Martial Arts******

It has the flavor of martial arts, magical skills, adventures, young knights, pretty girls, great!

Very good, just a little lacking

Great book! Worth a look!

Personally, I think it's good. It's not a mindless novel, but it's still enjoyable. The writing is good and those who like martial arts can stay and take a look. You won't be disappointed after thinking about it!

Except for the confusing beginning, the plot and writing are good.

Not bad, what about Chapter 6?

Very good, but you have to be responsible when you get on it. If you don't get involved, there will be no follow-up.

This novel is a cut-off version, and the original version has color. I remember that the protagonist was tortured in the early stage, and there seemed to be a plot. When he met a little boss on a carriage, he bluffed, and used the name of someone with whom the heroine had connections to scare away the little boss.

This is a good book, the description of the fighting scenes and the emotional portrayal of the characters are good. It's just that the connection between the stories is a bit lacking. Hurry up and open a fan group

This has been written since ancient times. The world structure is too macroscopic and difficult to write about! ! ! ! Come on, author💪.

It's really well written, the writing style is very good, it's a bit like the martial arts story of Demon Sword. Come on, author [like] The whole plot flows smoothly and is very comfortable. The writing is concise, each character is vividly portrayed, and the world view is also very complete. The only shortcoming is that I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is too lustful, and the character design is really not likable. I feel that anyone who comes is welcome as long as she is beautiful. Emotionally, it gives people the impression that I like you because you are good-looking. I hope the description of the emotional scenes can be more delicate. But the harem novel is still acceptable. Overall, it is really a fine novel!

Facts have proved that this Liu Bei article changed the name and deleted most of the scenes, but it can still attract people. Haha, but are you the author killcarr? Many people still don't know what the original text is, it's "The Legend of Splendid Rivers and Mountains"

It's a very good book. It's okay. The author will keep up the good work.

I don't know why the rating is so low. To be honest, this book is already better than many 9-rated books.

Good book, it's hard to find this kind of martial arts in Tomato. Many authors are only half-baked and can't even write a sentence. They also write martial arts and fantasy, which is impossible to read. This is very good, at least there are no mistakes in wording or sentence making. It was very smooth to read from beginning to end.

I finally finished reading it without skipping chapters. For old bookworms, this book is really well written. It is obvious that the author has written it carefully and his writing style is also top-notch. If the traffic is high, this work is likely to become a hit. Some of the flaws are (personal opinion). The plot framework design and story direction in the middle and later stages are not very good. Especially when the article is 90% progress, it is obvious that the author wants to end the story and writes it in a hurry.

The writing is very good, but they should be more delicate when calling each other's names. The father asked how to call his daughter's full name. Senior brothers and junior sisters can call each other senior brother and junior sister. Don't always call each other by their first names. Friends call each other brother Li. Anyway, just write these carefully.

Five-star book! ! ! [Like] [Like] The author's writing is very good, and he describes many environments very well, and he also drives a lot [Adoration] [Adoration] The only shortcoming is that Tang Bingyun and Bu Feiyan are not included in the main text, but they are added in the extras, which is pretty good. In short, this is a five-star good book! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

The author's writing is okay, but some paragraphs are repetitive. I don't know if the author is careless. Overall, it's okay. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time.

Great book, I have collected it. Martial Arts and Harem. I haven't seen such an exciting martial arts novel for a long time. It's just that there are too few and it's not enough to read.

It has the flavor of martial arts novels such as "Zhu Xian Qing Yun Zhi". I haven't seen such novels for a long time. The author's writing style is very good and very good.

The plot of this book has a familiar feel. I have read a novel called "The Wind on the Ancient Road" before, and it feels a bit similar in some places, but that novel seems to be unfinished. Your writing is wonderful, I hope it won't be unfinished!

It's so beautiful, my posture has improved, but it's a bit lacking [grievance]

It's really good. It's like the shining golden sand I dug out from a pile of shit. I'm so touched. I feel like I've returned to the peak period of martial arts novels [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I'm afraid the author may not have just landed. . . . [Cover face][cover face]

This book is good, I'd love to read it.

Good! Appreciate both refined and popular tastes.

Apart from the fact that the main character meets and falls in love with each other, everything is pretty good.

Although the ending is hasty, the extra story is really good

The author's literary skills are indeed very high, but he must be able to calm down and read. As someone who is used to reading cool articles in the current system, I feel that the words are a bit too dense. I hope the author can borrow some of the better cool articles to improve them, and save them first until they have 400,000 words before reading.