When I Stare into the Abyss, Does the Abyss Scold Me?

The writing is very good, book rating = driving rating. I love jokes but don't hate them. The most important thing is that the dungeon is not the kind that only the protagonist can pass and no one else can. The writing style is relaxed and fun.

Very excellent, recommended to watch. Note: The author is a girl and very active, and understands everything [staring] [smiling] [smirking]

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Good-looking [laughing evilly] [thinking] [OK] As long as you can't think of it, no author can't write it. Even if he can't write it, just remind him. He will know it [laughing evilly] [crying laughing] [crying laughing] [like]

It's very beautiful and a must-see. You'll regret it if you don't watch it! Watching it will definitely make you sweat! [Sinister smile]

It looks great, why is the rating so low?

It is currently the third five-star among scholars. I cannot say whether the book is good or not (in fact, the content of the book is also quite good^O^). The author is really active! Really super fan! I feel like I have a very good personality, and I always respond to requests, and I will usually reply if I have any comments! Love the author so much! 😍[Blow a kiss]

I've read very late, but I still have some suggestions. The first one is that there are many plots involving the relationship between men and women, which actually makes me feel very uncomfortable. First of all, if I usually browse videos or posts, there will be many kinds of men and women who cause war, and I feel very repelled. , But it appears so many times in the article that I feel very uncomfortable. Why can't we use some other more harmonious writing methods and content to write the plot (especially when writing about college cinemas, and at this time the author specifically writes about female ghosts boxing. I am a girl, but I think in reality Both men and women's boxing exist and there are many. I always feel uncomfortable when writing like this. Maybe because the author is a boy. This kind of opposition between men and women is written from a male point of view. Maybe boys who are usually offended by female boxing will find it very relieving, but girls will feel uncomfortable if they read too much. For example, There are obviously many male boxers who are particularly fierce in boxing, so why are only female boxers scolded? This actually has nothing to do with male and female boxing because as a young man in the new era, I don't like either, but it gives me an uncomfortable feeling of inequality if I only write about how girls are.) The second one is the plot. Every time I watch the copy, I enjoy it with great interest, but there are always aspects of women in them, and they are all the same routines. For example, they suddenly fall in love or are ambiguous because of a little help from the protagonist. For example, many women are portrayed who are not in line with the values of modern women. For example, Xie Shuang may be the author. I want to describe a cold and strong woman, but many women follow the same routine. They cannot do without the male coercion and the protagonist's help. This aspect can be said to be a major poisonous point. If this writing method is changed to break out of the author's comfort zone, or more focused on the details of the plot copy and the protagonist's single character, the book will be better. At least the rating will be higher and the audience will be more. The third aspect is logic. There are still many places that are not rigorous, or the logic is not consistent. I hope the author can improve and take a wider path. @

I watched the update in one breath, and the more I watched, the better it looked. The back part was quite nerve-wracking, and I immediately got around to it, and it suddenly became clear to me. It was quite comfortable to watch, and the old bookworm recognized it [laughing]

What's interesting is that it's best to give the protagonist a personality change, and then try to write it well so that it can have that kind of complex, but it's best not to write a thriller with a female protagonist. Writing a female protagonist is self-destructive. If you must have a female protagonist, you can do it, and it will complement the protagonist's personality.

Are you worthy of me? Are you worthy of me, Kavin? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It's super exciting, super good-looking, super awesome, but I feel like the number of people reading this novel is very high! First of all, the author said in the introduction that if some readers don't understand, they can ask in the comment area, but no one asked.

