Son of Luck? Sorry, My Fate Is Mine

Looks good. Author, we are already mature readers, we can identify the CP ourselves, there is no need to specify the CP. You don't have to write about a female protagonist, and don't write about anything gay, you'll get scolded. The protagonist is a complete group favorite. Of course, the most attractive point is that the protagonist has some tricks, but they are moderate, not super powerful. Moreover, a world is originally made up of many geniuses, so I like to read books like this, A Hundred Flowers Blooming. Everyone has their own life encounters, opportunities, and achievements, and instead of relying on the protagonist to be happy, the bigger the level, the more people kill people. Finished the chase in one go. However, I always feel that as long as the names of the women are very thoughtful, the names of the men are very casual. However, there are not many female characters appearing, so it is acceptable. It's my first time writing a novel and the writing is so good. It's already very good. Keep up the good work. All in all, it's worth reading. See the world from the front. It's a game for modern times. There will be many players entering in the future. So the author's outline has been written, and the world view is very large, involving God. In short, I can follow any novel that makes sense.

This book is still very good to read. It has a fresh and elegant feeling. I don't feel that the protagonist is outrageous or overwhelming. It feels very reasonable. I also like the identity of the protagonist very much. The settings of various supporting characters are also great. Regarding the author's setting of talent entries, you can refer to Guigu Bahuang's entry. The effect is similar to the author's setting of black, white, green, blue, purple, orange, and gold. The author's entries are also very reasonable. I am very much looking forward to the author's updates. Praise

It's okay, the female nephew's image is not very good, and he can slowly fade out of sight later on. The male protagonist's character is a bit too soft, but it's just due to the early stage, and he can gradually grow up. (Fair evaluation, given five stars)

More Personally, I don't think there are any problems with the major topics the author writes about. Including the only female character, there has been great progress from the initial setting to subsequent changes. (However, it is best for the author not to write about emotions and ambiguity. It is indeed very uncomfortable to watch in this aspect😣) The overall idea is also good, very good, more to come Come on

Nice! Give five stars a boost, cheers for the author I love this brotherhood! I'm so excited about the twin setting and telepathy! I am addicted to family affection! ! If you can't beat him, you can call Mu Nianci (although I haven't actively called him, but he will come to the rescue immediately if he senses it) I like it, southern Xinjiang is still too united and smells like human fireworks. Mu Yun also always looks like he is in control. This is very cool. You think you are one level higher than me, but in fact I am already in the atmosphere. Looking forward to the follow-up, author, come on! !

This book is okay, but the update is a little slow, and there is the woman. Those who have read it and the author will definitely know who she is. Yes, it is the nephew [Chigua]. Although it was changed later, it is better to just write it off because of recklessness. Later, the protagonist will take care of it. Either don't have it or write it off. It's still okay now [Chigua]. I heard that the review is quite low. Give it a five-star review and improve it. After all, it is not bad. The author is also quite active. , Just update more.

After watching too many stories about brothers and sisters, I really like this kind of love relationship... Give me a good review www

Overall, it's okay. The first thirty chapters are really unpopular, so you can just read it casually. I hope if you want to add some emotional drama, you can leave it at about a hundred chapters. It's already slow enough. The more people you add, the plot will drag on. You can have a confidante, but we can write about it in a light-hearted way. After all, most online articles are caused by the collapse of a partner. Don't make assumptions about relationships. Two people don't need to be tightly tied together. After all, who has left. Who can't live anymore, and if there is a relationship, it must be a match, at least the goal should be general, the strength should be equal, and there is no need to accommodate too much for the other person, or you can simply establish a partner. As for the subsequent plot, it is enough to have an idea, and the female partner is not brainless. I hope these suggestions can be modified or referred to without destroying the author's outline. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.

This book is not bad. It also deleted the scenes about the female supporting characters. Although I don't care about these, it also shows that the author listens to the readers' opinions. His attitude is perfect and the writing is good. I hope the author will continue to persevere.

I think this book is quite good, but the female nephew in the early stage is a bit annoying, but I can understand it. As a junior, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will definitely become popular. It's best not to have any emotional drama. Come on, author [note]

The protagonist is neither arrogant nor arrogant nor arrogant, and the system does not overwhelm others. She has systematic help in gaining strength, but the most important thing is to study hard and practice hard. The arrogant supporting actress who was initially thought to be a highlight was also arrogant for a reason, and she promptly repented after the protagonist prompted her. The most important thing is that I have a good brother and good parents [crying][crying][crying] The last time I saw such an unreliable novel was The Age of Fighting, and it's not as full of water as a potato. Come on, authorｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

This book is not bad, although it has some flaws, but it has more advantages. Moreover, I am still a new writer. It is already very good to have this kind of writing style in my first book. I hope I can maintain it and work harder! I prefer the large force design and plot. The description of men and women and women is okay. It is not too toxic and is acceptable. After all, if it only writes about training and fighting, it is still a bit boring. There must always be some transitional plots. Finally, I wish you good health and academic success, and I wish you a happy May Day in advance! [Blowing kiss]

It's quite good to watch, mainly because He Aoqing is really not very likable. After all, most readers don't like this kind of person who drags others down and hurts others. I suggest that the author can reduce her role in the front. Although the writing is a bit short, as long as the current level is maintained, I will continue to follow it. Come on, author.

