A Smile That Captivates the City: The All-Round Expert

This book is well written and there is nothing wrong with the plot. There is no problem with the character. The writing is okay, and the plot progresses very comfortably. There is no sudden advance, just little details. The plot where the heroine knows the identity of the protagonist is probably around the time of the National Heroic Couple Competition. Well deserved five stars I'm already disgusted. It's okay to have an aunt and her family come out. Just clean it up. But the more you write, the worse it gets. Are you kidding me about today's two new chapters? What are your three views? The woman's son provoked and beat others first. The cousin was in self-defense. So what if he was too defensive? Shouldn't he be solely responsible? Can the male protagonist still give them 200,000? How could a character like the male protagonist be able to give the other party 200,000 in this situation? Helping the tyrants to do evil? Then the extra tens of thousands of dollars can be safely given to the heroine's aunt? Isn't the male protagonist a fool? If I write it this way, I have also changed the previous character design. The fool's family, except the heroine's family, are all fools. Isn't it just disgusting to write like this? It's not a question of whether I'm good at writing about daily life or not. We have different views. If the male protagonist doesn't give the woman a slap in the face, it will be fine, and he can still lose money. Isn't it the women's fault in this matter? He was the first to provoke and strike first, and he took all of it, but my cousin had to pay his mother 200,000 for overdefending? Nausea

It's worth reading. It's much better than the messy elements of the previous book.

Chapter 11 five-star praise. Although it's just a little bit, you can see that it's much better than the previous one, and it's a lot better than the last one. Come on😊

The writing is indeed much better than the previous one.

This book is well written so far. The author can clearly express Ling Feng's vague and restrained feelings for Bei Weiwei, and the details in the game are also well described. I hope the author can maintain it. Come on 😄

The interaction between the male and female protagonists is much clearer than the previous one, so it doesn't have to waver again later.

The first part has the passion and friendship of e-sports, and the second part is also very sweet. But the only drawback is that the middle part around 90-130 is very bland and boring. Come on^0^~

That's it, that's it, that's it. Update soon!!! Good looking, great praise

It's very beautiful. The author will update it quickly and quickly. Don't be lazy [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

I won't comment on the plot, but the male protagonist has a very good feeling for the female protagonist. I feel the same way, but I am more ordinary. When I meet someone I like, I can only let go. No matter how firm the vows or deep feelings are, I have to bow my head in the face of reality.