It looks good, but it's short [laughing] I suggest that in the next world, the protagonist meets some more ruthless supporting characters, so that it looks better [laughing]

It's quite interesting. Different from traditional thriller novels, it is not a completely dark style of writing, with many jokes or cars interspersed in the middle. All in all, it's an eye-opener. But it may be this difference that some readers cannot accept. The comments section was polarizing. I hope the author can update it quickly. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Everyone has different tastes. Unless the narration is terrible or the writing is terrible. Most of the time, if you don't like it, just watch other stuff. However, the author still tries to find a reason or follow up to make the protagonist's IQ consistent. Overall, it's pretty good [eating melon]

This book is not bad, it can be considered an above-average thriller. But I didn't feel that it was very scary. Instead, it felt like a coming-of-age novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Cool]

It's good to read, but the number of chapters is too few. I hope the author will have more chapters next time.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 Collector's Edition Coke, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, and gradually, It started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It could be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who are you looking down on in the next few chapters? Welcome to the campus world of Kunkun Kaitan. Please be sure to abide by the following rules! #%* 1. Please wear gray overalls with a center parting as your entrance uniform, this will make "it" happy. [Don't want! He will pollute you! ]Hide 2. If you see a student wearing overalls playing basketball on the playground, please sing and dance to him and leave quickly [(This is sometimes useless) Hide] 3. Remember there are no teachers in our school, you can call them national producers [(Teachers and national producers are mutually exclusive and mutually exclusive) Hide] 4. The cafeteria uncles are good, you can trust them. You can receive the fried cakes and flavored fried fish they provide [(remember it cannot be chicken) Hide] 5. Our school will not provide lychees. If you see it in the canteen, please report it to the National Producers immediately and they will deal with it. [Please recognize clearly that it is him and not Him] Hide 6. If someone stops you and asks "Do you want to eat pancakes?", Please quickly answer "I eat, I eat" and leave here quickly. [But please... I want to eat hahaha. How delicious. Do you really not want to try it? ]Hide 7. Don't try to look for "it", because one more look will make you dirty. #.. 8． If you encounter "it" suddenly, you can say to him, "I'm sorry." Please be sure to be loud, as this will scare it [(3 times) Hide] 9. If you meet someone wearing black and white overalls, please find him immediately*#** and use Green Corpse Han to protect yourself 10. Please note that there are two Chen camps on this campus: Ikun and **zi. Choose carefully when choosing. Maybe you can be the third party. 11. They all have the right to start groups, but please note that some special places cannot start groups. 12. When encountering danger, you can wear fleece clothes to resist dirt# 13. Sometimes cutting down pine trees or pine trees**# is a way to scare them away 14. Eating chicken can temporarily resist #% pollution! ! ! But also let? ! #**Attention and Anger 15. What you see with your eyes is not bright... (Cross out), do you see it? 16. This school does not have a principal's office but is jointly managed by various departments. 17. We can *%save Wa#%** if necessary. They are demons! 18. Don't absolutely believe in this rule if the wolf has mixed with the sheep. Finally, I hope you will fight hard, we are with you ----------Etai School

To evaluate, this is a relatively traditional supernatural thriller. Many of the plot foreshadowings described above are very common. Some of the triggering points of the conflicts are relatively simple and even a little bit poisonous. For example, when the first copy of the protagonist was placed in the cleaning department, he was lazy and was designed by the headless ghost and the cleaning supervisor to leave the copy point and be in danger. In fact, we all know that this is to create conflict points to connect with the development of the plot below, and to provide guarantee for the development of the protagonist. However, the author's writing skills are average, and he cannot design wonderful contradictions well, but creates a lot of poison. I read it in 26 years, and I have read many books, large and small, before. In the past, I might have thought it would be good to give this book a five-star rating, but now that I have more experience, the reading requirements have become more demanding, so I can only give it a four-star rating.

It's pretty good. I have my own ideas and can also write a copy. I didn't want to read it just by looking at the ratings, but when I tried to read the chapters, I found that the writing was indeed pretty good. I've read a lot of horror game genres and this one would be on my mind. The only problem is, the author should write faster, it's not enough to read!

