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Hello everyone, I am opening the door. I am the author of Captain Ah Wei, Half a Step of Time, and the new account of Dark August. Check-in from Yizhuang in the last book: I gave Uncle Jiu a headache and didn't handle it well later. I apologize to everyone here. I will definitely write a new book well. Please give me five stars, please give me good reviews and support. Thank you Yanzu. Thank you fairies.

Support the new book by yourself. The last book was not finished well, so I am working hard on this one. The new book has been signed. If you like Xiao Hei's works, you can come and read it! The people downstairs are all Yanzu and Tianxianyou. Jiu Shuwen, so if you become a disciple of Jiu Shu, there should be no problem. After all, if you don't like Jiu Shuwen, you may also read Jiu Shuwen.

I can't get rid of the image of Captain Ah Wei in my mind. Cousin, I want to drink tea

This book is very well written in terms of time-traveling Jiu Shu system... Except for the fact that the martial arts is not awesome at the beginning, it is much better after I changed the way of writing... I personally suggest that if the martial arts moves are enlarged and written, and combined with Taoism, I think the effect should be better [Thinking] I have to say one thing, 🐶Author, you have written so little that I lost it after reading it twice, please update it quickly [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

This book is well written. The last book was not well written, but it was not bad. But why did your name, the author, change? But I still give you a good review. Please call me a good person. If I hadn't looked at your name, Dark August, I wouldn't have known it was you.

I personally support the author because the last book was amazingly written, and it is relatively great among Uncle Nine fanfics, but! I feel that this book is not as good as the previous one. The first few chapters include content such as Ghost Biting Ghost, Taoist Yi Mei, Mr. Zombie, etc., And you can vaguely feel the settings of the protagonist traveling to various worlds in the later period. These settings are enough to make the content and plot of the entire book collapse. If you think about it, some people are here just for Uncle Jiu. After you have written the things in Uncle Jiu's world, who else will read the time-travel plot? ? ? The beginning is interspersed with the plots of several other parts. Anyone who reads it will easily think that this book is going to be unfinished. The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

Not bad, good, promising, hehehe, Uncle Jiu

Not bad! ! It's very well written. It would be best if you can't wait until the appointment is deadlocked in the future.

Come on, author! I quite like this book. I have thought about the idea of ​​Ah Wei as the main character before. Regarding Extraordinary Plunder, can we consider the TV series version of Fengyun? There are: Fire Bodhi, various magical weapons, and the dragon essence of the dragon. Eating one pill can greatly increase one's power and make one immortal. And speaking of martial arts, author, what do you think of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit? Among the bright swords there are the divine sword, the bright sword and the black dragon sword. In "The Rainbow Cat Walks the End of the World with a Sword," there are five elements crystal stones that contain the energy of the five elements. A phoenix and a black dragon even appeared in the theatrical version of Fire Phoenix. In addition, you can also consider Legend of Sword and Fairy, which contains the remaining energy that Yun contains to shape the world, the Five Spiritual Pearls.

Since I often watch movies on Huya Live, I really like the works starring Lin Zhengying, and I also appreciate Uncle Jiu's time-travel work. Please don't write invincible in the future. Give it a little more difficulty. Otherwise, the protagonist will rise to the top in one step. Readers will read it all at a glance. The evaluation of stars later will also be uneven. It is all because they did not read it carefully. It all depends on how to deal with zombies, ghosts or the content of the harem. It is recommended to strengthen the passive skills of the protagonist. There are a group of people who are born to be his enemies, haha, right? It would be better for the protagonist to crush them all the way than to slowly explore them. Makes it easier for people to integrate into the plot. Finally, the author wrote this book very well, five stars. I hope I won't be invincible all the way, otherwise I would just choose the chapter and read it

The writing is really good, and my IQ is online. It is a book that can be read. The author's logic is clear. Very nice. Please keep up the good work. People update 15 times a day. We don't ask for more. Just ten or eight updates a day. None of the donkeys in the production team can rest like you.

