The Original God, the Zero-Seat Executive of the Fools

It's very good-looking. Let me tell you why I don't give it five stars. I've read a Genshin Impact fanfic before, and because the score was too high, people said it was a malicious attempt to increase the score, which actually affected the update. I didn't give it five stars not because it doesn't look good, but because it looks so good. This book is very well written, both in terms of writing and plot. But I'm more curious about whether the author will collapse because the progress seems too fast, although it would be more interesting. But writing fast also means... There will be a lack of topics later on. After all, the update speed of Genshin Impact... Enmm, is obvious to all [face covering]. Moreover, Mi Huyou is very good at backstabbing, so terrifying [shocked]. So can the author give you a rough idea of ​​what he will write after the main storyline is finished [exploration], just give me a little hint. For example, daily life, some hidden world tasks, or just free play [laughing] Ah, hey, I almost forgot a question. Didn't the author hold a vote before? Who should I choose? [Sending Hearts]. "Girl" or "Little Lucky Grass King" [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The writing is poor, there's not much to say, it's just that the author tries to balance work and rest, the more cutting-edge the better, the kind that can make people breathless, come on [please update] It's my writing that's bad, not the author's [face covering]

It's really good to read. Among the books in Genshin Impact, only the Instructor, The Fool and this one are my favorites, but there are too few words. Come on, author! [Attention][smile] Also, I beg the heroine to be Colombia [full]

This is the best Genshin Impact fanfic currently. The author must have carefully understood some of the background information of Genshin Impact, and the writing style is super good. My evaluation is: this book can be read with your brain [blowing kiss]

This is definitely the best Genshin Impact fanfic I have ever read. I personally support the heroine being a girl, because he is more suitable for the protagonist. A girl can love the protagonist at all costs, but Nasida still thinks about her people Brothers pushed me up

Full marks for the plot and perfect characterization. The feeling of being cold and ruthless and pretending to be frivolous goes well with the yandere character of a girl. I hope the female lead is a girl😘

I think this male protagonist is the first one who can open a harem, and the female characters also have their own characteristics. Ps: Su Wenyyds

It's very well written. I haven't seen a novel of this level in a long time. I hope the heroine is Nasida or Columbia. I don't really like Ying as the heroine. I feel that Ying is not as well portrayed as the other two. Anyway, the other two are better for getting along with the male protagonist.

I feel like this will be the best Genshin Impact fanfic I've ever read.

I think this book is quite well written, but the heroine is still not very clear. I feel like the author himself doesn't know it. He is waiting for the day when a bunch of people in the comment section start criticizing him and he will know that the book has been approved by the public, and then everyone will be happy. The plot is also quite good, and it will be updated as the game is updated, and when the Grass God comes online, he will also be updated. One thing to say, one thing to say, it's really slow. Is that okay, thin dog?

To be honest, the emotional line is much better than other fan works. Let's not talk about the plot. Just looking at the character's personality image, it seems to be revealed in the game. It cannot be said to be exactly the same, but it has that flavor. I personally suggest that there be some extra chapters to make up for other emotional lines. It will be better. [Laughs][laughs][laughs] Keep up the good work~ Try your best to code~ It's not too much to be refined, more updates but don't be too watery.

The writing is really good, I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. However, if some details were handled better, the performance of this book would be even better. There is still room for improvement. I believe that if I continue writing like this, the results of this book will not be too bad. This plot is very appetizing. Looking forward to the next plot.

I have never seen such a comfortable Genshin Impact fan. The name is not inconsistent with the style, and the writing style is excellent.

