The Dark Lord at Hogwarts Is Not Too Cold

Good! I've finished reading more than a dozen chapters, and I'm going to write a long review (ah~ the last time I wrote a long review was Qin's book, this is a series about the author that fans will kill) As usual, let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The writing style is smooth, at least it is not uncomfortable to read like some novice writing, and the writing style is more daily and warm (only for the first dozen chapters, the author has not updated it yet) 2. So far, the plot is fine and the logic is flawless. The main character, Badger-in, Hermione Eagle-in, is worthy of praise. After all, everyone is used to seeing it, so writing like this can also attract readers. 3. There is an original plot. The protagonist used to be the apprentice of the Ancient One Master, a super monkey boy, and the introduction said that there may be archmages from other planes. It is speculated that there is an original plot. (Author, you will write an original one, for sure, otherwise I will write it here in vain) OK! Talk about shortcomings 1. From the front, it feels like a domineering female president and her boyfriend (maybe a bit exaggerated), but overall the character is a bit broken. I didn't expect Hermione to have such a character. Of course, character failure is a common problem in all fan fiction. I have also seen Hermione written as a vase. 2. The author's control over sweet articles and refreshing articles needs to be strengthened. In this regard, you can look for HP fans online and learn. 3. Although I don't know what the ending will be, I don't want Voldemort to be dead. No matter what, I have to do something like a plane invasion (for reference only) OK! It's all written here. No matter what the author says, he should reply to me!

I really like Hermione in this book. I originally thought Hermione was quite cute. She is not as strong, domineering and unreasonable as in other fanfics. This is the confidence that Hermione, a top student, should have. I also like Cyrus. Who doesn't like this kind of dazed and handsome boy? 😘😘😘 The writing is also very good. The plot when Cyrus played Quidditch made me super excited to watch it! ! ! All I can say is that I am very, very, very looking forward to the following plot ~ and Hermione and Cyrus together! ! ! The author, please allow me to tactfully remind you of the update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

It's so sweet, blanch it. The author is really awesome. After the change, it's better to say that Hermione after normal development is very consistent with my bold assumptions when I read it before (although there is a bit of a domineering boss here and the shadow of a tsundere little witch, but it's okay, my blood sugar is not high [laughing]), the protagonist's setting is a bit lonely and lacks love (or does not understand love) Kitty, and the kind of mentality that comes naturally after too much experience (actually I was a little uncomfortable at first, after all, many of them are the protagonists, but after thinking about it for a while, I found that it makes sense, and this kind of... Hum hum hum ha ha [sneaky laugh] don't say it) I am looking forward to the subsequent development and changes, big brother (future version) Come on!

The book is a good book. I haven't read such a good book in a long time. But the male protagonist is such a waste. He is not that kind of waste. Men and women are equal. Why did he still get married in the end... He has been suppressed. I don't understand. I won't explain. . The others are quite pretty, Of course, it's possible that the author is just an old pervert living in fantasy, hahahahahaha Big cheers for the author The more I think about it, the angrier I get. The hero has ruined an entire book. Why. Will you have to marry into the family in the end? Is it so weak? Is this a male video book? Switch to the female channel as soon as possible. The writing is very good. I hope to listen carefully and give you more opinions next time. Stop treating women as inferior to men. . At least there must be equality. . Equality between men and women is the premise. He is so angry and doesn't look like a man at all.

The single heroine is Hermione, the childhood sweetheart. The female protagonist is Ravenclaw and the male protagonist is Hufflepuff. The character design has been changed but not outrageous, the plot is sweet but not outrageous, the emotional line is good, there is a lot of sugar, I hope you don't want to be knifed (Author, you don't want us to pay in five-star installments, right? [Smile]) The author is currently in good health and has nothing to do at home, the updates are stable, the quality is OK, visual inspection should not be lame or eunuch, (Author, you don't want to open a blade factory directly at home in the future, right? [Smile] [Smile])

The future is promising. It is the sweetest HP I have ever seen. Although there are only about 20 pictures, it is too short. ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚I will use my more than 1900 hours of reading time to tell you that it is very interesting. I want the author to have cursed, (╥╯╰╥)ง<(._.)>(つд⊂)┏┛Grave┗┓...(((M -__-)m

The author's writing style can be regarded as unique that I have ever seen. Its unique cinematic feel is immersive and logical at the same time. Under its unique HP worldview, it is perfectly compatible with some Lord of the Rings and Marvel settings. The content is rich but not complicated and lengthy. While it rigorously adopts the official HP worldview, The unique originality is amazing. You may think that I am touting it because of my unique liking for this book. But as long as you read it, as long as you love and rationally like HP, I believe that this book with its profound characters, unique plot, and overwhelming sweetness will definitely be your best choice! (Come on, author! I like you so much! Remember to go to bed early! Create more chapters for us!)

