A Brilliant Life That Allures the City with a Smile

[Seeing that there are not many book reviews, I shamelessly gave myself a good review (灬º‿º灬)♡! Hey-hey! [About book updates]: Under normal circumstances, there are three bases a day, and they are updated every day from 8 p. M. To 1 a. M. [About the quality of this book]: This is the author's first attempt at writing a fanfic, and there must be some shortcomings. I hope you guys can give me some advice. If you come across something that I haven't written well, please be kind to me and don't leave a negative review if you disagree with me. [About the general situation of this book]: First of all, there is a single female protagonist, Bei Weiwei, and secondly, the character of the male protagonist is similar to the original Xiao Nai, but better than Xiao Nai in all aspects, and both the original and original works are involved in the content. The author has already thought of a perfect way to combine the original work with the original work. I believe attentive friends can guess something from the article. .

It's well written, and the ideas and foreshadowing all have their own characteristics.

It's pretty good. If you're not a book reader, you can give it a try.

Fortunately, there are not many novels on Tomato about how a little smile can make a girl charming. This one is considered average among the novels I have read. If you are short on books, you can take a look, and I suggest the author update more. It's a bit short.

The book is okay, but there are still some shortcomings (only my personal opinion). Let's put aside the dialogue and plot. The biggest shortcoming is the male protagonist. The male protagonist has always given me a sense of being like a dragon king, including but not limited to dialogue, behavior, etc. It's not that it's not good, it's just that I personally feel uncomfortable. Better come on. Finally, I solemnly declare: I am not good, I cannot go to school, and my parents are still alive. . .

The author must be sweet. The author must be sweet in love. Otherwise, I will send you a razor blade to fall in love. Otherwise, I will send you a razor blade. The author must be in love sweetly, otherwise he will send the razor blade. The author must be in love sweetly, otherwise he will send the razor blade

Overall, I prefer this book. The subject matter is good and it is my favorite type. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The plot is sometimes a bit too dragon-like [face-covering] [face-covering]. I hope the author can write less of this kind of plot and more of the love process with the heroine, as well as Some parts are a bit too outrageous. Even after reading Shenhao's novel, I feel that it is not this Shenhao. It can be adjusted appropriately. However, it is a cool article after all. The author is also a newcomer, so I won't be too harsh. I give you a four-star review. The author still has room for improvement. I hope the author will continue to write more. When the time comes, I will give you a five-star review.

Okay, I suggest you write about some international women later and start a harem.

I like to watch this kind of thing, but who is the heroine?

Why do I want to follow up? There are more than 80 chapters in the past, all of which are about the protagonist writing Weiwei. Why are there so few (/TДT)/

Why do I still want to read the author after it's finished?

Although the early part of this book is good, it is too short.

It's good-looking, but there's more to follow? What about campus love, family struggles, marriage and having children?

It's good to watch, but it just didn't include the plot of wanting to fall in love at the end. It felt like something was missing.

Yes, there are too few novels about how a little smile can make a city charming. I hope the author can stick to it.

Very good, better looking than most, five-star recommendation.

It's okay. I always feel like something is a bit unreliable. The overall story is pretty good.

A very literary book, the urban style is more fantasy [laughing and crying]

I hope I can write the rest of it soon, it's very interesting Why isn't there a sequel?

Well written, keep it up!

This fanfic is okay wc This is written by Long Aotian [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] The author is awesome

Awesome, must be five stars

Why does such an awesome novel have such low reviews?

This book is okay, but the plot is a bit slow. I wish the plot would be faster.

I hope the author will keep updating✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧ (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

Not bad. Come on, I will continue to chase you until the end.

The ending seems a bit too early But it's also very beautiful

Good, good, good, good

It's good to read, but the book is too short. Why does it end like this?

Why are you losing all your energy?