I Asked You to Deliver Goods Live, but I Didn't Ask You to Make Everyone Cry.

This book is very good overall, and the protagonist's series of detailed descriptions are in place (for example, it's a good place to buy corn), etc., And the sense of immersion is also very strong. It's just that I don't like Zhao Xiaoyu very much in this book. When I saw the last picture, I felt that Zhao Xiaoyu was about to confess his love. I didn't really want Zhao Xiaoyu to be the heroine, because I always felt that Zhao Xiaoyu was being sentimental from beginning to end, especially when describing the male protagonist (of course this is my personal opinion) If the author wants Zhao Xiaoyu to be the heroine, it would be best to adjust Zhao Xiaoyu's character. Of course, my comments are not to dissuade the sisters or brothers who come to read this book. At present, I personally feel that except for Zhao Xiaoyu, the other characters have very good images or personalities and can be consumed with confidence [please update]

I was deeply touched when I saw some sentences in this book. It's hard to imagine that some novels that parents say affect learning and teach bad children can really change a person, of course, for the better. I don't know what the author's role is in reality, but looking at the written content, it deserves our respect.

To be honest, I still don't want there to be too many - Zhao Xiaoyu - maybe it's better to go separate ways. I don't want the protagonist to be fettered by too many things about Zhao Xiaoyu. One person may be enough. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Not bad, not bad, well written.

Except for Zhao Xiaoyu, everyone else is still very satisfied. What did Zhao Xiaoyu say that Lu Xun provoked Hua Chenyu? Is that Zhao Xiaoyu blind? When did Lu Xun provoke Hua Chenyu? (I don't like Zhao Xiaoyu [rolls eyes])

I think this book is pretty good Just don't always step on those celebrities, Internet celebrities, okay? Especially Brother Yang. In reality, he did nothing wrong when carrying goods. I don't understand why he should be trampled on.

(ꐦÒ‸Ó) You old man, if you write so well, will you not be able to continue writing later? When you are just reading it, don't say you won't update it? Is it in stock? Hand it over quickly!

Yes, each poem can be given a suitable background, which is rare in such books. Many authors use poems indiscriminately without fully understanding the artistic conception. Compared with them, this book is really good.

It's good to read. I like this kind of novel with frequent golden sentences.

Damn it, am I unable to hold a knife? Updates are so slow! None of the donkeys in the production team have such a rest as you! It's a human being. Please update me quickly.

Not bad, just too little. . But there is an interesting thing when reading this kind of novel. As long as it has something to do with singing, someone has to be pulled out and whipped to death (don't worry, I'm not a fan of his). Although I don't like his French performance, I always see him in the novel, which makes it more disgusting.

It's so beautiful, thank you to the author! Update quickly! ! !

It's my type

The writing is pretty good. That is, if you want to write about a star, you can make up a person and don't use homophones of real stars to write about. It feels a bit demeaning. I would like to state here that I am not star-struck. There is also a little loophole. Songs are copyrighted. It seems that the protagonist has no registered copyright. The author can first declare the ownership of the copyright

Recommended, the writing style is relatively fluent, if you want to improve your composition materials, you can take a look at it, the poisonous points are to be picked up and stomped on, but they are all within a reasonable range. You don't have to watch it if you don't like it. Just go out and turn left, don't disturb the environment of the novel by swearing [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][send heart][send heart]

Very good, the author's writing is very good, but don't step on it

It's a good book, very beautiful, very good quality, very thick, I like it very much, friends who like it can read it with confidence.

My literary literacy is not high and I cannot comment on the author's books. I gave the author four stars because I learned a lot from the novels written by the author.

It's rare to find an interesting book, but it's a pity that I won't write it again

Thanks to the author for letting me learn Chinese studies

Jealousy makes people crazy, and the human heart is the most unpredictable. You don't want to get involved in the storm, and you don't want to compete for glory. . .

It's very interesting, but the updates are too slow. When will I follow up with six or seven chapters? I'll come back and give it five stars.

The literary talent is very good, and several paragraphs can be used in compositions, but the language used by the audience is too exaggerated, but overall it is quite good.

The writing is quite good, and it is a pleasant read. The author at least started at Tsinghua University, and the article is full of golden sentences! It creates a high-class feeling [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on! There are not many high-quality novels of this kind in this Tomato novel. You can't read other novels with your brain, but you can't read yours without your brain [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I believe your book will be popular [like] [like] [like]

Well enough. Please don't discredit Brother Yang and others. Thanks.

I finished reading it in one go, it's very good, the author keeps up the hard work!

Why hasn't the author updated it for so long? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Why did my brother Hua Chenyu offend you? [Laughing][laughing]

Author, do you know that your book has been hanging on my bookshelf for half a year, where is the latest chapter? Are you too hungry to eat?

Why are you so scared? Just write!