Ahhhhh!!! It's simply a "divine" book, The characters are vividly created. The daily life between Hermione and little Cyrus is almost as sweet as diabetes. Although the actions are difficult to describe, you can really imagine it! But, all in all, in one sentence, more updates!!! More updates!!! Let this heartfelt dog food penetrate my stomach!!!

Amazing, very well written, okay, that's it for today's vocabulary [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] The writing is really good, it looks very smooth and I don't feel any discomfort [learned] [learned] [learned] The protagonist's strength can be strengthened a little, and don't have to ask Hermione to solve it every time [Punch] [Punch] There is also Quidditch that can help Hercule Chipachi wins once, so he may be even more excited [Hold][Hold][Hold] The most important thing is that it can be sweeter. I hope not to kill him. If possible, I hope to give Professor Quirrell a good ending [Note][Note] Finally, I hope that the fox will write better and better. I look forward to the following plots. Keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is very interesting and has a good plot. Although there are not many people reading it now, I believe it will become popular. This should be my first five-star rating. I was too lazy to write before so I didn't comment on anything [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

The overall concept is relatively complete, and the fox carefully constructed the outline. He is not like an ordinary fan work that travels from the earth to a baby in the magical world, but uses a novel perspective, where the soul wanders in the multiverse and recalls past memories in the form of dreams. The relationship between the protagonist and Hermione is also a highlight. He met Hermione in a bookstore when he was a child and accompanied Hermione to grow up. He made her restrain her sharpness unlike the original book (I think this is a change that I like very much. Of course, the candy sprinkles in the back are also addictive. Hehehe [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]). They met, got to know each other, got along with each other, and fell in love. These processes made their relationship extremely strong, and they were also the basis of their mutual trust and understanding without using words. All in all, the full text outline of Fox is carefully polished, although there is a slight flaw at the end (Fox seems to have injured his leg and stayed up late to code. I really feel for you. You, the author, cannot have anything wrong with such a good work). Once the wounds are healed, you can come up with the outline of the next book! I'm very much looking forward to this [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] By the way, I'm a male [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

That must be a five-star review. The author is very enthusiastic and diligent in updating. It is rare for an author to read the comments carefully. This just proves the author's love for his book. The writing is delicate and the characters are real. Like other novels, Long Aotian is there from the beginning. In other novels, the heroine like Hermione is basically a flower vase or a tool person. The author of this book brought the heroine to life. The male protagonists are brought to life, with flesh and blood, growing and relying on each other. This is something that is difficult to see in other works, and it is also a rare and valuable thing. Finally, I still hope that the author will never leave the work unfinished or discontinued. A good story deserves a good ending. (Sorry for writing a long review at once.)

The overall rating is low, it's very interesting, and it's written with great care. It's not a cool novel, it's not white, it's a grown-up boy and a strong Hermione.

Finally, I have a Harry Potter book that I can read regularly.

I have been reading it for a week. The plot is really good, the setting is not particularly difficult to understand, and the character development is really good. Overall, it is very interesting to read, but originally I planned to give it five stars. How can I put it, the reason for the four stars is Hermione's gift to the male protagonist. For me, I don't feel weird when I read the plot, but when Hermione and the male protagonist are alone, I feel it. . . Sweet, it is indeed sweet, but the male protagonist gives people the feeling of being restrained by Hermione, especially when the necklace given by Hermione turns into a collar. I can understand that Hermione likes the male protagonist very much and will be jealous of the male protagonist. But the collar here is particularly uncomfortable.

Uh⊙∀⊙! This book is really, really, really good. I read all the reviews, and they all gave me five stars. But why is the rating so low? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Why are the ratings still so low despite all the good reviews? But the rating seems to have gone up a little bit.

