Ultraman: Forcefully Kissing Carmilla at the Beginning

It has a single female protagonist, no system, and is very different from the male protagonist in the original work (personally, I think the time-travel one is fused with the original one). Generally speaking, it satisfies my taste. Although the writing in the first few chapters is not very good, it seems to have improved a lot after so many chapters! Thousands of words can be condensed into one sentence - no one can write Teliga better than Hisaya Naoki [Like]

It's very special and looks better than the original TV.

I originally thought it was an embarrassing time-travel stallion novel, but it was completely different from what I thought. Instead, the more I read, the more I read it. Keep up the good work, author. I stayed up until 12 o'clock while reading this book. Author, you must be worthy of my staying up all night. Keep up the good work.

It's better than Naoki Kuya's gzz (a must for Ultra fan fiction). The disadvantage is that the twenty years that the protagonist has traveled through are not much different from the original Kengo. There are also many advantages. It's more of a daily Ultra fanfic, the highlight is the relationship between the protagonist and Carmilla [laughter]

This is the Teliga I want to see, it's so comfortable! ! And I hope that the power of the dark Teliga and the evil Teliga will belong to Jianwu, and there will be no more three Teliga.

Ahhh, my friend recommended her. She is so tsundere. I love her so much. She is so strong and sassy that it's hard not to be attracted to her. It would be great if there were more female Olympics with such sassy personalities. Woohoo! This novel can be regarded as making up for the regret of having a cp be in TV. Secondly, Kengo, can you do it? If not, let me do it! [Sinister smile]

Please update me soon, I fell in love with this novel, it's so good. I just like this, letting Carmilla be the heroine.

I really like this book, and it makes up for some of the frustrations I had with the TV series. The author's writing style is very delicate, and many details are handled much better than many novels with the same theme. However, there are a few updates. I hope the author can keep at it and don't interrupt halfway. I will keep following it.

The plot of this book is very good, but the chapters are a little short. The other reason is why the protagonist is always easy to cheat. It may be the author's foreshadowing, or he simply didn't notice it. Overall, it's pretty good. Come on💪!

If you like Trigger Boy, don't miss this book, it's quite sweet [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is really good. Judging from Apple's pressure to read this book for such a long time, if there are no problems in the middle and continue to write at this level, the score of this book will be very good in the end. Although the book is good, there is one thing that does not suit my taste.

The writing is better than the original work, and some regrets have been changed. For example, Carmilla's romance with the protagonist is consummated. There are also some happy stories in it. The shortcoming is that I am always fighting, and I need a little more in daily life. Change the cover to something better. The current cover looks like a third-rate novel. In fact, this book is very good!

This is no better than what Naoki Kuya wrote [laughs evilly]

This book is really good and the plot is wonderful, which makes up for the shortcomings of the original work. Big cheers for the author!

Sha Leng updates, don't leave any ink, I'm optimistic about you as the author, come on! ! !

It's very interesting [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's a pity that there are only twenty chapters [face covering] It would be better if it could be faster [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Well, the original plot of pulling someone apart based on the defense was well changed, well changed!

I'm not bragging or flattering. Some of the writing is really embarrassing, and some of it would be nice to change according to your own ideas. It still seems to have flaws, but it's not as well written as other comments said, but overall it's okay. I read some reviews and said that it is not much different from the TV plot. Is there not much difference? The chapters directed by Takei that traveled to 30 million years ago have been changed, but the general plot direction will be according to the TV. The author will also let the characters play some jokes from time to time, such as asking Hitram to say what Ma Baoguo bullied me, a 30-million-year-old man who does not know martial arts. There is no need to be real. Personally, it feels like it is forced to play jokes to make people awkward. A dark giant. The crazy villains in TV are very funny when they play this kind of jokes. It's a bit too much. Additional information: Later, I have written some characters' personality settings according to the author's own preferences. I can only say that it is very dramatic. When I watched it, I felt like a different person.

For me, this Teliga fanfic is the best I've ever read. Well, it's just a bit lacking. I just read it and it was gone soon.

It's really good, it's really good, it's so beautiful. The only shortcoming that is not a shortcoming is that the ugly * form of Dekai's strong type is not deleted, but this should not be considered a shortcoming. This book deserves five stars. If you like Triga, you must read it. If you like Dekai, I feel very comfortable reading it.

Come on, work hard to update! Author! The content is still very exciting.

It's quite interesting to watch. The protagonist has a good outlook on life and good emotional intelligence. The modifications to the plot are very reasonable. It's very friendly to people like me who have never read the original work, and it feels good to be involved. It's just that the identity of a time traveler is of no use, the story development is a bit slow, and I personally didn't feel comfortable with it, so I gave up halfway through.

The best fan, Jian Wu catches all the paranoia and affection of Sister Ka, allowing the darkness to have its own light.

It's good-looking, a little better than other fanfics. The main content is large and can be full [laughing] Personally speaking, the episode where Carmilla was pregnant was not very acceptable. If it was later in the plot or at the end, I could still accept the pregnancy [facepalm] The book is still good-looking. Goodbye, bye.

It is quite a classic arcane novel, and it may also be the strongest and most complete Triga in all parallel universes. As the author, don't you consider making a side story to complete the CPs of the other ones, or make a side story like Tiga to talk about Teliga's son who has not yet appeared (refer to the round wing that appeared in Tiga's side story). I really like your writing style, but it's a pity that this is the only novel about Austria that you have written.

I have to say, this is the best Ultraman fanfic I have ever read. It can be said that it fulfilled my dream at that time. The author's writing is very good (≧∇≦*). The plot is very novel and the personality is well portrayed. Has the update become a bit slow recently? I hope the author can update more [blowing kiss]

It's great. It has more emotions than the original drama and makes up for some regrets. Please continue to work hard.

It's really good, very beautiful, and it satisfies my regrets about the pairing of Teliga and Kalmila.

I think this is Tomato's best Ultra fanfic. It's so awesome. The plot is really good.

Very good, I feel that the character design and the like are not ruined, and Teliga and Sister Ka are completely in tune with each other.