It is no exaggeration to say that this book can stand out among Genshin Impact fans in terms of both plot and writing style. The characterization of each character cannot be said to be comprehensive, but some of the main characters are still very delicately portrayed. It is a well-deserved five-star [sending heart] In addition, in the later part of this book, due to the early plot progressing too fast, the timeline may seem confusing, and it is really short. This can be regarded as a fly in the ointment, but it does not affect the overall sense [I learned] Finally, I hope the author can update it quickly. The plot of Fontaine will be released soon. By then, he will be able to update a hundred and eighty chapters to compensate us readers and make us happy [smile]

At present, it seems to be the most worth reading among all the Genshin Impact novels. There is a knife, but the knife is not for the sake of the knife. It can make you feel the same and understand the content. It is also very meaningful and the writing is also very good. It's good, but the author is too short and weak [rolls eyes]

A flesh-and-blood, animated character. Unlike the protagonist in other novels, he is just like a puppet. The trajectory of his life can be completely speculated. The character's heart is not one-sided, and logic and cause and effect are often imposed on him. In addition, let's talk about the story line, which is clear and clear. The protagonist's position as a dead person is well portrayed. Before the rage is removed, he is like a dead person. There is no real emotion at all. All emotions are imitated, and the remaining instinct affects the protagonist's character. The author can slightly activate the protagonist's emotions and slowly let the protagonist reveal his true feelings.

Good! The author is so good at writing! The description of each paragraph and scene is just right. Although it is still poor, it is much better than other brainless articles! (After seeing some fragments, I felt that the author was not simple, but more or less someone who had experienced it) [laughing evilly]

It's really good, high energy throughout, no peeing spots

I have read the best Genshin Impact fanfic. I think that no one will surpass it in the next five years or even ten years (if Genshin Impact is still around). I even feel that 8:6 is maliciously brushed. It is the only book that is 10% in my mind!

Damn, I stayed up all night to read it and now I'm about to die suddenly. But I really like this book. The plot is very good and the description of the fighting is also good. Those who like Genshin Impact fan fiction strongly recommend it to read [top post] [please update]

The text below is not good, so I can only say some common sayings. The author's writing is very good, except that the combat power is a bit weak, but if it is read as a refreshing article, it is still very exciting. I don't know why the rating is so low. The logic is clearly clear, the story is remarkable and some uncommon idioms are used, and the protagonist's setting is pretty good, both good and evil. The low rating may be because someone deliberately set the score low, but please come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง I believe this book will definitely become popular and it will definitely achieve good results in the Genshin Impact circle.

My favorite Genshin Impact novel, no one! ! ! [Shy] I feel that the only shortcoming is that the update is a bit slow, but slow work leads to careful work, and the quality of the plot is quite high, which is very interesting. [Sending Hearts] Dear author, please don't be a eunuch. If this book becomes a eunuch, I will really uninstall Tomato [crying][crying][crying]

Not bad, not bad, very beautiful, it's all on fire Although there are fewer of them, it is surprisingly good-looking (♥∀♥). Unfortunately, too few people have read it. The author must not be a eunuch. . .

I give 6 stars for the writing style, 6 stars for the idea setting, 4 stars for the plot advancement, and 4 stars for the outline construction. It is the best book I have ever read among Genshin Impact fans. The author has carefully studied the game settings, and it is highly praised.

The writing is very nice [adoration], but the updates are slow and a bit short [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Who is the other heroine? 🤔[What]

It's very nice😊, but it's a little too short. Author, if you want to get fucked, fuck him four or five times a day.

A masterpiece, the best fan fiction I have ever seen so far. However, the main plot of this book is still to deal with the laws of heaven, and the remaining countries will have to go, not to mention that the history of Teyvat is not limited to the seven countries. A branch is a branch after all. If Mihuyou hasn't updated it, it probably won't be easy to write, so I won't push for updates, just maintain the quality.

It's so pretty but a little lacking. Can the author write the branch plot between Knox and the Great Mercy Tree King next to be similar to the one in Huzhai Palace? For example, what is hidden in the leaf that the Great Mercy Tree King left in the protagonist's body is what he wants to say to the protagonist. Or if there is anything he wants to say to the protagonist before the Great Mercy Tree King is forgotten by the world. In short, just like Huzhai Palace, let the protagonist suffer the same wear and tear. Five-star praise Gagaduo [shy]

I saw Chapter 25, it's too short, the author [laughs evilly] As long as the characters don't collapse, the plot can be normal and self-consistent, and it doesn't cause stomachache, it's good. Of course, rivers of blood are also fine except where unnecessary [laughter]

It looks good. Only if the protagonist is strong can it be interesting. Otherwise, it would be too boring to be as timid as other fans.