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Oh, dear, you are lazy again. Believe me, if you update regularly, the rating will be at least 9 or 5. Of course, it would be great if you could change the introduction. I don't know about others. Anyway, when I saw the introduction, my desire to read it was instantly wiped out. It has been on my bookshelf for nearly 3 months. With permission, can you tell me more about the plot or character traits? You can leave the demining at the end of the first chapter. Of course, dear, this little shortcoming is nothing compared to your laziness! ! ! Finally, this is a great sick (coquettish? Attractive?) Article. There are not many emotional lines. Don't be fooled by the introduction. But you will understand after reading a few chapters. Remember to bring [admiration] [sending heart] [punch] with your mind.

The hostess is very fond of [Sending Hearts] By the way, I am raising the flag for Miao Li! Lily! Lily!

I really like the black character of the heroine, it's so exciting when she goes crazy! Especially her chess pieces, each one is perfect and the plan is very good. Knock on the muse, forever a Sri Lankan fan! "An imperfect plan has no need to be executed."

The description of Murat's White Cut Black is really awesome! I really love the heroine who has the attribute of crazy criticism. She cuts the roots of grass, cleanly, and is good at using her own advantages to confuse others to gain benefits. I have to say that Murat is so good at it, and her acting skills are really fascinating. How deceptive. Lily coaxed her around, you are a hypocrite who is good at pretending. If I hadn't watched Murat's growth from God's perspective, I would have been coaxed by Murat. Who would reject a girl who is good-looking and as gentle as the moonlight? I'm looking forward to Murat's life in the future. I wonder if Murat can deceive Professor Dumbledore. I'm really looking forward to it!

I really like this kind of writing, the black and white heroine [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] (I personally think the male protagonist can be omitted, the two female protagonists are also good [smirk])

I like this heroine very much. It satisfies all my ideas of a perfect madman. The content is very detailed. I like this kind of detailed article very much. I feel like I can immerse myself in it. The author writes very well. I hope you won't be unhappy because of others. Always be happy, love you, don't tire yourself out [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I really think this article is one of the top HP articles I have ever read. Apart from the fact that the update is a bit slow, there are no shortcomings.

This book is really beautiful. I really fell in love with the character of the heroine. Miao Li is super sweet. The progress of Sri Lanka's teaching is not very fast, but I think it is good to go step by step. That is, I hope there will be more interaction between Sirius and the heroine later. I think they are quite good-looking. Also, is Potter here to be funny? I think it's very funny when there are clips of him. Finally, the author's writing is really beautiful, really great, super awesome! I think this article is novel and interesting, but it has one shortcoming. It's too little and it's not enough to read. I hope the author will do more, and I will keep following it. Come on!

I really think it's good to read, I really like Murat. In fact, when I was reading the synopsis, when I saw that Lily would turn dark in the later stage, I thought Lily would be written like a green tea, and I wanted to quit. Until after reading the synopsis, I found out that both Snape and Lily fell in love with the heroine, and I instantly became excited [laugh][laugh][shy]

When I saw the notification about the discontinuation of updates, I was so angry that I rushed to leave a positive review! I have never seen this kind of original HP article that is not only non-ooc but also stably updated! If you don't like the protagonist's character, turn left and don't disturb my reading quq (annoyed)

Some of the concepts in it are really shocking. Murat is so cool, but to be honest, don't want to be Murat, and don't despise your own emotions and desires. It is precisely because of these that life is wonderful, ruthless, and the highest state of sentience. It doesn't matter if you can't reach it, just shine alone. (I'm sorry for saying a bunch of incomprehensible words. This is also what I said to me. Some of the contents of this book are very philosophical and made me keep studying. Later, I was relieved. I am who I am. There is no need to be ruthless or have no fear of death. I can be an ordinary person. I like the word ordinary)

The author's writing is very beautiful, the writing style is also very good, and the characters are not broken. Overall, I like it very much! ! But I don't quite understand the heroine's series of masochistic behaviors (maybe because of the crazy character design). The heroine pursues her goals at any cost, whether it's her health or reputation. Although I know she will get what she wants, I felt very frustrated and heartbroken in the early stages of watching it. I hope the author can give the female goose some convenience or let her get some small victories, otherwise I will cry to death [almost crying] Anyway, I think it's very interesting, I hope other book lovers will also like it [Blowing Kiss]

I really like the heroine in big letters. I weakly said, 'I'll give the heroine such a miserable experience, I'll have a myocardial infarction, woo woo woo' [crying]

It's really beautiful. I'll update it soon. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I really like the heroine's black-and-black setting. I love the crazy beauty so much (⑉°з°)-♡ Sihasha~ It smells so good

This book is really super good-looking. The heroine can really be said to be an out-and-out lunatic, but it's really good-looking. I don't know whether the ending will be Severus Snape with the heroine, Lili with the heroine, or the heroine being independent and beautiful? Of course, I love them all

Very well written The author's writing style is really good, and the portrayal of the character's psychology is not bad, but there are a lot of repetitions. The description of the protagonist in the early stage is good in the middle and late stages, but it becomes a bit cumbersome when several perspectives are added later (probably because of the fatigue of describing the same thing multiple times). When it comes to Bella, it feels a bit OOC (I think) and that's about it for this book review To be honest, when I was reading this article, I got a little drunk and stayed up all night. As a result, I fell asleep in class during the evening class. I was a little confused until the later part of the plot, but I was a little too sleepy and tired. I didn't want to read it again.