I think the author is handsome, suave, jade trees facing the wind, young and rich, brave and mighty, unparalleled in the world, the best in the universe, lonely master, invulnerable, alone, unparalleled among the people, benevolent, invincible, wise and powerful, brave enough to fight in vain, dragon among men, affectionate and righteous, courageous and colorful, unparalleled in the world, both cool and handsome, and an example of human beings. Honest and trustworthy, generous in conversation, graceful in style, arrogant in spirit, noble in temperament, single aristocrat, handsome and panan, sweeping thousands of armies, talented in many fields, consistent in words, Tao is natural, boundless in heaven and earth, borrowing laws from heaven and earth, endless in meaning, lawless, monstrous in temperament, well-spoken, Ninghan Ocang, doing as he pleases, every word, full of vitality, extraordinary in temperament, why not update Chao Ke more often?

"Life will not always be what you want, it is life with ups and downs. Just like the heartbeat, it has highs and lows, and what we need to do is determination. When a gust of wind blows, the butterflies will float in the wind, but the grass will stand against the wind on the wall, because it has roots. Plants have roots, and people have determination. Determination is rooted in the soil like roots, making you firm and aboveboard."

This type is indeed good. Isn't time travel just for immortality, power, and beauties? Unlike other fantasy cultivators who walk around the world and are ruthlessly sterilized at every turn! If you don't want to enjoy these things, you might as well practice the Sunflower Manual and the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual at the beginning.

During the Mid-Autumn Festival, the moon is round, and your wishes are round and round; your family is reunited and celebrated, and happiness is sweeter than honey; the flowers are bright, the birds are chirping, and your life is happy and smiling; I wish you a round and round life, a happy Mid-Autumn Festival and eternal peace! Big cheers for the author! Generate electricity, give it to you, give it to you! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's not bad. Uncle Jiu's movie is fantasy and humorous. It would be more interesting if more comedy elements could be added.

After reading Chapter 16, the setting of having a system and becoming a disciple will dissuade a large number of readers. There is also a poor setting for plundering once a day. It is recommended to upgrade the system later, add a skill fusion, increase the difficulty of practicing the skills, and try not to plunder the internal power, otherwise the strength will grow too fast and it will be difficult to control the mid-term rhythm. Five stars support originality!

The writing is very good, but you must clearly distinguish the difference between mana, infuriating energy, internal force, and internal energy. Mana, supplementing oneself with the creation of heaven and earth, is to cultivate spiritual energy. Zhenqi, the power of essence and spirit cultivated through visualization, can be replenished through food or rest. Like mana, it is a form of fake cultivation. Internal force is a type of qi, which is blocked from qi and blood. For details, you can refer to a pressure cooker. When you die, you need to disperse the qi, otherwise it will explode. Internal energy is a kind of energy and blood that is developed through long-term training. It is generally divided into external energy and internal energy, that is, bright energy and dark energy. Dark energy can be used to beat a cow across a mountain. The order of power of the 4 types of power is: Mana (depends heavily on spiritual energy and cannot be used against those with high luck) True Qi (can be recovered through visualization, food, and self-recovery with basically no limit, but the level of cultivation is extremely difficult. 10 Years of true energy is not as good as one year of spiritual energy) Internal power (after all, they are just mortals). In the later stage, it is also possible to turn the innate energy into true energy and cultivate the golden elixir of martial arts, but it is basically impossible. Nei Jin (a more powerful mortal) [almost crying] [almost crying]

Come on ✊It's a pretty good book [Learned] Why do I feel like I'm missing a few concubines? [Laughing evilly]

Not bad, not bad. I finished watching it, but the ending was a bit hasty. Overall, it was good [like]

Great writing, great author, keep up the good work! I hope the heroine can be less, not too much

Very nice book! It must be rated five stars

It's pretty cool, I don't know why the rating is so low

It looks pretty good, but it's too short and I can't get enough of it [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Hey, come on, author! It is not easy to write a book about Uncle Jiu. After all, there are too many badly written books. I hope it will get better and better. I will give it five stars.

It's a very nice book, good luck to the author.

Wu Baizhang and below are considered to be the level of novels that have not yet reached elementary school. The author has some conscience and finally finished the book. Come on

Very pretty ah ah ah ah ah ah

The author writes well, so please give it a thumbs up👍

It's okay, but the male protagonist's personality is not very likable. The further back, the more disgusting it becomes.