A Mortal's Journey Against the Immortals

A very nice book

There is obvious ideological output, yes, I will pursue it. I couldn't sleep at night. I really liked this book. Although I have only read more than seventy chapters, I found that the author dug a lot of holes. I can't wait to predict the subsequent development. Since the protagonist and the boss have different positions, there will definitely be conflicts or even confrontation later on. It depends on how they choose. This is the pitfall that I am more concerned about. It depends on how the author writes it. The rest are personal opinions on the rhythm of the plot. The world view is set by a fairy, but the protagonist's combat power is still not as good as that of a martial artist. It is not enough to rely solely on wits to attract people. It is impossible to fight wits only for mortals. Immortals are like palaces in the sky and can only fight with magic, right? The author's description of the psychological growth and intelligence of the protagonist in the mortal period is very wonderful, but there is also a fatal flaw, that is, there is a feeling that the innate intelligence is beyond absolute cruelty and imbecility, which does not reflect that the protagonist has become more mature and sophisticated through constant struggle. Maybe it's because I don't have a clue. I really can't imagine how a protagonist with such an IQ in the early stage can improve his experience in the later stage. I hope the author can read my comments and finally urge me to update~