Demon Slayer: My Brother Is a Top Swordsman and a Beginner Swordsman

So well written! I'm all in! The existence of the protagonist makes up for the shortcomings of Enichi Jiguo's character, and the detailed description of family love reaches the peak in seconds! Your Jiguoyuan's humanity is even more evident here! Come on! Keep working hard to update, I am optimistic about you, buddy!

Before the part where he took the initiative to bask in the sun before dying, I can call it a masterpiece. If the author stopped there, I wouldn't feel it was unfinished, I would just feel it was just right. Although the latter part is not as shocking as the previous one, it is still eye-catching enough. To sum up, this is the most beautiful Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever seen. Although I don't know what will happen next, it is already very good after seeing this, especially the first part of the masterpiece. Even if the latter part is unfinished, I can't say anything, after all, the first part is already perfect. Also, I think Hiruba and Enichi are perfect human beings now. They have unlimited lifespan, are powerful, and can't eat people. They are like perfectly evolved humans. If possible, I don't want them to die. They will not harm anyone if they live forever. Maybe the ending will be like this? They two live happily until the end of the world? Haha, of course these are just my conjectures, it mainly depends on how you think about it.

Good books, good books, good books? ! In Demon Slayer, Enichi Tsukuni is indeed quite miserable. His wife died and his brother turned into a ghost. He was blamed and expelled by the Demon Slayer Squad, and he was not good at expressing himself. The author gave Enichi Tsukuni a person he could rely on, making this dazzling swordsman like a god more vivid and more like a human being? ! The details are also well described, and the character's personality is outstanding, but there is no deviation. If you watch the original work, you will not feel that the original anime characters are too abrupt. The protagonist Hiru has a distinct personality, sharp tongue and sharp tongue, which matches well with Tsukuni Enichi [laughing] Recommendation [Admiration] Just please update more, right? !

I really like it. This is the first Demon Slayer book that I like. Before, I could only read it, but this one is really good! [Adoration] The author often interacts with readers, has few typos (it can be said that there are none), the quality is excellent, and the writing style is also very delicate! [Blowing kiss] Finally, the author will update it quickly [please update] and ask for a flop [blowing kiss]

Please: The moon is shy of the flowers, the fish and the wild geese are falling, the country is beautiful, gentle and graceful, thousands of beauties, countless manners, the beauty of the country is fragrant, the beauty of the moon is beautiful, the eyes are bright, the teeth are bright, the Emei is light, the beauty is refined, the skin is fragrant, the manners are elegant, the grace is flowing, the beauty is stunning, the beauty is elegant, the graceful Oona is pretty, the grace is outstanding, and the attention is flowing. Tangled in pure silk, swaying in steps, brilliant and unparalleled, crowning all the flowers, cut water eyes, stunningly beautiful, fairy jade bones, beautiful and moving, like flowers and jade. When praising a girl, you should praise her appearance, temperament, and self-cultivation. The beauty of the mortal world, the elegance of Tingting, the graceful grace of Oona, the pretty and colorful, the outstanding grace, the lingering gaze, the entanglement of pure silk, the gentle steps, the water-cut eyes, the stunning beauty, the jade bones of gods, like flowers and jade, the author has been greatly updated! ! (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)

To be honest, I think this is the best fan book about Demon Slayer, because none of his characters are OOC, and they are not traditional system novels, which makes people feel that they are integrated very appropriately. Including plot characterization and character description, I think they are all very good. The author please work hard to add more updates, it's really good and I highly recommend it.

It's very beautiful. The author uses the calmest language to express the most intuitive emotions. This kind of emotion makes people feel warm. Whether it is Jiguo Hiru's childlike character, or Jiguo Enichi's gentleness towards others and tolerance for others, or the passion of purgatory, it makes people feel that they are people with rich emotions instead of people simply described by words. In the author's writing, they are given their own unique life. The author uses peaceful language to express his love for his family, his inseparable love for his family. If one day I have to experience the separation of my family, I may also have the mentality of the protagonist, that kind of sad feeling of having to face reality and hope for family love. I believe their stories will not stop here. They will continue to write in the author's pen, writing about their tragic, unique and colorful life. Good luck, author. I hope the author can work hard to bring us this perfect chapter. I also hope that more people will read this book, which will give the author the motivation to continue writing. New book friends can also refer to my last comment to see if this book is to your liking.

