National Games: Teammates Are Three Gangsters, Bai Yuekui Collapses

Not bad, I hope you can strengthen those three later. Not very good

Overall, this book is pretty good. After all, it is quite to my liking. However, the main reasons are that there are too many dialogues between the audience and the word count, which is a bit watered down. Also, the three characters, except Boss Bai, don't have much plot. I will give it a 5-star rating and wait and see. After all, it is quite to my liking. Good cheers, author. I can't bear to watch it, really (urgent). It's a common problem in national history. I've translated these hundreds of thousands of words. Except for some fighting scenes, I've translated them all. I'm about to vomit. Please, please don't let the country fight against each other again, and don't make this common mistake again. It's not easy to see. This is a book that prevents me from reading. It is so long-winded that I almost vomit (uncomfortable). There are also a group of people who are looking for me all day long to find ways to make money. I am not a junkie. If you have nothing to do with me, if you want to confront me, I will accompany you. I just watched one that looked relatively good to me, okay? If I see someone come to me again and ask for channels, I will directly complain! (I am a quality person)

Come on, there are too many characters in the threesome scenes. The key is the national destiny, not the comments in the live broadcast room.

It's good to watch, but it's too watery. I dragged the first picture to the eighth picture before entering the forbidden area. There are very few scenes with the protagonist, and most of them are complaints from the audience or scoldings from other countries. Especially in chapter 27, opening a treasure chest is half a chapter. I hope it won't be so watery in the future. In the past, my comments were my comments. If there is anything wrong, everyone can tell me. Come on, author.

The three of them should have more scenes. It feels like the audience keeps looking down on the old man and they are a little angry.

Can you give the protagonist a little more atmosphere? Whose book is it about? No, I actually made a typo. No, no, I was like this because I was overworked and read other books. Yes, yes, it must be like this. I definitely didn't defend myself because I didn't read it after typing the voice input, which led to the typo.

In terms of general rationality, it is indeed good, but some details in the book are really poor and there is still a lot of room for improvement. The plot is a bit cliched and the main character in the book has few roles, and there is an obvious plot that lowers the wits. However, the protagonist's appearance is few, which avoids the collapse of the character.

There are too many comments from the author and the audience. Give three more people a chance. When will they take action?

This book is very good except for the water

Why is there a clip in the middle of the audience playing Genshin Impact? If there is Genshin Impact in the novel you write, the Emperor (the protagonist) will definitely be recognized. You have a bug. I hope the author can correct it.

I feel like we can reduce the amount of comments from the audience a little bit. It feels a bit cliche and similar to what I've seen before. I've seen other ones and the plot development is almost the same.

I have never played the game Genshin Impact, and my understanding of him is limited to what my classmates said, but I felt very comfortable reading it. I don't know why. This book seems very good to me, and it is one of the few books I can read about Genshin Impact. I don't know if his character has collapsed, but comfort is the most important thing. And I don't know much about him, including Bai Yuekui, but as long as I enjoy reading it, there is no need to care so much. You read a book just to relax and have fun. The value of a book to you is not based on its rating, but whether it can bring you happiness. Just like a book, no matter how high its rating is, I just don't like it. Some books have low ratings, but I like them. This is the original intention of reading a book, to bring yourself joy, and to make yourself angry half to death by reading a book. There is no need. Therefore, I hope the author can continue writing. There is no need to care about other people's opinions. Write your own. I hope this book will not be unfinished. As long as this book is not unfinished, I will definitely read it (maybe it will be for nothing [laughter]) Come on, great author! ! !

When will the three of them show their high strength?

Why is this emperor better at fishing than my Wendy! ! !

The character of the protagonist is very well developed, and he is very emperor. It is much better than the ones I have seen before that played the role of emperor in name but behaved very differently. It's just too little and not enough to read. The author should do more to make sure it doesn't end badly. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Will the author's liver explode after reading four books?

Although it is very beautiful. But there are too few articles. Be prepared to raise it for a short period of time.

I hope there can be more roles for the protagonist

It is now the year 3022, and I am cleaning the ancestral hall alone. The ancestral hall in my hometown is still the same as before. Even though it has been renovated countless times, the style of a thousand years ago still shows a trace of simplicity and elegance. Grandpa said that the ancestral hall in his hometown is called "Zhai". It is the place where the ancestor lived all his life 1,000 years ago. Every tile, every comic, and every figure there is an antique with a history of thousands of years. Despite the vicissitudes of life, those old objects have not been thrown away after all. They are kept quietly and well preserved, as if the ancestors will return to the house one day and tell us the meaning of each antique. The most precious thing in the room is an old mobile phone placed in the center of the desk. It was an object from a thousand years ago, but has now been eliminated. Even the oldest man has forgotten how to use it. He only vaguely knows that it once ruled an era. Legend has it that when our ancestor was dying, he could not close his eyes while holding his mobile phone, as if he wanted to explain something. However, he was already weak in his old age and could not explain it. Only this mobile phone was left, which has been enshrined for generations. I clean the ancestral hall alone. The renovated ancestral hall is still the same as it was a thousand years ago. Suddenly, there was a vibrating sound on the desk. I threw down the sweeper and rushed over. I saw the dark screen gradually light up, and a few big words appeared - The old man has taken action! ! ! ! !

It's too short. Can you go faster? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Then can the person with a lower score first climb?

Update faster! Overall, the writing is quite good, but it still feels very short!

The subject matter is novel and well written. Author, the only shortcoming of your book is that it is too short. Hurry up and update more, more updates will make you popular. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

There's not much to say. The author's writing is very good. ^_^♪The disadvantage is that the update is very slow, about two chapters a day. Anyway, it's because he updates so slowly that I'm particularly bothered. I not only read this book, but also read dozens or even dozens of books at the same time.

I think the author wants to take his time step by step. It's true that the pace is slow, but if it's good to read, there are benefits to slow pace. Come on, take your time. For now, I'm very optimistic about this book. Although the rating is not high, I still hope that I can continue to write it to the end [a better ending] Everyone has different tastes. I might be a little too wet. It's probably my first time. I'll try to practice more in the future and try to write a better plot.

Protagonist, hurry up and take action, if you can't endure the five-star installment payment anymore [grievance]

... The author's ideas in this book are very good and attractive, but some aspects are difficult! Some of the descriptions are too exaggerated, some are not realistic, and there are very few descriptions of the protagonist group. They are all scoldings from netizens, which made me feel a little alienated... Author, keep up the good work! I read a few more chapters, so...

Hurry up and update, the author is great, just wait for Lord Yan's heavenly movements [Cool][Cool][Cool]

The author writes very well, I look forward to Zhongli taking action!

Very beautiful, no matter how you say it, it's very good👍👍

Learn to cherish the people around you and give them more tenderness, because you never know which tomorrow or accident will come first.