Traveling Through************

Gan, why is the score so low? [Start] Brothers and sisters, someone just made a rude comment in a comment because he saw me saying "I prefer Huahua" in the comment area. I deleted the comment. And here's a reminder, what I'm saying is that I don't hate any singer very much, but I prefer Huahua. If you don't like him, you can leave quietly. If you leave a comment, you will lose face. [Vomit] Also, regardless of whether anyone reads my book, his songs are only part of the content in the book, and there is no need for some caring people to care.

[Four-star defense points will be lost and five stars will be replenished] The author's writing is really good. I love it.

I'm here to do a book review! If you want to read the long review and understand the plot, please come in! [Although I haven't finished reading it yet🌚] First of all, I must say that Gongshou is really sweet! ! ! This attacker hit my sweet spot, woo woo woo! The coquettish, cute and aggrieved CEO poked me hard! ! The relationship between Xu Lizhou (Gong) and Ye Linfeng (Sufferer) is not so vigorous and vigorous, it is a steady flow. Li Zhou is the kind of boss who is not domineering, possessive but not too much. It can be said that he really respects Xiao Yezi, because what attracts him is Xiao Zizi who is shining all over and is also a music madman. He will not stop Xiao Yezi from shining. On the contrary, he is willing to accompany Xiao Yezi to accept the world's blessings under the flashing lights. Xiao Yezi's character is not a weak one, nor does he have a heart-throb physique (so there is no rivalry, just sweet love), but he is always very attentive. He will tolerate Li Zhou, pamper Li Zhou, create surprises and romance for his lover, it can be said that it is a two-way love❤️ Secondly, I would like to make some small suggestions. The author uses dialogue more often in his articles, but I suggest that you can add some modifications after or before the dialogue, such as some details of body movements, so that the reading will be more immersive. There should be more connecting words and sentences in the article, such as "××'s voice suddenly sounded." It would be a bit confusing to write the dialogue directly. In other words, the author writes something like a script. [Weak weak bb] You can also improve the word count if you want to write some modifications (a small comment from someone who is used to the word count) Finally——@when will your T, M, D open a reader group! ! ! Pull me in ah ah ah ah ah I want to be the manager hey! ! ! 🌚I want to see Cheche, you unscrupulous author! ! ! If you don't write it yourself, you can ask the fan wives in the group to write it! ! So hurry up and start a group, I'm sorry to you [I'm about to cry] If you dare to start a group, I'll write a fan to make up for it! ! ! All in all, I personally like the feeling of this book, so when can I take Li Zhou home... [As a controlled person, I would actually say this one day? !

It's very beautiful and the subject matter is very novel. Kudos to the author!

I had originally read all the Genshin Impact updates written by the author, and I just clicked on the homepage to see this article. It took me almost two hours or an hour to finish reading the current one. It can be seen that this is indeed the first time for the author to write about the entertainment industry. It cannot be considered brilliant, but it is also very satisfactory. In my opinion, the author pays more attention to the rendering of the negative side of emotions in this article, so the first impression of this novel is that it gives people a very soft feeling. It is not annoying but on the contrary, it is difficult to arouse the interest of readers, but I still like it very much. At present, our main CPs are Ye Linfeng and Xu Lizhou, but looking at other details, there may be two pairs of deputy CPs. One pair is Sheng Yang and Lin Lin (this pair is not difficult to see, as can be seen from Sheng Yang's complaint and birthday greetings). This pair is basically reliable, and the other pair is Lin Yu and Gu Ling (currently known to be sending people home and chatting all night). This pair is not obvious at the moment, and the author can write it if he wants. At present, I think the author's emotional line is developing a bit fast, and it may be difficult to write something later. According to the author's description, he probably won't write about misunderstandings, so I guess he will focus on the pet aspect in the later stage. Come on, after all, the author's writing is not bad. If he can write this article, it will definitely be of great help to the entertainment industry in the next article.

I hope the author will update it as soon as possible. This article is really great. [Like] [Like] [Adoration] [Admiration] Especially the description of the male protagonist in the article is really super delicate, the feelings are also very gentle, not too impatient, I like it very much. I want to give the author a big shout out.

I think this book is a bit embarrassing, but it's still pretty good despite the embarrassment. Personally, I think Ye Linfeng is a composer and has been exposed to music before. Why can't he create a song by himself, but always borrows it from a real singer? I can't understand this. Another point is that the article says many times that Xu Lizhou was attracted by Ye Linfeng's music, but the music is not the song composed by Ye Linfeng. It feels like a deceptive behavior, and I personally don't think it is very acceptable. (These are some points that I feel are not good about this book, but the author still writes very well. I may be too serious, and I hope that the author's book will be read by more people [love])

It's pretty good. Most of the comments are quite heart-warming and kind, which is a rare good environment in Tomato. They will ask the original author for copyright. The interaction between the protagonists is also okay. In short, except for the protagonist in it who is a fan of Hua Chenyu, and my song about Hua except I really want to love this world. I don't like it very much. There are almost no shortcomings except this. I can only hope that the author uses less of Hua's songs, especially the cancer that caused Hua to be ridiculed. I don't want the protagonist to be ridiculed and the comment area to become noisy. I still quite like the current environment of the comment area.

