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Generally speaking, it can be said that it is an upper-middle-class Pokémon, but the emotional line is not easy to tell at the moment. After all, I understand. Moreover, I think the interaction between mythical beasts can be reduced as much as possible. Divine beasts are inherently high-level existences, so I hope the author can improve and improve it. While ensuring the quality, there is a little bit of confusion. No problem [shy] I also hope the author can write more practical Pokémon. The only fly in the ointment is that I hope the level classification can be more rigorous. If it is based on the current gym level, it is a bit inappropriate. Or you can first explain that due to the background or strength of the male protagonist, the level of the gym he fights is different. Pokémon is mainly about bonds and emotions. The author can also spend some time on this point, not too much, just hope that everyone can feel it.

It's good-looking, it can have no heroine, it can have only one heroine, it can be less ambiguous, don't have a harem, it can be a multi-person travel story [like]

I hope it will be more popular than the first one [Punch Out][Punch Out][Punch Out]

Well, it looks relatively scattered. It feels really nice. 4.7 Points out of five. From the current point of view, of course the book is not finished yet, so there must be some highlight moments later. So it might be a little bit higher.

There are no brainless points, just read the plot yourself. At present, it seems that it is the original creation of the dual heroines Serena and Serena. Don't accept it by writing two and accepting one and saying sorry. It is not the kind of character Long Aotian who is brainlessly posted. There is nothing wrong with it.

This book is very well written. I like it very much. I hope it's not a bad book. Please, I've read a lot of them, but they're all bad. Alas, it's not easy to find a good Pokémon book these days by an author! I believe you come on! ! !

The novel is well written, but it's a pity that Serena is the main character. The plot foreshadows the heroine's choice very early, but it also uses a lot of plot to write about Serena. It's a pity that it is so empty after reading it. If life is just like the first meeting, what's the point of Autumn Wind Sad Painting Fan.

Yes, the writing is good. Although the family is rich, it does not make the protagonist brainless. The plot is also interesting. Worth a look

It's a very good Pokémon book, but the update is too slow. I hope the author will update it faster [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][laugh][laugh]

The best urban novel in Tomato

Please add Bolkenion, please. Thank you, the author, for helping me. The first Pokémon movie I watched was about Volcanion and Magearna, so I really like Volcanion. . Not to mention the addition of elves, it's still very beautiful. Good luck, author.

A very good book worth recommending

It looks pretty good, except for the Serena part at the front, which is a little regretful or a small problem. The rest is very good, and it is relatively good among books like Pokémon [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Love][Like]

It's great, I'm a fan, the author, keep up the good work

This is my favorite elf novel so far. I also really like the setting.

From the perspective of readers who like slow pace, it is undoubtedly a very good Pokémon fan work, but for readers who like fast pace and more passion, it may not be acceptable. I personally like it quite a bit.

Not brainless, the protagonist is strong but not the strongest The plot is exciting and compact, and the story line is clear The author needs to work hard (^_^) [Upvote][Upvote][Upvote][Upvote] Let's just say, it's very uncomfortable not to watch it for a day. This is the best Pokemon text I've seen so far I will keep chasing you Come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! Come on! ! ! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

This book is my favorite book about Pokémon. Both the selection of Pokémon and the description of the plot are very good. But I hope you won't ruin your writing in the future. Update soon

It's very attentive and detailed. You can see that someone has carefully checked the information. The system is gradually becoming more user-friendly. I always feel that "Old Old" is a very subtle character. I also hope that the author will get better and better. This book is very convincing to me who regards Pokémon as my childhood.

The beginning is very good. There are not many elven stories with a big background at the beginning. I like it a lot. But the emotional drama is not good enough. It might as well not have a heroine. I have read the previous one, but it was because the emotional drama at the beginning was unacceptable. After reading this one, I am going to pick up the previous one and read it again. I listened to your introduction and skipped the part with the heroine. Come on! I've finished reading it. It has a strong starting background and has been praised as an invincible novel. It has a single heroine who is no match for her childhood sweetheart. There are too many descriptions in the front and it's too good. The heroine in the back is named Zhou, which is a little uncomfortable, so I might as well just accept it all. The emotional description is quite average, and the rest is pretty good.

There's nothing bad about what I've watched so far, and the plot development is pretty good. Four stars. If it didn't end badly at the end, it would be pretty good. Mainly because I'm afraid of the ending. I've seen several novels that were good at the beginning but ended badly at the end. 😓😓😓

Generally speaking, this novel summarizes half of the protagonist's life, but it's hard for me to understand the last part. Although I also know that it is better to have a single female lead, I actually recommend including the second female lead.

It's very beautiful. Wouldn't it be better if I gave it a plus? ,,վ^վ,,

Well, it's my first time watching a Pokémon fanfic, and I feel like it's pretty cool.

Very cool, looking forward to your next work.

I particularly like this relaxed and joyful scene joking with the elves and the protagonist's cheating

Personally, I think the plot is interesting and the writing is pretty good.

It is indeed one of the better ones among all the Pokémon books I have read.

I feel it is quite realistic. It is not invincible from the beginning, but it continues to grow in the process, including the end without saying that the elves have grown to the limit, leaving a lot of room for imagination.

It's well written, keep it up. It's my first time reading a Pokémon novel. Although it's too invincible and a bit boring, it's still pretty good. But I'm not sure about some settings, such as human gyms, how kings and champions are selected. What is the difference between pet quasi-gods, mythical beasts, second-level gods and ordinary pets, and does it have anything to do with qualifications?