The Journey Begins in the Magical World

[Chigua] Is there anyone who happens to pass by who can give me some comments? [Chigua]

This book is still very good, but there are still some flaws that I hope the author can change. For example, there was a lot less interaction with key figures in the beginning. For example, the part where Minerva turns into a cat. Although the protagonist is not Gryffindor, I think Miller turned into a cat for the first time when I was taking classes in other houses. This point can actually be mentioned. Or you can write about Hermione coming to the protagonist to complain about Harry and Ron being late. Details like this often enhance the authenticity of a character. In fact, the entire plot of Harry Potter is relatively complete. It is not easy for you to jump in directly, so you can expand some other story lines. For example, the gathering between ghosts; the story of Miss Ravenclaw; the conflict between the Centaur and the Acromantula in the Forbidden Forest; and even Voldemort collecting the blood of unicorns, these can actually be a little involved. Otherwise, the plot is actually a bit monotonous. (Finally, I want to add some personal information. When can the author see the protagonist using the elf form to do some things? I feel that it is quite suitable in the story line of the Forbidden Forest. I am still looking forward to this.)

To be honest, I am tired of watching the main plot with the trio now, but it is the main plot after all_(:з∠)_. Hermione still inserts the three little ones, and joins the main plot through Dumbledore's request. The known plot is not elaborated too much. The most important thing is that she is not having an affair with Hermione at the moment! ! ! ╮(‵▽′)╭Who knows, there are so many plots where I fell in love at first sight, often exchanged feelings in the library, or was betrayed by Hermione through the troll incident... And the kind that said something bad about Hermione while being a bitch at the same time. ⌓‿⌓I hope that the protagonist and roommates can have more interactions, enrich the characters, develop new branches, and create their own supporting characters. But I read in the introduction that it said traveling through multiple worlds. Since it is traveling through multiple worlds, the heroine can be left out. It is still very interesting without a heroine. I don't know what the author planned. If your stay in the hp world is relatively short, please ignore what I said above.

It's really good [laughs evilly] I just like farming and raising pets. Ps: Is there a female protagonist (I just like the female protagonist)

The author should update quickly. We don't ask for too much. Just update 1.8 Million words every day. [Note] The female supporting character in this book is not as annoying as in other novels. I feel pretty good about it. There should be no female protagonist. There must be no female protagonist! ! ! , Hermione is not as good as other novels, and there are no ambiguous plots, no ambiguous plots! ! Love it, love it [eating melon]. It's a pity that it was discovered too early, the author will update it soon [pouts]

I hope that in the later stage the protagonist can slowly collect animals and plants from the magical world [Grief][Grief] Why not let Newt know that the protagonist has a small world? In this case, it is also better for the protagonist to buy magical beasts from Newt

It's very beautiful, I don't know if there is a female protagonist, although I think it would be better without CP.

Good. Very enjoyable to watch.

What's interesting is that some people don't like Hermione very much (this is just my personal opinion)

The literature of the same type that I have seen is quite good, including off-site novels. At least the writing is passable, and there are no major flaws for the time being. But it's just getting started now, and I hope to keep it going. The future plot development must be reasonable, not too unrestrained or too deliberately suppressed. Before writing the story, you must consider the future development. For this reason, it is okay to write a little slower. What readers lack is not novels, but good novels that they can read. Don't start writing as soon as your brain gets hot. Think more about whether this expansion is reasonable based on the previous article. The most important thing is to put yourself in someone else's shoes and think more about the reader's experience when reading this text. Many plot authors think they are good when they write it, because the plot first occurs in the author's mind, which is equivalent to God's perspective, and the causes and consequences are clear. However, due to differences in textual expression and information, the reader's experience will not be exactly the same as that of the author. Therefore, those "poisonous plots" are considered unreasonable by readers, but the author takes it for granted. My words are not a condescending criticism of the author. In fact, I think the author's writing level is much higher than mine. It's rare that I see another Seedling that I like. I would like to express my thoughts based on my many years of intensive reading experience. After all, the people watching the show in the audience know better whether the show is good or not than the people singing on the stage. There's too much to say, in short, it's a good write-up, keep it up.

Why does youth have to run and sweat, why can't we just waste it by the river? Those who never win rarely fail, those who never climb rarely stumble. Overgrown with overgrown grass, drizzle like powder, and partridges singing quietly, I will migrate and live on the hill in the forest. Two people under the same roof, looking up and looking down, may not like each other, but sooner or later they will get used to each other - "I'm Waiting for You in Memories" Xinyiwu

It would be better if there is a female protagonist. Many people say that in reality where there is no heroine, whoever doesn't find one can be guaranteed to be single for the rest of his life. In your own little world, you have a house, library or collection hall to collect magic books, animals, plants and magic items. But it's best to note that if you write Western fantasy and add Eastern fantasy, it will easily collapse.

The machine of this new book is really not good

This book can be published very high. It's a new continent. It's a paradise where the magic world has moved collectively. World rules. Multi-universe. There are so many possibilities. Magic is enough. What kind of woman do you want? It's particularly good without a heroine. Will the author come back to write it? It would be a pity not to finish it.

Okay, it's a very good book

The author needs to update more. I think other authors write 10,000 words a day. As an excellent author, he should not lose to others! ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

Personally, I think it's okay. As long as I don't write too heavily about Voldemort's machinations in the future, it's fine as it is.

Come on, the author, and some of you guys should come on! I would like to call this book "perfect" for me to read It's meticulous and the plot is very well developed. It's pretty good. Hermione at the beginning was a little... Indescribably weird. You can add some extras (recommended for CP, it will attract some CP)

Shu Huang writes his own book. If I were like you, I would write one too! ❤

It's a very good book. I suggest you go to Shuhuang Square to promote it, increase the number of people, and then add more codes and updates.

It's very interesting. I can watch it even if I don't have much HP. However, the division of strength levels is not so obvious. The pet eagle has a low sense of presence. I am very curious about how the protagonist's elf identity is exposed later.

It's so beautiful, I finished it before I knew it

A big shot passed by

Looks like he's going to be a eunuch

The protagonist is Dumei, at least until she can go to another world and meet a compatible person to become a partner.

The Harry Potter article is really good among the HP articles. It was very enjoyable to read, but some things and behaviors appeared very suddenly.

This book is really good

Not bad, and the protagonist's family can also learn magic.

It's so good, I finished it in one sitting [laughs] I came here to review the rating after watching it.

Come on! [Blow a kiss] Come on~~~~~