On the premise that the plot is not cliche, the protagonist saves the unhappiness that should have died. There is no deliberate action. The plot is smooth and comfortable. It is really hard to realize that these characters are supposed to be dead. No one has OOC. If I hadn't read the original work, I would really think that the protagonist is an official character. There is no sense of violation at all. There are many extras (? Haha). I have been writing and writing since the Warring States Period, and I finished it without realizing it. It is really surprising and regrettable, so I will read it again—— The tone may be a bit strange, but I really couldn't change it a few hours after reading the novel, which also shows that the immersive experience of the novel is very good!

I am not very good at words, but I think this book is very well written, very vivid and clear. It is the kind of book that flows in a long and steady way. It will describe the personality of each character in a very detailed way so that you can understand it very well. It is also the first book that made me The book that makes me cry, the sentence "Brother, goodbye" really made me cry. Author, please return my tears! ! !

The best of all demon slayers! Awesome, let me tell you! ! Such an exciting plot and such a good author! Where to find it? ! ! ! Let me ask you! ! When you go to other books, do you have such a good author to chat with you? Have you read any other books with such good-looking plots that burn your brain? Let me just say this directly: Congratulations on finding you the treasure! ! !

Jue Jue Zi is different from time travel and system novels. If I had not read the original work, I would have thought it was true. The protagonist does not look awkward in the story and is perfectly integrated into the original story. The characters and settings are not distorted. The writing style is OK, not that amazing, but it allows readers to experience the emotions of the characters in the story. Overall, it is really okay, at least I didn't get bored (some other books got boring after only reading a few chapters, and I don't know if it's because I'm too demanding or because I'm [face covering])

It's really great! I've read a lot of fanfics but rarely come across one that's so palatable! ! ! If I don't give it five stars, I won't be able to bear it! Hiru's character really struck a chord with me, and the way the brothers get along is really nice. It's just a little short in length, but it's not broken.

Such a beautiful article, I almost cried while reading it. In fact, when I read articles, I always like the kind of articles that are a lot more exciting, exciting, and even covertly written with single arrows. But not this one at all! One! Sample! The plot is very comfortable, the small theater and daily life are very interesting, super warm, I really like Zhou's character, family affection yyds (*/∇＼) After watching the interaction, you can completely feel the harmonious atmosphere of daily life. After reading it, I felt like I had been baptized and completely refreshed. It was good from the first chapter, the atmosphere was subtly controlled, the perspective change was perfect, and Hiru's last sentence really touched me. All I can say is that it had me completely hooked from the first chapter. And I really like this style of writing_(:::з∠)_ The middle period was a little tiring, because it was a single line and it seemed relatively thin. The later period was much better, and I also added a few small branches. I think the writing of Mikazuki was very comfortable, and it made me feel a lot of emotions.

Ah... This is the best Demon Slayer fanfic I have read so far, even though there are only two chapters in one day... Obviously they are all about knives, but it can easily arouse people's interest in reading. I hope that the sparkling owl will not be jealous because of something he is unable to do, and will be angry at those who hurt others! Loyal readers will always have your back!

