Orderers

This is the first time in my life to post a book review. I was bored and discovered a newcomer's work while browsing Shuhuang Square. I read most of the chapters and it gave me a lot of surprises. First of all, let's talk about the illustrations. It's obvious that a lot of effort was put into it, and the quality is much higher than other illustrated novels I've seen elsewhere. Those low-quality pictures that look like they were stolen from the Internet really don't make people want to follow them. I originally suspected that the author's pictures were stolen and planned to give a low score, but then I saw that the author shared some drawing experience and sources of inspiration at the end, and I realized that I had wrongly blamed the author. (Because I am also an SD beginner myself, I will understand after just looking at the keywords [laughing]) Let's talk about the plot. It can be seen that there is a huge world view setting, and the author is also ambitious. The beginning is good, and there are many settings that are foreshadowing at first glance. However, the rhythm in the early and middle stages is a bit flat. I was jumping and jumping in the middle. In the Synthetic Demon Chapter, it can be seen that the author has added his own ideas to explore the definition of life, and also has a bit of philosophical speculation. But to be honest, your novel seems to be more of a combat type. Too many literary dramas will test the author's writing skills and plot planning ability. Obviously, this area is somewhat lacking, and the writing style can be improved. The Tianlongshan chapter is well written, and the multi-front combat narrative is an above-average performance. The Tenmokuji chapter is currently above expectations. The fight against the boss feels like watching Goku fight Frieza when I was a kid. However, you are updating chapter by chapter, which makes you feel a bit unsteady, so I decided to wait for a while and then read it in a coherent manner. Finally, let's talk about the characters. Overall, the main characters have a very obvious growth curve in their hearts, whether this growth is good or bad. From the beginning, the male protagonist was evil and regarded human life as nothing, but now he has gradually become a little more humane, and he has begun to hesitate to kill. The heroine is a typical tool character who is not likeable in the early stage, but she also has a growth process that is visible to the naked eye. The other characters also have their own mental journeys. It can be seen that there is an outline and detailed outline. The subsequent development of the plot and what the characters should do when are clearly drawn up, but there is too little description of the enemy camp! You can't wait until the actual confrontation to start recalling the enemy's past. You have to write them interspersed so that the characters, whether they are good guys or villains, will appear full. The above are the advantages and disadvantages that I can think of at the moment. As a new author, it is already very good. I will deal with the small details and continue to maintain the advantages. Not to mention it will be a masterpiece, and it will definitely be a high-scoring masterpiece. Finally, there is a sentence in it that I like very much, which is what prompted me to write this review. To sum up, in life, many things are not simply black and white. There are too many gray areas in the world that cannot be banned. You cannot use the black and white, right and wrong in most people's common sense to stabilize them. When people are in the world, sometimes they are more in control of themselves. This corresponds to my current life situation and also corresponds to the core of your novel. Finally, the author and all readers are in good health and have a successful career [Cool][Cool][Cool]

I've been watching it recently, it's pretty good, and Tutu, please give me more Tutu, I want Tutu [crazy] [crazy] The plot will definitely be very dark in the later stages, so don't write the main characters to death [crazy]

I hope to see a good ending for everyone, please write better, madam

Come on, come on, keep supporting! ! !

Currently updating quickly [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping.

Clear and organized thinking! Good article, keep following

I really don't dare to write without any imagination. I just watch the fun and excitement.

Let's start a class. I want to learn ~~~~Haha

Where there is light, there is darkness. I hope everything is well~~~~~

It's really not easy to come across a book with a subject I like

Everything has its own cause and effect and reincarnation. Although kindness and other freedoms are arranged by God,

The speeches are short and powerful, and the articles are majestic, vigorous and powerful.

The first place, Ma Liu takes up a floor. When more people read this book, I can become an old fan. The writing is good, so I give it five stars.

It has a unique approach, the imagination is unconstrained, the characters are flesh-and-blood, the plot is remarkable, the pacing is smooth throughout, and it received five-star praise.

It's a good book. The suspenseful opening chapter is attractive. The plot is lacking in content. I still want to read it. The conception and writing are impeccable. The characters' personalities are spot on! [Like][Like][Like]

This kind of article is quite exciting in Tomato. You must keep reading it, it will get better and better in the future.

The more I watch it, the more addictive it becomes. What a novel plot.

Recommended by a good friend, it's really good.

The style of painting is a bit fantasy, and I like the elements of classical mythology. It's very to my liking. Don't be a eunuch!

Guarantee guarantee it looks really good.

There is still something in this novel.

Before you know it, you'll feel like you're in it.

I was watching secretly during work hours and was almost caught by my boss.

Why are there so few comments? The work is obviously very good.

I really like the plot set up like this

It's still very interesting, but there are too few chapters to fit between your teeth.

Love it, love it, love it. I have been unable to find a book that I like to read recently, and I discovered this book by accident. It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it.

Overall, it's pretty exciting in Tomato.

It's really all in order, haha, it's genuine! !