Very nice Different paths lead to different ideas. Everyone has a different opinion on this book. Anyway, I like this type of book very much. Keep up the great work! ! ! (ง •▽•)ง (Ps: effective in stopping song shortage)

Hey, I finished showing off in one breath. Come on, author [eating melon]

The book is very good, and the subject matter is very novel. I don't know why no one has read it, but I read the author's first Genshin Impact book. Come on, author.

It's really unusual for this book to have a theme of two men with music as the background. The author's writing is also good. It has a sense of flowing water and the emotional line is super sweet. Why give it four stars? It's because I didn't see it The "First Time" chapter failed to pass the review, and in the end we could only get a car exhaust fume. It would be really sad<(ToT)>

It looks good! Their love is so pure! I like people with pure emotions. This is the second novel of this type that I have read. They are all good-looking, but the emotional line is not particularly obvious. It is a career-oriented novel with two male protagonists.

%&I only speak for myself%& The author's writing is quite good. The origin of the song is explained in the article. It is borrowed and not given by the system in other articles (anyway, it is the first time I have seen it). The emotions between two people naturally become soul mates from the moment they fall in love at first sight. The writing is quite delicate and they are very sweet to get along with. I personally think it is a good article^ω^[You are right when you argue, you are right when you say you are, you are all right! !

Ahhhhhh! ! ! O(≧v≦)oI'm so excited. How can I put it this way? Every pair of cps written by the author is very good, but I hope the author can write some extras about those pairs of sub-cps? Really nice

Big cheers for the author!

Very nice! ! Little Ye Zi is so cute, I can't help but want to kick Xu away, but I'm very self-aware, I can't beat him

The writing style can't attract everyone to read. The story can be a little bigger when it rises and falls. Well, the names of any music and songs can be a little more. If there is interaction later, it can be more ambiguous and interactive. Then, just take a look and update it quickly. I just saw a little bit and it was gone~

I read this book a long time ago, but I'm lazy and generally don't like to review it, unless I really have no books to read and the book is super good (not that the author's writing is not good). I'm a bit short of books now, so I'm here to give you a second review (if there are any good books you can recommend to me)

The author never stops writing (da da, hungry, hungry, rice)

Let's just say that this is the first book with two male protagonists that I have added to my bookshelf. None of the books I have read before are to my liking. This book is the first one~

Tomato seems to have only two novels of this type, one is completely composed, and this one seems to be the first novel of this type in which I sing. It is very interesting. I like it very much. I give it four stars. I am afraid that I will add it back after you lose your rating [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The book is quite good, Musical Genius × Musical "Genius" (?) From time travel. Maybe I read it too quickly, so I don't seem to see that Feng Zai is a genius... Sorry! Also, they got together so quickly... Fengzi was regarded as a friend of Mr. Xu, and then they got together slowly. It felt good in the beginning! Maybe because they are all geniuses, their souls resonate (?) But later on, I don't feel like I had the same feeling of ten thousand years at a glance at the beginning... Come on, improve your writing! Also, the hacker and Feng Zai are really... Very easy to fight with, although the hacker may have his own CP? I don't have cancer! Everything is well-founded. Yangyang's face has been seen by Fengzai from the very beginning, (although we haven't had any contact with him...) But it's still good! There is a sentence in it that I can't remember clearly: "After all, you are mine…" The latter seems to mean protecting Feng Zai from being scolded or misunderstood by people on the Internet (?) Alright! The above is all what I said because I ate too much salt. In short, except for the second one (it seems to be only the second one?) Anyway, don't listen to my lies! You should write according to your own ideas! It is your own book after all! These are the characters you created, and they exist because of you (Why did you suddenly start to be sensational?) Anyway, I just said it out of boredom... And then stayed up all night? (Laughing) A little sick, right? (?) Come on, author! Except that we got together a little too fast and I didn't adapt well (don't worry about me here, just improve your writing skills? Probe/) Of course, you can improve it, after all, I don't really care, and because I actually don't like the author too much (personally sick?), So I quite like your book! (I always feel like I said a lot of nonsense, scratching my head/) Then... If there is anything you don't agree with, don't comment on it (I don't deserve it!)... I'll be honest! (Hiding his face and crying) Finally... Come on, author! (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤ And then... Maybe there are some typos? (I don't know either) Don't worry... It's just because I'm too sleepy...

It looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, please give me more, please give me more [Adoration] [Adoration] [Send heart] [Send heart] It's a pity that now that school has started, I can only watch it once a month [crying], ah, sang heart (ﾉД`)

It's really beautiful! ! !

To be honest, I was a little put off by the title of the book at first... I really regret not discovering such a good novel earlier! ! Most of the other novels about music that travel through parallel worlds that I have read are copied directly, and then I can't wait to read one song a day. It's so fast. Really, I love this book.

I like it very much. Yiye Fengzhou's feelings are so sweet and healing. I also like Shengyang very much. I hope he will be happier and happier in another time and space [Blow kiss]

Super pretty! ! You must keep writing! It doesn't matter if we pigeons take a month, we just can't let it go unfinished! ! (^３^)

The writing is very good, I like it very much

The subject matter is novel, the writing is good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating. I recommend reading it, but it is not my cup of tea. I will support the author by giving it four stars. Bye bye.