Come on, just don't stop updating suddenly. The writing is fresh and not confusing, not bad! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's really the best among all Demon Slayer fanfics! The logic is rigorous, the writing is delicate, the emotions are described fluently, and the pace of the article is not sluggish. In short, now that I see it, it is perfect (●°u°●) "

A sad yet heart-warming novel. Hiru hates himself as the Ghost King. Enichi clearly loves his brothers, but is forced to bear the responsibility of sending away his elder brother and younger brother. (I feel that a large part of the abuse is borne by Enichi). The eldest brother lost a lot in pursuit of Yuanyi, but he still kept walking in the same place. (Brother, what on earth are you looking for? Point at me.) And the Demon Slayer teammates felt a sense of disparity when their trusted friends suddenly turned into ghosts (I can't quite sympathize with this part). In the end, the lord became the point of laughter, hahaha

God! It's very good, very novel, it's basically all self-created content, it's not too out of the ordinary, and it's saved a lot of frustrations. I think this is a great Demon Slayer fanfic, if you compare with me, I will be right! [Eat melon]

It's really rare to see such high-quality Demon Slayer fan fiction, and the author's writing style is really great! ! ! Then, he is timid and obedient in front of his brother, but he is completely different in front of outsiders. The protagonist is really double-standard [shy], but when I first read it, I really didn't expect that the author would make Yuan Yi turn into a ghost, but it was very interesting to watch! ! ! ! At last! Big confession! [Love][Love] I hope this book will get more five-star reviews! Y(^_^)Y

A very, very, very good looking Demon Slayer fanfic! ! ! It's been a long time since I've read a non-CP fanfic. This is a rare and good non-CP fanfic. The protagonist's personality is very cute, the original characters are not OOC, and everyone's interactions are also very warm. As for the plot, although it deviates a little from the main line, it only deviates a little bit. The overall direction is similar, and it can all be rounded off (I admire Sister Owl [learned] [learned] [learned]). What touched me very much is that there is righteous forbearance! ! ! (Although there aren't many scenes) The extras are also fun to watch Sister Owl is very serious and will answer readers' questions [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart] Come on, let's meet the next Demon Slayer fanfic [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] (So, when will you open another Demon Slayer fanfic? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry])

The characters are relatively full-bodied and three-dimensional, and the plot characters are in line with the original image and not OOC. Moreover, the author describes the emotional changes between the characters very delicately, so that it will not make people feel abrupt. However, I just feel that the plot of the story is being pushed a little too fast, and it feels like it won't be long before the finale, but generally everything is on the right track. All in all, this book is really good among Demon Slayer fans (provided the author doesn't collapse later) [Thoughts]

To be honest, although I have only read more than forty chapters now, it is undeniable that this fanfic is the best one I have read among all the fanfics. The emotions written in it really made me feel it. It is very good. I hope the author can continue it. I don't want to be like other fanfics, which are good in the early stage, weak in the middle stage, and completely unfinished in the later stage. If the later stage is well written, I will continue to comment [shy][shy] Help, it looks good, write quickly

The wife is so good-looking, the characters are not particularly OOC, and the timeline is not weirdly messed up, because I recommend Iwakatsu Tsukiguni. The novels I read before seem to be biased against Iwakatsu-sama and made him OOC, but when I read this book, there is no obvious OOC, which is really rare. I actually feel that Iwakatsu-sama is not afraid of death, but just has the obsession to surpass Enichi and does not want to die (only from my own point of view). The rest of the writing is super perfect, and the character of the protagonist is particularly good. It just stepped on my xp, super recommended [shy][shy][shy]

A very novel subject matter, the quality of the content is also very good, the author's writing is very good, and the protagonist's experience presents us with a different world of demon slayers. The psychological changes of the characters are also described in detail, especially the complex psychology of Enichi Jiguo who turned into a ghost in Jiguo Hiru. , The best thing is that the author did not significantly change the original plot when letting Ji Guozhou enter the book, which makes the integration of the protagonist more natural and also satisfies the original novel party. The author did not directly let the protagonist become Long Aotian, but there is a continuous growth process, which makes the novel no longer hard, and the author's introduction to the Demon Slayer World is also very natural and unobtrusive, which allows non-original readers to read it. But there are still some shortcomings (just a point of view, the author writes better than me), first of all! The protagonist is over a hundred years old after all, and has been a clan leader, but his mentality seems a bit childish. It is understandable that he acts like a child in front of Jiguoyuan, but he also looks a bit childish in front of others. This is not to say that this kind of character is not good, but I just hope that he can be more mature. Secondly, the pace is occasionally a bit fast, and sometimes skips decades at a time. In fact, the content in the middle can be written a little bit, but it must be written with some small climaxes without changing the normal plot. It cannot write too many daily life plots to avoid the Boruto phenomenon. Finally, I hope I can update a few more chapters every day... Sigh, I just hope it won't be unfinished. I have given up hope for more chapters [jpg with tears in my eyes.]

