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Shen Qi is really my favorite male protagonist that Tomato has ever seen. He is good, pure and virtuous, paranoid but not willing to hurt the female protagonist at all. He has more forced hobbies than the ordinary yandere. There are so many authors on Qiuqiu. I really want to watch it. I hope that the male protagonist will have more scenes and the series will be longer. The author really wrote it very well

Help, I really love this male protagonist! ! ! (//∇//)(//∇//)(//∇//) Good and awesome. It's so heartbreaking ಥ_ಥThe author is, can you please be sweeter later? I really want to see little Shen Qi happy and shy (/ω＼)

Very beautiful, the emotional description is very delicate The author portrays the character of Shen Qi very well. He is humble and cautious in front of his moon, but he is also profound. Under the wind, flowers, snow and moon of the world, he said that with the moon in his heart, he could no longer see other scenery; when he accidentally injured Yuezheng, he broke his hand without hesitation; when Yuezheng ran towards him, he said that he embraced his moon and owned the whole world; When Yuezheng disappeared, he desperately begged Gu Qing, "Can you give her back to me..." I think this is the biggest crying point in the whole story for me. Shen Qi just wanted to hold on to the warmth in his life. He only had Yuezheng, and just wanted to keep his moon.

I really like this book. It's better than some 9-rated books. I don't understand why the rating is so low. I just want to say that I finished it after I really felt it. It seemed like I hadn't read enough. [Crying] When I saw the ending, I was thinking: Is this the end? Is this the end? ... I always feel that their story is not over yet [almost crying] My suggestion for this book is that if the copy is written a little more, it will be more complete. [Sending my heart] I really like the copy of this book. ——When I saw the ending, I always felt that something was missing. After thinking about it, I realized that it was because I couldn't let it go.

Fried Chicken is so good, wow wow, especially the prison part [adoration][adoration][adoration], hey hey hey, I've finished watching it, it's so good I almost forgot to rate it [laughing awkwardly] Hahahahahahahaha, now rate it [KISS][KISS][KISS] Emma, I got the wrong book [facepalm], but this one is also very good.

This book is really amazing [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Both the front copy and the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the back are very clever, and the writing is also very good [note] [note] [note] [note] Yuezheng accidentally got into trouble because she stayed up late reading a novel. Death traveled to a world where the male and female protagonists of the sadistic novel were in love. She helped the male and female protagonists fall in love according to the plot [cool] [cool]. She also saved the half-demon Shen Qi. From then on, Shen Qi regarded Xiao Yuezheng as the light in his heart. After going through a series of dungeons, the male and female protagonists successfully got together. Xiao Yuezheng also fell in love with Shen Qi [shy] [shy] [shy] But due to a series of reasons, Xiao Yuezheng still left Shen Qi [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Finally found out that she traveled into a fanfic, not the original book, and later returned to this world to redeem his lover [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Some details still need to be explored by yourself. I recommend everyone to read this book together [love] [love] [love] Recommendation index:★★★★★

This is the first novel I have read on Tomato. This book is really in line with my taste. I like to see the male protagonist jealous, and I also like the female protagonist's character. The plot is not procrastinating (this is very important, because I am impatient and easily give up on books). I am looking forward to the author's new book!

Pure abandonment of my dishes~ Shen Qi, Chen Qi, look at me~ I really like Shen Qi~ Come on, Tangtang, your writing style is very good and your image is very three-dimensional. I'm optimistic about you~ Mmm~

It's so good. I stayed up all night to finish it, and I felt that everyone's characters were very vivid. The male protagonist's father was miserable, and the male protagonist was also very unlucky, but he met the female protagonist and got redemption. It's one of the few books in Tomato that I didn't think the plot was cliche, and I could stay up late to follow it. It's just a little short. I love reading short novels, so I felt that it was a bit unfinished~~😋😋😋😋😋 But I really enjoyed reading it! ! ! ! Don't miss it if you pass by! ! You will definitely not lose money by investing in shares~~

It can be seen that the senses are still very good now. The heroine is cute and funny, not making trouble, and is a lovable little fox. The hero is a paranoid and loyal dog, but his paranoia will not completely hurt the heroine or the people around her. The most extreme thing so far is blowing up the hero's boat hahaha. This degree is very well controlled. After all, some possessiveness makes me feel a little disgusting, such as Ruoxue, who looks very physically uncomfortable. The original male and female protagonists are very good. Although the original male protagonist is really dull, he is a sadistic male protagonist after all. I can understand it. It is a very interesting story. I look forward to the author's next story.

This book is the author's third book. I have read the first two. Generally speaking, the author has been making progress in all aspects, and the details are getting better and better. All in all, this book is still great, and the plot is also very exciting and compact. It is worth reading.