I personally recommend that you block comments for the first 70 chapters and just read the novel, or jump directly to chapter 70. Not only will the comment environment be much better, but my brother will also appear, and the content will become more exciting. It was originally about the twin brotherhood, but the brother never appeared. If you want to watch the brotherhood earlier, I suggest you skip to chapter 70. I was actually a bit discouraged before, because I am a person who likes to read novels while reading comments. The comments on the previous chapters were too poor, which somewhat affected my reading mood. But in the final analysis, this was written in 2022. The author changed it again in the next 25 years, but I haven't seen it yet and I don't know if the writing style has evolved. But just looking at the writing style of 22 Years, I am still a bit naive, but except for the female plot, it is still good. Personally, I prefer the plot of the two brothers. After Chapter 70 is the Underground Palace chapter. If you don't want to get involved in any previous disputes, I recommend starting here. Chapter 83 is especially recommended, as there is a long-lost brother plot. If necessary, I can also briefly summarize the content of the previous 70 chapters in the comment area (actually there is no important content). There is currently no heroine in this book. The biggest point of contention is that there is a female supporting character, He Aoqing. The author initially wrote a plot in which the character of the female supporting character was not likable, and the protagonist was too tolerant, so there was a lot of controversy. This is the general content of the original article that I summarized from the comments. The current version has been revised by the author. After the revision, it is actually good. However, it is obvious that the character of the female protagonist has changed abruptly. In fact, it is not bad. I don't read the comments and the impression is still good. If you don't want to read it, just skip to the chapter and it will not affect the subsequent content. Although the author said that Da Shao wrote a lot of her plots because of the controversy, but there are still many plots, and it is not surprising that the comments misunderstood that she was the heroine. Look at Zhang Qingxuan, the young nephew who appears with her. Not only is he mentioned in the introduction, he is also a protagonist with a golden entry in his destiny, and he has a lovable personality. So far, there is not a single bad review. And even if it is such a male partner who should have a lot of plots, it is bound to the role of the female partner like a pendant. The plot content is not as much as that of the female supporting character, which was mostly cut out. There is no single plot and the two appear only because there is a supporting female character, so he appears next to him and shows his face. Even when describing the two, he only mentions the name of the female supporting character and not his. This makes me feel bad. It is obvious that there are two people, but Qingxuan is not mentioned at all as if he has disappeared. At the same time, I can understand what the comments said. Here is a paragraph of the original text, I will put the details in the comment area, and here is only a small excerpt [So Mu Yun and He Aoqing said goodbye, and Li Zhuzi took him and ran quickly to the Martial Arts Palace. . In addition to this female partner, there will be two bound female partners appearing later in the entrance chapter. They are the classic cold and powerful senior sister but only passionate about you. The combination of the cute senior sister and the cute, lively and cheerful little junior sister (it is indeed a bit classic). Although it was explained that the junior sister admires the protagonist's father, the junior sister is because the protagonist is good-looking, which seems a bit far-fetched. It is not that the reason is far-fetched, but that the behavior they perform plus the reason is far-fetched. How should I put it? I saw that there was a comment in the comment area that commented on the behavior of these female supporting characters [is this coquettishness]? I don't blame the comment area for the misunderstanding. After reading it, I doubted that this description was a preparation for a harem, right? In addition, there are also classic and indispensable descriptions of women, such as fragrant sweat, pretty faces, etc. Here is a piece of the original text [He Aoqing's beautiful eyes widened and she tightly covered her red lips that were slightly opened in shock. . This makes me feel that the author is no longer unable to write the love line, but has reached the point where the writing power between men and women is insufficient. The author gave me the feeling that he wanted to write the charm of the protagonist and arranged a female partner, but he was afraid of being misunderstood that she was the heroine, so he was timid in writing. I want to write about attractive women, but I will only refer to other popular women who have written about them, which makes the female partners I write feel like empty shells without souls. Obviously there are a lot of plot mentions, but it feels to me that it is far less charming and memorable than other plots and even the male supporting actors who have much less. But it can also be seen that the author has tried hard. Although it is useless, it has reached a point where both parties can understand it.

Overall, the subject matter of this book is very good. I hope the author can keep writing. No one has always been humble in the dust, but he persists in trying to work hard for his dream. There will be a moment of brilliance. The third young master of the Tang family used to read Xiao Huang to start. No one is very strong from the beginning. Come on.