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update. Because, I believe I can see it in my lifetime ending. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. Just respect and never give up. More, no water, nothing is a problem, you and I will read faithfully Readers, please wait together. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and Seriously, to put it bluntly, if you were included in the article, you would You are a senior actor, and I am the audience watching the film. The performance has reached a fascinating level, just like Jane I'm in the same state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Ohad", watch more There is only one missing part of the collection. I want to watch it but can't let it go. It's contradictory and yet The mixed emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, aimlessly clicking on this Novel, I am not in the mood to pamper him, but you succeeded Yes, I "half" finished reading it. Now, there is only so much emotion Thousands! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my current situation. I hope you can see it with a feeling of engraving and luck. Come on! Author, I look forward to every "next chapter" from you.

How should I put it, after reading more than 70 chapters, I feel that the author has something on his mind. He is very skilled in driving and knows how to do it [laughs evilly]. And there is indeed no female protagonist, because there is no female protagonist who takes up a lot of the author's pen and ink to overly describe and portray the story. The author wanted to play tricks on the first and second copies, but failed to do it well. It's probably due to a sudden small change in the outline or simply a lack of grasp. It gives people a feeling of being in a fog, and if you look at it carefully, you will feel very uncomfortable and you will not understand where there is any foreshadowing to suggest that this is a dream. It's a pity that it was out of the question, this idea is so fancy and valuable.

I like this book very much. The author speaks well and all the book friends in it are talented [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's depiction of the human heart is meticulous, especially when describing the gourd boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be chopped off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone to Siguo Cliff and Linghu Chong to occupy the mountain as king. I personally think it's right. The handling of the role of Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xia Houjing and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houjing did not have a crush on Hua Gangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions attract readers' attention. It is worth mentioning that the finale of the fight between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was both unexpected and reasonable.

Very good, very good. The whole book is very smooth, and the protagonist's thoughts are like a normal person. The plot is very compact and one after another. The sudden unexpected surprises are also surprising. Even if I give some suggestions to the author, your copy does not have a reward called the right hand limiter. To be honest, I didn't understand this thing until level 4 or 5. What exactly do you do? Later I figured out that the ghost energy in your hand will increase, so the limiter level should also increase. I think you should add this point, or explain it there, and reflect it properly. For example, if the ghost energy in the right hand increases too much, the limiter will be useless. Then this is the explanation. The title of the book you wrote is "Starting with me staring into the abyss and staring into the abyss?" , I clicked in when I was panicking about books. Your name really didn't make me have much desire. I can't say that I didn't have much desire. I just felt that the title and the content of the book did not match well. I think this is also the main reason why your book did not reach a score of 9 or above. People who clicked in saw that the content was different from what they imagined, so they left a negative review, so the score is a bit low.

It's okay, I'll see you again in a few months (remember to chase you, don't remember to see you in a few months [making a face])

Yes, it's really good. This cheat is quite different. It's rare. System text and prompt text are too common. Also, this, from time to time, I lose my memory, it's a bit stuck, a bit stiff. Very interesting setting, no prompts or system, quite fun

It's very interesting. It's different from other suspense novels. This one isn't that serious and the protagonist isn't that smart, but it's really interesting. But the author, you have to work hard on your words, otherwise I'll give you a five-star rating. Can you help me put it up so that the author can see it?

It's really good now, a bit funny. Although some places are abrupt, it can still come true. The protagonist can avert dangers when encountering several crises, but he doesn't feel invincible. He will also be beaten, injured for trivial things, and forced to enter the mirror world because of a gay man. Overall, it's not bad, but it has a bit of a stallion feel.

Chapter 60. It's hilarious and has a lot of jokes (famous scenes). The author is very interesting so far. I believe the content in the back is also good. The shortcomings are some "classic" plots and the protagonist's love for death, but the author has the strength to bring him back. I just finished praising the last few chapters of Dreamland and it was so disappointing that I was very disappointed.

Although it is an old-fashioned thriller, it does not have those complicated systems, such as reincarnation, time travel, etc. This is the first time I have seen the normal development of aliens, and it is not too strong. It is still very exciting, 5⭐ praise! I can't stand Chapter 70 anymore, but I think the first part is okay