The Male Soldiers Company Series: A Dream Begins

In the first part, I invested a lot and wanted to change a lot. This was the original intention. It's a pity that the first time, I didn't handle it well and didn't write it well. I just wanted to make up for my regret after reading it. I didn't expect everyone to buy it, but even if they didn't, it wouldn't be so malicious. Alas... I was still too naive. After all, I was affected by malicious intentions. My thoughts were broken and my thoughts were gone. So that later, The cold is gone, and so is Moi, Too much malicious influence. Breaking through barriers and confusion continues, Yin, Yang, Yuanshi (universe) I wonder if I can write it back again.

What is the role of this protagonist?

Can I understand it this way? This is a closed loop. Later, Kesha lost herself, and Leng took her place and became Kesha. It started all over again, and it was restarted again and again. Kesha talked to the protagonist again and again, and the protagonist felt close to Kesha. It comes from this, and the previous Leng didn't know it, so he fell in love with the protagonist in reincarnations and created the current Kesha. It feels very brain-burning and really good. It is not easy to understand like others. This requires not skipping chapters, reading it bit by bit, writing it down, and integrating it to understand it.

It's pretty good. Don't make it worse as you write more. I hope it gets better as you write more. The author's protagonist's genes are almost given out, because travelers should know that there is a dark plane, and those who can enter their own dark plane can check it.

As long as there is no harem, it will be fine, author, come on

The plot is still very reasonable and looks good. Come on

Come on, come on, come on

I feel pretty good, the protagonist seems to be witnessing

Not bad, but the ending of the last part is a bit weird. I hope you can add some extras.

Damn it ah ah ah ah