Genshin Impact: the Demon God Who Joined the Chat Group

The prologue of this book is very well written, unlike many novels that have no idea about time travel [Send Heart] and [Send Heart], which combines the protagonist's previous life and the development direction of the plot very well. It's just that the first few chapters are a bit discouraging for book lovers who want to read the plot quickly and enjoy the novel. They need to read it carefully. I feel that this book should be a slow read. Those who like the author's writing style can read it patiently. The author's plot construction skills are very good and non-toxic. The plot has been advancing steadily. I look forward to the author's updates in the future. Didi ~ Invited to review, this is the first book review, check in. (I'm not a big shot, I'm just an enthusiast)

How can I put it, the part about Yu is inappropriate, and the chat group is connected with Yu, so it has basically no connection with the main plot. Judging from the plot as written now, I feel that it would be better to remove the plot between Yu and the chat group.

This book is not suitable for listening to, everything else is good

It can be very good and beautiful. Good luck to the author! [Working on draft]

Not bad, pretty good-looking

It's very good, but there are too few people watching it, which makes it a pity for the eunuch