Wow, ah, it's so beautiful. The author's writing is so wonderful. It's over before I've seen enough, woo woo woo... But I still wish Shen Qi and Yue Zheng a happy reunion, a long and prosperous life, and a son soon! Finished spreading flowers! ! ! There is a pig in the sky wish

The whole story is well written, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not very abrupt. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist because of her warmth and equal treatment of him. The female protagonist is also attracted by the fact that the male protagonist protects the female protagonist many times in daily interactions. And I really like the character of the male protagonist who has low self-esteem but is very possessive, but the male protagonist is talkative and always loves to mess around. I think [laughing][laughing] This is a two-parter couple developing together, and the other couple is also very good at fighting. They have more scenes, but I don't think they will take the limelight of the main cp at all. However, the later articles were a bit rushed and lacked details, but this kind of writing is really good, so I'll give it a 5.

Like! ! I especially like the little idea of ​​the male protagonist poking inside. He is so jealous that he goes crazy when he sees the female protagonist but behaves well. The male protagonist is sensitive, has low self-esteem and is suspicious. He always repeatedly confirms with the female protagonist whether she likes him. Later, when he becomes a demon, he searches the whole world and searches for the female protagonist like crazy, thinking that he must punish her if he finds her. But when the heroine really came back, the hero was reluctant to even let her clean the room. He didn't want to see her get hurt at all. The hero regarded the heroine as the bright moon in the sky that should not be approached, sacred and should not be profaned [Adoration] [Adoration] I like this setting very much! !

First time reviewing a book From the perspective of character creation: I feel that the author created the characters perfectly. The original male and female protagonists are twisted. Everyone has their own advantages and disadvantages. ① First of all, let's talk about Shen Qi. He respects the heroine very much. What impressed me most is that the author used the story of "Cowherd and Weaver Girl" to not only reflect Shen Qi's character. Paranoid, it also gives a person a very deep concept. You can't force someone to love someone, but you can't bear to leave her in your heart. The character created by the author is really full, and he is also a very innocent person. In the early and middle stages, the most he can do is hold hands and kiss. It is really very well created! ② Judging from Yuezheng, she is really a bit slow and cute heroine, but I think she is really cute. She was slow because she didn't realize that the hero liked him earlier, but it was really because she didn't realize that there was a little misunderstanding mixed in. The plot is more exciting, and I love the heroine very much! And I also got along very well with the original heroine, and there was no so-called female rivalry. At that time, I remember there was a scene where a monster wanted to bully the heroine. The heroine used her last mana not to attack the monster, but to attack herself. I really felt that the heroine was created very well. Chatting with the monster to waste time was also a particularly wise choice. ③ Other characters were also portrayed very well, and there were extras about other characters. Each character was very vivid and vivid. Second, from the plot point of view: I feel that the plot created in this article is quite good. I have read many books. Indeed, this plot is the first time I have seen it. It is relatively novel. I have read it before, and some said it was borrowed from other books, so this plot is particularly novel. There is no female competition in this article, trying to provoke men and women. The people who are in the main relationship are all mentioned in one or two sentences, and they are all scared away by the male protagonist>ᴗoಣI really like it very much, because sometimes I might be a little upset when I see people who provoke the relationship between the male and female protagonists while reading, and the male and female protagonists have high IQs, and there are not too many misunderstandings in the middle. I really like it˃ 𖥦 ˂ Come on, author! Really highly recommend this book!

It's nice to watch, but it's too short. The male and female protagonists are very good, but it lacks description, so it feels too fast and a bit short. If the descriptions are more detailed, there are more environments, descriptions that enhance the atmosphere, and then the characters' demeanor and psychological appearance are described in detail, and the plot copy has more twists and turns, and there are more fighting scenes, I think it can be published directly, no less than Black Lotus, really. In fact, the main reason is that I feel that the author has written too quickly and lacks too many detailed descriptions. The plot of the copy needs to add many twists and changes. There is no such big scene description. You can combine the copy with the emotional line, such as the three books of Black Lotus, Lu Zhiyao and Xie Wuyan. This is very well written and very easy to empathize with. If the author can do what I said, he can really publish a book! I completely think that the author is definitely capable of writing this.

This book is really wonderful. Some make me laugh, and some make me cry. Shen Qi is really miserable, and so is his father. His father likes Shen Qi, but Shen Qi's mother does not. She only loves herself, but fortunately Shen Zai met Xiao Yuezheng. Shen Qi's love is humble, sincere, and cautious. Yuezheng also loves Shen Qi and makes him feel at ease. There are also many cute characters and several couples in it. It's really well written! I hope there will be a sequel [almost crying]

Super super pretty! But the only unhappiness was with Shen Qi's parents. What a good person Shen Qi's father was, but... Ended up being killed by his Shen Qi's mother! I thought they had something to do with Shen Qi [crying] [crying] But it's still very interesting, good luck to the author! [Praise]

The writing is okay, but the author needs to make more progress. Although he pays attention to the gradual progress of the relationship, the male protagonist is a bit too insecure. In some places, it feels like things happened too suddenly and ended quickly. And it is not difficult for me to accept the fact that Lily is written in the romance. 😂😂 Then the love between parents happened too fast, so I won't say too much, so as not to cause the author a lot of internal friction. Overall, the writing is not bad, but it needs a little detail. I hope the author will do the next step and more people will like it. I wish it a blast.

