When I Gaze into the Abyss, Does It Insult Me?

The writing is very good, book rating = driving rating. I love jokes but don't hate them. The most important thing is that the dungeon is not the kind that only the protagonist can pass and no one else can. The writing style is relaxed and fun.

Very excellent, recommended to watch. Note: The author is a girl and very active, and understands everything [staring] [smiling] [smirking]

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Good-looking [laughing evilly] [thinking] [OK] As long as you can't think of it, no author can't write it. Even if he can't write it, just remind him. He will know it [laughing evilly] [crying laughing] [crying laughing] [like]

It looks great, why is the rating so low?

It's very beautiful and a must-see. You'll regret it if you don't watch it! Watching it will definitely make you sweat! [Sinister smile]

It is currently the third five-star among scholars. I cannot say whether the book is good or not (in fact, the content of the book is also quite good^O^). The author is really active! Really super fan! I feel like I have a very good personality, and I always respond to requests, and I will usually reply if I have any comments! Love the author so much! 😍[Blow a kiss]

I've read very late, but I still have some suggestions. The first one is that there are many plots involving the relationship between men and women, which actually makes me feel very uncomfortable. First of all, if I usually browse videos or posts, there will be many kinds of men and women who cause war, and I feel very repelled. , But it appears so many times in the article that I feel very uncomfortable. Why can't we use some other more harmonious writing methods and content to write the plot (especially when writing about college cinemas, and at this time the author specifically writes about female ghosts boxing. I am a girl, but I think in reality Both men and women's boxing exist and there are many. I always feel uncomfortable when writing like this. Maybe because the author is a boy. This kind of opposition between men and women is written from a male point of view. Maybe boys who are usually offended by female boxing will find it very relieving, but girls will feel uncomfortable if they read too much. For example, There are obviously many male boxers who are particularly fierce in boxing, so why are only female boxers scolded? This actually has nothing to do with male and female boxing because as a young man in the new era, I don't like either, but it gives me an uncomfortable feeling of inequality if I only write about how girls are.) The second one is the plot. Every time I watch the copy, I enjoy it with great interest, but there are always aspects of women in them, and they are all the same routines. For example, they suddenly fall in love or are ambiguous because of a little help from the protagonist. For example, many women are portrayed who are not in line with the values of modern women. For example, Xie Shuang may be the author. I want to describe a cold and strong woman, but many women follow the same routine. They cannot do without the male coercion and the protagonist's help. This aspect can be said to be a major poisonous point. If this writing method is changed to break out of the author's comfort zone, or more focused on the details of the plot copy and the protagonist's single character, the book will be better. At least the rating will be higher and the audience will be more. The third aspect is logic. There are still many places that are not rigorous, or the logic is not consistent. I hope the author can improve and take a wider path. @

I watched the update in one breath, and the more I watched, the better it looked. The back part was quite nerve-wracking, and I immediately got around to it, and it suddenly became clear to me. It was quite comfortable to watch, and the old bookworm recognized it [laughing]

What's interesting is that it's best to give the protagonist a personality change, and then try to write it well so that it can have that kind of complex, but it's best not to write a thriller with a female protagonist. Writing a female protagonist is self-destructive. If you must have a female protagonist, you can do it, and it will complement the protagonist's personality.