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It looks good, but there are a few typos.

The writing is fine. Please save yourself the trouble and write about champions.

A person who doesn't have much of a role in the anime has a Pokémon with championship qualifications.

Damn, it's so beautifully written. What the hell. Different colors are the romance of the strong.

Not bad, pretty good-looking

The writing is not bad, but could it be less troublesome to write about the qualifications of a king and a champion? A Pokémon used for campus teaching has the qualification of being a king [laughing and crying]

For the author's responsibility, I give it five stars! (I'm not used to it due to personal reasons)

It's been several days and finally updated. I thought you were gone [laughing evilly]

Can the heroine Sirona do it?

Come on, write quickly, it's so exciting

Ness has another book

I said you deserve this 5 stars

Yeah, super pretty

Not bad, it has that charm

Well written, I support it

For newbies, I would like to suggest that the author learn more about skills. Gyarados is not supposed to learn waterfall climbing, and its attributes are restrained. It seems useless when fighting.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I hope to keep updating until the end. I hope it's not watery, but I personally prefer it. I don't know what other people think, but I think it's good. Come on, author.

The author listens to me and says thank you, please update it as soon as possible. I want to kill you.

It's ok, I'll give you some pictures

Just like to see this

It's too short and I didn't see enough

This is very beautiful

Come on, author! It's so exciting that I can't get enough of it [shy][shy]

This book is better than other books, every word is better

I just like to see such a fast pace

Not bad, pretty good-looking

This book is perfect, the review is over five stars

It looks better than any other Pokémon fanfic. The front is fine, but the back is a bit off topic🤔There is also water, and Susanoo has super powers😂To be honest, it is a bit off topic the author