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To be fair, the writing about the game may not be particularly good, and the visual sense is not particularly strong. However, in the environmental rendering and emotional enhancement, especially the line drawing technique used when writing about the national football games, it is a good interpretation of the Chinese people's feelings that are restrained, but undercurrent, and the empathy is particularly good. It is a rare good article in the sports category.

This is the author's debut novel. I began to conceive of this book in 2022. However, I was under the heavy pressure of high school at the time and was really unable to put the idea into practice. Now that I am in college, I have begun to write down the dreams in my mind, word for word, for everyone to see. Due to my lack of writing experience, I have many minor flaws such as jerky writing. Please forgive me and point them out, and I will slowly correct them. Finally, I beg for your praise and thank you for reading!

This book is very good with 62 chapters. It shows the protagonist's mental journey and some problems he may encounter in his actual career in a very reasonable way. It's just that the segmentation in the front is not very reasonable and it's difficult to read, but it's improved a lot later. I hope the author can maintain this level. I'm looking forward to seeing when and in which club Bai Zi's strongest form will be shown.

It's very good. It's not as refreshing as other novels. It's quite real.

It's great without a system

Very good, good luck to the author

It's very well written, I hope the author can stick to it

The writing is very good but there is a problem with the timeline. Isn't the Hangzhou Asian Games in September 2023?

Can you add some life, the kind where the commentator competes with netizens in real time?