Very good, Xin Tang, come on. (๑> <๑) Baby, you are so diligent in updating and your writing style is also very good. It's great (ง •̀_•́)ง

A very touching story. Although it was short, it left a deep impression on my heart. The mutual redemption between Yue Zheng and Shen Qi, Shen Qi has been working hard to get close to Yue Zheng, Yue Zheng is not as black and white as Gu Qing, and has always been very gentle to Shen Qi, teaching him what likes and what love is, and they grow together. Although the process of growing up is a bit painful, the ups and downs really create vivid characters. He wrote that he wanted to marry her and hoped that he would be the one to tie her hair and paint her eyebrows in the future. Fortunately, he finally got his wish. I hope they live happily in a world unknown to us. [Love][love] I hope everyone can be happy too [code live] [code live]

It was quite ordinary at first, trivial and ink-filled, but after reading it, I felt that it should be like this. There is no particularly gorgeous language, but I like it and recommend it. October 25, 2022 05:56 SRG(zxm) is here for a visit

The writing was a bit rushed. I felt that the male and female protagonists were too anxious at the end, and there was not much plot. I felt that only one-third of the emotional scenes were described, and there was something missing. There was a bit of ups and downs. . The dedication and mood of the male protagonist should be matched by that of the female protagonist. In short, it's not nearly as popular. I look forward to better works.

I really like this book. The only flaw is that the original male and female protagonists are a bit disgusted. It seems that they were created just to show their affection. But ignoring these small details, it is still very sweet. The male protagonist was very inferior in the early stage, and the female protagonist warmed him like a little sun. Then because of the plot, she had to get close to the original male protagonist. Therefore, the biggest misunderstanding of this book came about [smile]. The female protagonist was forced to offline in the middle. It was really easy to cry. [Crying] Then the male protagonist became a demon and ordered that no red be allowed to appear. There can't be a dessert shop because these are what the heroine likes when she exists. But after the heroine appears, she doesn't abuse any of them. The hero's hatred is reduced by the heroine in a few words [laughing] (actually hating is the same as not hating [laughing]) Mainly because Shen Xiaoqi really fell in love with A Zheng. The last step is the wedding bridal chamber. There is very little abuse in the whole process. Mainly because the male protagonist likes love and brainstorming. He is a bit lacking in love (here is not a derogatory term), but there is a sixth child among them. What is the imprint that will appear when two people are in love? The male protagonist was always frightened. Fortunately, the heroine's uncle finally explained that Shen Xiaoqi and Azheng will always be happy, and I wish you happiness too [top post] [full]

This book is so beautiful. The two-way love is so perfect. I hope A Qi and A Zheng will be happy together forever. I feel like I haven't read enough. The two lovely twins haven't been born yet. It's a bit regretful [I'm about to cry]

I read it in one go. It's really good. Both the male protagonist and the male protagonist are very innocent in this book. The male protagonist will be so happy that he will laugh when he takes the pen with the residual warmth in the female protagonist's palm. [Adoration] [Adoration] There are many copies in the front, which are also a warming agent for the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Every time there is danger, the male protagonist will rush to the female protagonist's side in time to protect the female protagonist. The sense of security is immediately full. However, the female protagonist disappears later, and the male protagonist successfully darkens into a demon. The obedient and innocent little milk dog also becomes yandere. Maybe it is a personal preference. I like the character Shen Qi very much. Although sometimes he is paranoid and yandere, he loves to drop pearls! ! ! He is just a little crybaby, and he is super jealous, possessive, and obsessive about details. [As the saying goes: Men's tears are women's stimulants.] I feel like I'm a little perverted. Hehehe. The male protagonist's initial crush is really a bit humble. In addition, he is very sensitive himself. Maybe sisters who have experienced crushes will feel the same. The female protagonist is like the "moon" in the male protagonist's heart. Okay, without further ado, bye~~~

After reading it, I can only say that it is very interesting. It can be said that it is the best yandere novel I have ever read on Tomato [crying] It is too short and not enough to read. Can the author make a sequel? [Blowing kiss]

It's so sweet, I love you so much. In the early stage, the male protagonist's love was humble because of his background, but in the later stage, he turned into paranoid [shy]. The male protagonist is paranoid and possessive. He even makes the female protagonist jealous when she touches Phoenix's head. The female protagonist is cute, lively and elegant. The moon in the male protagonist's heart. He married his moon 2024.6.30

It's very good-looking, and the male protagonist is so innocent! ! [Adoration] There are a lot of misunderstandings, many people don't open their mouths, they have to wait until things get serious before explaining [Grief] The plot is quite good, friends who are in the book world can read it

The plot of this book is compact, not procrastinating, and not too long. It took me two days to read it. There are three pairs of CPs in this book, and each pair is super sweet and to my liking! I also like the description of the emotional line, the water flows slowly and everything feels just right. The writing has its own style, and I quite like this style of writing! Unfortunately, what makes me a little disappointed is that the work is slightly mixed, which I don't quite accept. All in all, it's a bookish place to be in! If you can tolerate a slight meltdown, jump in! If you don't accept it, please proceed with caution! ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