way. I hope Teacher Daye won't be so serious. I hope the author will persevere and finish writing ps: Actually, I really want to comment, but I usually read books in a non-network environment. I hope the author can see my post.

Our new Bancheng Qingxia has defeated the old Jiangnan. It's definitely nonsense to say it's better than the original, but the writing really has that flavor. You are awesome

It's really good. It's the best Dragon Clan fanfic I've ever seen. I don't know what the guys who gave it three stars thought.

Although the author has learned Jiangnan's procrastination, this is still the best dragon fanfic I have ever read. Come on Xia, win the resurrection match (also, when are you going to send me a mommy girlfriend like Isabel [smile]) Children, do you think Lao Xia will come back this year? (Also, I want to see Mingfei's mother [pouts])

This fanfic is great among the fanfics I have seen so far. Normally the protagonist of a fanfic would be someone else, but Lu Mingfei and the others are supporting characters. Some even traveled through time to save Eri. This book is very similar to the previously read Restart with Lu Mingfei's writing style and Jiang Nan's writing style. I hope the author can persevere!

Yes, I wrote it to the point of my heart. When reading other fanfics, I always think of Tiehua's unique novel. I heard that the author is now wearing a yellow robe (he is delivering takeaways), and I don't know when his little monster chapter will be released. Alas, after reading your novel, my eager desire to have Herzog and Jiang Nan kiss has faded a little. At least the blade I sent to Jiang Nan was ready to return after reaching the Strait of Malacca. Hope. Expect. It's a happy ending.

The author's writing style is very good, and the update speed is much faster than that of He Yi next door, but it is a bit short [eating melon] Press and divide [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The author's whole idea of filling in holes to advance the plot is very good, and it also has a Jiangnan flavor. The characterization is very detailed and can't fill in a lot of blanks. In this fanfic, I can chew on all the character settings. It's not inconsistent at all. It's very interesting, but it's not popular. You can definitely watch it as New Dragon Four. If you change the rating, I'm really afraid of being harmed [crying]