The one I'm reading now must have been revised. The author's attitude is so good that I'm embarrassed to give it a low star. But my poison resistance points are full, and it looks okay. Come on! It's better to update more every day [Thinking]

Relatively speaking, it is quite good. I can't say that I am a bookworm for ten years, but I have read a lot of novels. First of all, this novel is very novel in design. Although it uses an old system view, it is not rigid. The interpersonal relationship between princes and generals is also very good. It depends on how he plans the power struggle between the world in the later stage. You can read it in the early stage, and it can be regarded as a sacred text in the later stage.

The writing is good. I like this type of writing very much. The author should work hard. Some of them are just minor issues, and some of them are a bit lacking. I was already reading it very slowly, but I finished it in one go. This is very frustrating. I won't say too much, but I'm sending you good reviews. Come on, don't be a mess, don't be a eunuch, come on (^_^)／

Very pretty. This is my first time encountering a novel with this theme (probably my first time). I thought it was quite good, but it was a little bit short. I finished reading it in one sitting. When will the author update more information? Come on!

It's pretty good, not too toxic. The protagonist is gentle and gentle, but he is ruthless and ruthless towards his enemies. However, I think the protagonist could be a little more arrogant. After all, Emperor Zhou has not started to confront King Dingyuan yet, but everyone wants to criticize the protagonist. It's a bit strange to talk about the protagonist behind his back. The son of King Dingyuan still needs to be strong. He doesn't have to arrange everything for the protagonist. It's too unreasonable to do everything himself. Those noble factions dare to do this even if they know the identity of the protagonist. I feel that the name Son of King Dingyuan is just a decoration. Even if the distant water cannot quench the thirst of the near, Mu Nianci is still here. Aren't you afraid of being liquidated? I think it can be written better. As for dog licking, at least I haven't felt it so far. Come on, author＾0＾~Stop writing [I learned]

The writing is okay, the setting is good, the protagonist has a female junior (fourteen years old), the character is okay, and she can correct her mistakes. The author probably wants to create a character who is relatively childish (tsundere), simple (easy to fool), and kind-hearted (decent). However, the author has written too much about this female character (to be honest, there is no big change later and it doesn't feel like the heroine). It feels like the author wants to use this female character to make the story smooth in the early stage. Unexpectedly, a group of people dictated that the character should be written off as soon as possible. It's really hard to understand. I just want to ask you, in which reality do you think everyone is submissive to you, or is it true that everyone is a ruthless person who pulls out a sword to look at others when they disagree? In my opinion, everyone has their own autonomy, and the relationship between people needs to be maintained. What's more, in this book, this woman is also a genius character with a bright future. If you want to see a lone ranger character, you can look for a doomsday theme, a world view similar to the dark forest, or a novel theme in which personal force determines everything. Given your temper, if I look at Dao Lord Yue Qianchou, I'm afraid he will be torn by the author?

Yes, but I feel that the character changes are a bit abrupt. For example, the arrogant young nephew can suddenly kneel down and admit his mistakes. This seems to be that the author is filling in the omissions, and the contrast is very strong. There is also this 5.8 That made me laugh [laughing evilly]

The author has updated again? I said why it was suddenly recommended to my homepage. The writing is really good, and the plot recommendations are also very smooth. It is a rare masterpiece. As for the CP, it is best to write without CP, just stew it randomly. Most tomatoes are like this now.

It's so beautiful, and the brotherly love in this book is a highlight! ! Especially the younger brother Baonan is a super bonus! ! But it actually stopped updating... . [Cry]

My admiration for you is like the water of the Yellow River flowing endlessly and out of control! Very good-looking, preferably without a female protagonist [shy]

I have read it for a long time, and now I think of rating it, which is why the author stopped updating. I really think this novel is very well written. I am a female reader who has grown up to be a fan of male novels. The author does not specify gender, and I thought it was written by a girl. Anyway, I like everything. I hope the author can cheer up and continue to update, come on!

This book is okay and has its own ideas. At present, it can be written about 1 million words. I am not sure whether it will collapse after the players come. Let's wait and see.

It's good-looking. The protagonist is decisive in killing, and that's He Aoqing. It's too uncomfortable. Fortunately, the author listened to his advice, and the plot is very big. I hope the author can stick to it and not give up because of temporary results. Also, there is no need to describe too much in the academy. After all, the theme is not this. From what I see here, it should be the protagonist and the players in the later stage, right?

The writing is very detailed, a bit like the pure immortality novels long ago, with advanced face-slapping plots. There are almost no emotional scenes, and there are very few other emotional scenes. There are more scenes with a strong sense of belief, and the quality is high.

I cried, I won the Easter match. In fact, I kind of forgot about the plot, but I think the beginning is much better than many novice and brainless novels up to now, and the author's is a very early fortune telling, so it is indeed better.