Harry Potter: I Have a Coming and Going Room

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It's good, but there is a problem with the enrollment time🤨. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is only a few months older than Hermione, but the Weasley twins were already in third grade when Hermione entered school. The protagonist and the twins entered school in the same year, so they must be at least two years older than Hermione.

This book is great and clear, but for a novel, the content is more like an outline. The author's writing style is still a little lacking. The description of the characters' personalities, images, emotional dramas, etc. Is a bit poor and the pace is too fast. Many places can be written in more detail and specificity, because to be honest, this book has been separated from the fandom to a large extent, and some Marvel characters have been added to it. So in such a large world view, the plot and characters need to be written more fully, and Obviously not. The author has made drastic changes to the plot, but there is a lack of elaboration of the rewritten plot, making it look more like an outline than a novel. Unfortunately, it is now finished. If possible, the author can try to use this book as an outline to write a new one, but the new one needs more detailed elaboration on the plot, character image, timeline, layout and foreshadowing. In this case, I feel that this will be an impure but excellent fan novel.

I don't understand why this book is rated so low? ? ? Although the author said that he has some of his own settings, if we insist on following the original work, this author can be said to be one of the most detailed ones. Moreover, when the author wrote about the private settings, he also explained them in the article. I don't understand where your dissatisfaction lies? As a reader who knows both the original work and the movie version, I think the writing is pretty good! Summary: Recommended viewing, this is just a sweet article, nothing too brilliant, but nothing too problematic.

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Absolutely amazing! I love the Draco character! The main CP is super sweet! The author is so knowledgeable. The seventy-two changes and the one Jarvis showed me were so cool that the CPU burned out. The protagonist has a lot of halo! Love very much

Suddenly I realized that I haven't given any good reviews yet... (Added: D)

Not bad, but Qin Shihuang was besieged by those foreigners, and he had no good solution. His wife and children were also arrested, which made him feel very aggrieved.

Very nice (to the point, without thinking, seriously)

It's a pity that the ending was rushed and there was less interaction with Hermione, but I still liked it. This is the first time I read a book about Hart. The reason is that I dreamed about Hermione when I was a child. After I woke up, I could never go back. I felt very sad, so I came to see Hermione [blowing kiss]

Five-star praise, come on author! ! ! ! ! Five-star praise, come on! ! ! [Top post]

What a great book, why is the rating so low?

It's the first time I've seen a HP fanfic with so many powerful people [face covering] The writing is okay. The author doesn't take the usual path and takes an eccentric approach. The protagonist is invincible. You can see for yourself. Finally, I hope that the author and your Hermione can have a smooth love and career like the protagonist [face covering] (being trapped in the end does not count) ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃelegant

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking! (Ten thousand words are omitted here) How did I *** finish! ! !

Suddenly I realized that I hadn't made up for the five stars yet.

Okay, at least there is no other Harry Potter. The duel between two foxes, one old and one young, will burn out the CPU.

Very NB, okay, When I first read the introduction, I didn't feel much about it, but as I slowly got into it, it turned out to be really good. (♥∀♥)

All in all, it's very good. I hope the author won't stop updating it.

I hope the author can publish another new book

Just because the author cares about the readers in reviewing the book, he must give it five stars.

See how long it takes you to read

The writing is quite good. Why is there no one? At least according to a normal time traveler, Voldemort's little Karami should have been killed long ago, but the progress seems to be a bit too fast.

The heroine alone, Hermione, must be given a five-star rating [Code]

Very nice, I like it very much, except the author is too short

It was written well before, but why will it end tomorrow? I was really convinced by him. I cried to death. The author begged me to give him a few more days. The author is resurrected! It's been three months since I finished the book to resume updating. It's worthy of you, the author. There is also a new book, please hurry up, thank you. Finally, and most importantly, the author's writing is good. I hope the author can continue to write Harry Potter fan fiction (single heroine Hermione). I admit that I was a little irritable because my favorite book suddenly had to be finished so hastily. I apologize to the author. I like the book written by this author very much. Please write the author faster, thank you [Like]

I think it looks good, but I don't know why the reviews are so low

It's super pretty, I can't stop once I swipe it, highly recommended Invincible and beautiful, you can say that I was attracted by the author's writing.

Damn it, the author lied.

The writing is great, the writing is great. Even when I'm on a business trip, I still insist on updating. This is more than 50% of authors.

Very 6, bold and clever ideas