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The Moment the Boy's Mask Was Shot Down by the Empress, the Empress Trembled All Over.
The moment the boy's mask was shot down by the empress, the empress trembled all over: "Husband, husband?"
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Traveling Through the Original God and the Skirmishers Together
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Not bad. It is recommended that the author should use quotation marks to mark the words spoken by the character. The words spoken by the system and the rewards issued should be marked with different quotation marks from the character, so that the character and the system can be clearly distinguished [laughs]. There is also the issue of punctuation. There are too many periods in one chapter. Unfinished sentences should be separated by commas so that they don't look too weird. (The author's idea is quite good [laughs], come on [sending my heart])
Very well written [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Come on!