JOJO: My Heart and My Thoughts Are All About Going Home

Comfort yourself.

This JOJO article is better than anything I searched for, but the main character doesn't have many scenes in the first 100 chapters. In addition to his own books, the author's bookshelf contains four major classics on psychology, which seems a bit scary. I look forward to the author's next work.

The book is very good. There are relatively few JOJO fanfics and even fewer excellent ones. This one is quite good. It does not intentionally damage the original work too much. The framework of the story is still based on the original work, but the protagonist is inserted. The protagonist's role is too small. The lines and actions are completely based on the original work. I can't say water. After all, it is very energy-consuming to restore like this. My My suggestion is that the protagonist can have more roles. It is good to restore the original work, but it can be changed but try not to make it too big. You can write more daily routines or other things for the characters instead of copying them exactly as in the original work. You can add more jokes or daily conversations. If it weren't for the extra protagonist, I would even think it was JOJO's "original novel". My suggestion is to give the protagonist more roles. You can follow the original story outline, but it doesn't have to be exactly the same. For example, you can have more conversation content and small side stories, such as removing Huahua's flesh buds and going to the airport the next day. In the blank afternoon and evening time, you can have more conversation content or more content about going to the store to buy travel supplies. Don't be too rigid. That can only ensure that the book is not ugly but not good. If the author thinks that he can't handle the pitfalls caused by over-revising the story, just write about daily life instead of almost changing the main line like others. The 50-day trip and the content of the conversation between the protagonists and the things they have experienced will definitely not be the same. Just like in the original manga, there are only these. The author can fill in the blanks in the middle, and omit content. In comics and animations, the intervals between each chapter and each episode are completely blank time. These can be used as writing content, which can not only extend the length of the book, but also add more plots that JO chefs love to read. The above are my suggestions. I hope they can be seen by the author. I really hope that JOJO will have more good fanfics, that's why I say so much. If there are brothers who can read this, please help me.

Boxers, boxers. You are too short

When I first saw that he was DIO's brother, I thought he would have feelings for DIO, but I didn't expect him to be so cruel. It's really in my heart. I just want to go home.

The author's writing is still very good, and the vivid descriptions are just like the original work. I hope the author can increase the role of the protagonist, otherwise I might as well watch it again without waiting for the author to update If the author adds more presence to the protagonist, the author's writing style would still be good. The score is 5.6, I feel sad. Author, please repent (no mercy) This is my last five stars! Author! You must receive it!

"JOJO: My heart and my thoughts are all about going home", also known as "Jojo's Bizarre Adventure" novel version

At first I just thought your writing was good and your ideas were interesting, until I saw your bookshelf

It's like watching the text version of JOJO again

I feel like I'm reading the original work

It's okay, but after becoming a jo-level creature, I have a second personality, which I don't like very much (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

The whole book is very good, but I suggest you read it in order if you have seen the original film and look for the chapters where the protagonist is. If you have not seen the original film, I suggest you read it in order and it is best not to skip.

Has the protagonist's second stand-in been planned? The author is great

It can also be the same as the original work written by the author.

It's pretty good-looking, and the writing is good, but at least give the protagonist a little role, and don't keep writing it the same as the original novel.

What should I say? If you haven't watched or finished Jojo, you can watch it for free. The main character has too few roles, but it's the first time-travel story I've seen that returns to the original world.

I think it's okay. After all, it's hard to write good Jojo articles, so this is pretty good. At least it's better than those who write other things under the name Jojo.

Didn't I rate it?

Just think of it as a second brush of the original [eating melon]

@ Live in the sea of ​​shrimps @ I like the author

In the sixth part, the protagonist resurrects DIO to become a lawyer [Thoughts]

I think it's pretty good

Feeling a bit half-baked

Why doesn't the protagonist find the arrow first?

The front is okay, but the rear is a bit fast, but overall it's pretty good. I'll give it four stars.

Although the plot is a bit messy at times, it's generally pretty good [Like][Like]

It's okay, but most of it is based on the original work, and the protagonist has too few roles. I haven't finished watching the second part just now, but the third part seems to have a lot of scenes.

After reading it, the ending is pretty good, and it's worth pursuing me for so long.

Come on come on come on come on

Very exciting, I like it very much