For me, this book is one of the best Harry Potter books I have ever read. It has accompanied me throughout three years of high school life and is a shining highlight in the memories of my youth. I will always remember this book and Big Fox. This book will always remain on my bookshelf. It's been 26 years, I've come to offer incense [crying]

This book comes from another book where the author probably failed in the palace battle. It is very interesting. This generation of readers is really terrible. Generally speaking, this book is more ordinary and looks very comfortable. The author must write it down and never fail in the palace battle! [Eat melon][eat melon]

A tough-minded Hermione, looking forward to the next content!

The author who wrote this book is really thoughtful. (*'▽'*) Readers who have read this book can read it. I feel it is quite special. Serious book review↓（^ω^)↓ Personally I think it's very nice. I've seen a lot of HP on 🍅. The first thing I can see is that Hermione's character traits are highlighted. It's quite sweet and not too scripted (it has the key plot points of the original book as a supplement to highlight the characteristics I hope to have when writing a book.) So the author, please do your best(*˘˘*).｡.:*♡, Don't run away halfway(ﾟVanﾟ)! ! ! I want to see the end, even if it is unfinished, you must insist on finishing it [I always feel heartbroken when I see the ending (๑ १д१)]

It's really well written and very detailed. The author has a good balance and explains the relationship between the various worlds. The combat power is not broken and the plot has ups and downs. It can be said to be very good. The explanations about Star Wars and Middle-earth are also very clear, and those who have never seen it can understand it without affecting their reading. I hope I can keep writing.

As a fan of HP, it gave me rare new ideas. The last time the plot exceeded my imagination was "Ravenclaw's Sapphire", and the author's work showed considerable strength in both setting and plot.

The author's emotional line is very delicate, and his writing style is also very delicate. In my opinion, this book is the best among Harry Potter fan fiction. I am very optimistic about the author. I give you a lot of support✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Advantages: The writing is very good, and there are many jokes. The story develops around the protagonist. It is very comfortable to read. It is sweet and interesting. It is very interesting to watch. The protagonist is successfully portrayed. Disadvantages: Where has the memory been restored? During the Christmas holiday, I can add a few more characters and write branch plots (the main plot of defeating Voldemort will be a bit dry). If Harry and Ron have too few scenes, they will be separated from the story line. More can be added later. Summary: I give it five stars. The author's writing style is excellent and I can look forward to the future👍 (the above is only my personal opinion)

Ho ho ho. I like this book very much. Although the sugar is a bit too much, I will give you the sugar. Eat it quickly. Eat it quickly. (Squeeze it in)

It's super good. I don't know how to evaluate it. Anyway, it's very good. To be honest, many people I know have recommended this article to me, but I didn't read it at the time because I couldn't find time for other novels. Then I had time today and spent a whole day reading it. Personally, I thought it was very good, but... As the author said, it felt like it was a bit unfinished at the end, and there was nothing else. Anyway, the overall impression it gave me was good. Although it was not the best, it was pretty good.

This book is great. To be honest, Hermione went to Ravenclaw, maybe it is really different. You can save the author's extras first, otherwise the interspersed reading will be very messy and then release it all at once. I still like the previous plot, and I like Hufflepuff very much. I originally thought that my test result would be a Hufflepuff, but unfortunately I am a Ravenclaw, and the spruce phoenix core is 13 inches. Come on, author!

It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. The settings and some details of the original work have been well proofread. It is a very good fanfic. The author's carefulness can make people feel respect for the original author, respect for the readers, and respect for his own work. The plot is indeed good, especially the daily life between the two little ones is completely sweet. I support the author and give it a thumbs up! But what about the character design that was promised?

It looks very good so far. Don't blame those who haven't watched Harry Potter, Interstellar, and Lord of the Rings. I can only say that if you haven't watched these movies, it means your film history is very poor. You may also say that most of the author's group portraits are based on the original characters of the movies, and he doesn't have much of his own. I can only say that standing on the shoulders of giants can indeed see far, but not everyone can stand on it. Highly recommended! ! I hope the author can start well and end well

To be honest, there are almost no flaws. Although there are other elements, it does not affect it at all. This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever seen. I also like the author's writing style and hope to finish it. (A little more astringent [staring])