The Lost Fairy Tale

How can I put it this way? The story of this book is quite good. I read the story of the Mermaid Princess. It is very innovative and I like it very much. However, the article is a bit messy and I can't quite understand the meaning of some words. The story is very exciting. It would be better if the writing style can be improved. It is not easy for the author to write. Please give five stars to support the author! 💕💕

I personally feel it's pretty good