The Chief Strategist

Very nice

Good idea, disgusting writing

The plot is too delayed. First of all, you may be a new writer yourself. The main reasons are the following. First, you have typos and the sentences are not fluent. Is the most deadly. The second point is that the logic doesn't work. The protagonist fought against Cao Cao's 100,000-strong army. This kind of thing should be famous all over the world, but he didn't know about it? Not logical. There is also Xu Chu. His very loyal loyalty to Cao Cao cannot be concealed. The third plot is too long. I know you want to write more, but the plot cannot be too long. Otherwise, it will taste bad. If you don't have good writing and good logic, you can't procrastinate. My grandfather is Zhu Yuanzhang. You can see that the logic and writing are already very good in ordinary Tomato novels. It must be your first time, so it is good to write like this. Come on, keep an eye on you

There are typos and omissions, wrong names, forced indoctrination, and unclear identity settings. Since Liu Bei's chief military advisor is Chen Ping, Cao Cao doesn't know about it, only Xu Shu? Mrs. Mi actually doesn't know Chen Ping??

Objective evaluation, there are many typos, but the plot is okay. Most of the 1-stars in the comment area saw that the author wrote about Liu Bei's hypocrisy and ignored the 1-stars. Liu Bei's hypocrisy was vividly portrayed, and Cao Cao's treachery was not noticed by Kazuo. Sun Quan's history was also not good, and the governor of Soochow knew it. During the Three Kingdoms period, there were not so many benevolent and righteous princes, and Zhang Lu, who really helped the refugees, also wanted to promote Taoist beliefs. In my opinion, it is impossible for Liu Bei to talk about benevolence and righteousness like those (things). Cao Cao is also terrible. As for Lu Bu, he is just a rudimentary mercenary. The black Cao Cao Lu Bu at least values ​​​​love and righteousness (what is the point of talking about it even if he doesn't care about his family), not to mention that Mrs. Mi represents the family, provides so much support, and can talk about benevolence and righteousness even if he abandons his wife and children, he must be able to believe it. As for Sun Quan, it's not that simple. How old was he when he was in power? How could he be able to check and balance the Jiangdong nobles if he was just posting nonsense in the comment section and had no scheming power? The most stupid ones are the Yuan family. The fourth generation and the third Duke are now replaced by several generations. Not to mention the number of nobles and officials who have benefited from it.

How to say it? If you persevere, you're already doing pretty well, come on! But after you have written it, it is best to read it yourself, because some parts are too outrageous and cannot be understood. They are simply wrong and you also need to understand the Three Kingdoms. And Xu Chu is another bodyguard of Cao Cao after Dian Wei, that is, a personal guard!

Are you treating Cao Cao as a fool? Wouldn't you know it by just doing some research?

Brother, what a literary talent! I can't understand what you are writing! A work of God!!! 👍

To be honest, the behind-the-scenes writing of Three Kingdoms is not very good. Wouldn't it be better to directly scold Fang Qiu and point out the country?

It should really have been written by the third grader, so it's okay.