Douluo's Sword Sealing the Sky

This is my first time writing a book. If there are any bad things, please point them out to me and criticize me severely. If possible, I'll give you a small free gift [blowing kiss]

The writing is really good, who is the heroine? I hope it's Qian Renxue

Overall, this book is very good. It's not like other novels that lick the protagonist everywhere, or target the protagonist, let alone accept the heroine at every turn. The only shortcoming at present is the sacrifice of the million-year-old soul beast. First give a five-star to show encouragement. Looking forward to the next plot.

This book is in line with my wishes, but I hope Tang San will not be strengthened in the future. I still think Wuhundian can win. Master, if you don't write him to death, then it is best not to let him go to Bibi Dong again [smile][smile] I hope the author can take a look at it. Thank you!

Hope it looks good, come on author

It feels pretty good now, so I'll give it five stars. If it's a bit toxic later, I'll fix it, but it feels a bit like Li Xin's.

I feel that Tang San handled it very well. The double standard of Tang San's character in the original book was only for himself, but before time travel, he was a rule-abiding person who respected the sect. The original "Tang San" was written to make the author's Tang San break away from the image of the original work. The character of the original "Tang San" is also easy to explain. After all, people had their bodies snatched from a young age and locked up in a small dark room, but they could see what happened to their bodies. That kind of psychology is understandable [Thinking]

I hope there will be more heroines

The author can make the two heroines Qian Renxue and Gu Yuena

Very nice, hope it doesn't end badly.

I believe that there are some people, things, and loves in this world. The first time we meet them, we are destined to be bound to them for life. They are destined to grow in our hearts like a tree, life after life.

Suitable for my taste, just a little bit less

It looks good. The author can be faster. I hope you won't be ignorant [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, author, Oli! ! !

Author, let me send you a flower

Very good to cheer up.

The author's book is very interesting, but no one else has discovered it.

After reading books for so many years, I finally found one that matches my heart.

This plot is pretty good, don't overdo it and update more, just go for it Ogen!

It's pretty good to watch. It's better to kill Tang San instead of having only one female protagonist.

Awesome ^_^♪, keep up the good work

I like this book very much

I think this is a good book

This book is pretty good, very good

One subject at a time, three years of education first

Come on, come on, come on! ! !

Why does it seem that towards the end, the protagonist is heading towards the villain?

Author, this book is very good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Come on and write! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

I haven't seen Douluo Zhongli's book for a long time.

Very good author, cheers