It's very in line with my taste. As a fanfic, the protagonist is not so silly and sweet, but white and black. This contrasting experience is very good [Love]

It's really good-looking. It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful.

Definitely worth five stars. This is evident from the fact that in order to read this book uninterrupted, I deliberately renewed Tomato VIP, which I had discontinued for a long time. At the beginning, it may be that it is for younger readers to understand more clearly, so the plot is mostly adopted from Murat's perspective - covering most of her psychological activities. When I saw the author laying out the layout carelessly, I wanted to give up. After all, when portraying a mentally ill person with high IQ (emphasis added - high IQ), once the author fails to grasp the key point of writing - readers are aware of the character before they know it, it will easily lead to the collapse of the character. However, with the development of the plot, Murat's main perspective has obviously been reduced, and when describing the big scenes created by Murat, her psychological activities are not described too much. No matter what other readers think, the reduced God's perspective does make the later plot more readable, at least I enjoyed it. In fact, when I saw a string of "Don't believe it, it's all fake" in the tweets, I thought this article would be written in a narrative trick, but after reading hundreds of thousands of words, this kind of omniscient and omnipotent experience is not bad. Xiaosheng bb: In fact, if we don't write about Murat's psychological activities at the beginning, focus on describing everything she did for Lily, and then inadvertently intersperse a few foreshadowings of "not understanding emotions, just for fun", this will not only perfectly make the readers burst into tears in the early, middle, and even later stages, but the "new" character of Murat revealed by the final foreshadowing will definitely be regarded as an O. Henry-style ending - it's quite interesting to think about. All in all, in my opinion, this book deserves five stars (affirmative nod. Jpg

Jiu Min, I really love Sister Murat! ! ! Although gentle on the surface, he is actually crazy in his heart. Every step is taken, each one plays a chess game, and is full of strategies. Murat's three points will make you cry. But Murat made a miscalculation. She probably didn't expect that the people around her would like her! ! !

Very very nice! I generally don't read this kind of novel, but the author's writing is really, really good! There are almost no shortcomings, the only shortcoming is that there are too few articles! ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) The author, please come on (.'▽'.)❤️

Love the character so much! Hh I just have a small suggestion (can you not add a lot of cute psychological descriptions qaq, otherwise it doesn't feel right) you can ignore it [crying] I really like the protagonist but don't like to see her being bullied. Sorry, my preferences are a bit strange. The author's writing is still very good!

Highly recommend everyone to join in! ! ! ! ! Also, when reading the article, you should read it carefully and pay attention to understand the big settings and so on. Although it is a bit difficult to understand, it is all very reasonable! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Shy][Shy][Shy]

It's a good read, but I don't have much patience. I have seen more than 200 and close to 300 pictures. When I first started watching it, I knew that Professor Snape would chase his wife, so I was very looking forward to it. However, after reading more than 200 chapters, although Professor Snape's attitude towards the heroine seems to have changed, the author also said that he only started chasing his wife after the child generation. Of course, I have no patience. My patience, um, has been exhausted. Of course, this is my own problem. This book is really good. I think the author's writing is very good, and I also like the heroine's character very much. I really enjoy watching this crazy type of heroine. Of course, I don't quite accept Lily and the heroine being together. Of course, in the text, they are not together, and I am not. Very accepting of lesbians. But I respect it. This is also my own problem. In summary, this book is very good and recommended. Well, it's just that my IQ is a bit lacking and I can't understand some parts. But it's really good-looking😍😍😍I'd like to focus on the heroine's character, appearance and everything. I like it very much. Although there are some things that I don't like, overall it's perfect and good-looking. I recommend it and give it a 5-star review. It's great!

The author's writing is really great. The heroine counts everyone. She is an excellent chess player, dark and yandere. As long as she is useful, she will be counted. She can ensure her own safety and life but she doesn't care about her body. She has multiple scars on her body. She may be enjoying it. I don't know if there is anything that can make her care. I am almost particularly satisfied with this book. Come on, author😘😘😘

Murat is so touching. Take one step to see a hundred steps, acting for more than ten years is just for a clean memory that will not arouse suspicion. White and black, everything is under control. In the eyes of others, he is a pitiful little person who can easily be exploited for his "weakness", but in fact, he is a madman who would trade his own life for an equivalent price just to satisfy his curiosity. Although Murat is pitiful, she doesn't need other people's heartache. Everyone in the world is just a pawn in her eyes.

The writing is superb and absolutely stunning. The heroine is pure black, with a gentle, cold and decisive appearance, which is intoxicating. A bit of a heartthrob, except for Potter. I hold the banner for Li Miao [Adoration] [Adoration] Lily flowers are very fragrant.

The heroine design is awesome, I like this kind of thing

The author's writing is very good, and the heroine is absolutely amazing. I love it so much. It must be five stars.

This is my favorite Harry Potter fanfic so far. The author's writing is great. Come on! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The plot of this book is smooth, full of ups and downs, wonderful and wonderful. I love Murat so much. My wife's writing style is simply astonishing. It hit my mark completely. I feel like my soul can be purified after reading my wife's writing [lick screen]