(Mild spoilers!!!) It's really good to watch. "Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba" itself is also called "Hashira Slayer" (sad), but after the change, many characters have been avoided. The character portrayal is also very good. Everyone's doubts and distrustful attitude after knowing that Hiroshi is a ghost (although it seems that Hiroshi didn't deliberately hide his identity😳) is a bit harsh, but unexpectedly very reasonable. As an organization that has been fighting ghosts for so long, it is impossible to just rely on getting along with each other on weekdays. He completely let down his guard against the identity of the other party as a ghost, including the lord. Even though the lord guessed Hiru's identity not long after, Hiru has become a ghost now. Most ghosts are not trustworthy (Hirut also expressed this view). Even if they gave a lot of help to the Demon Slayer Corps hundreds of years ago, the Lord should still be suspicious of what he does (although it is very unreasonable after all, he has helped so much). But if as the Lord, he cannot take this aspect into consideration, then the character is somewhat OOC. It only represents my personal opinion) In terms of plot, there are more daily chapters (I like it very much. The too compact plot is a bit breathless😔) Overall, it is super awesome🥰 Also, I really like Hiru! She is a bit arrogant (tsundere is the best!) She knows exactly what her outcome will be and she will still go on firmly. She is very venomous but also very gentle (gently breaks the legs of those who stand in the way). Her outlook on life is the same as mine! (So I really like it🥰) Finally, the owl is really cute🥰!

The characters are three-dimensional, and the words of each character are very consistent with the personality. Every time I speak, their images automatically appear in my mind. The author has grasped it so well! The emotional changes of Hirawa Enichi and the elder brother, confrontation and love, are all in place. The plot does not advance too fast, the emotions are not inexplicable, and the logic is very smooth. Highly recommended! One of the best Demon Slayer fics!

It turned out to be a 22-year-old book, and it was very delicious, but Zhu Bo was knocked unconscious by the love line of Yiren in the middle of the book. I hope there is a cp next time that can be marked or the chapter name can be skipped if it is not marked. Sister Qiang was stunned [crying]

A very wonderful book. I can deeply understand the relationship between Enichi and Hiru. It is the only demon slayer novel that can make me cry. The first one is Brother Iizhu. When I read that book, I felt a sense of melancholy after reading it in the middle and after it was finished. Brother Iizhu deeply penetrated my heart. This book also made me think of Hiruzen as a childish, arrogant, and gluttonous person. The image of the book is carved in my mind, and it is also a book that portrays the male protagonist very well. Speaking of Demon Slayer's book, it really has the same empty and melancholy feeling as the original Demon Slayer: It is obviously what we want to see, and what the pillars want to see, but for some reason, we just think that "their story is over." . . Can I get a reply from the author (looking forward to it)

I've finished reading it, and it's quite good. The two male protagonists should be Tsugumi Hiru and Enichi. It's different from the route taken by other fans. The author's imagination is quite big, but it can be regarded as filling in the meaning. There is a risk of spoilers below, so read with caution. 1. The person who turned into a ghost became Tanjiro, and Yadouzi and his younger brother Takeo joined the Demon Slayer Squad. 2. There is no female protagonist, and the CP is not broken down. In the end, it developed in a direction of a CP that is both day and night. Fortunately, the car stopped. 3. The author is not very good at writing battle scenes, and mostly prefers daily writing. 4. The knife will make you feel uncomfortable but you won't cry. The extra parallel world is also very good. You can clear the boss copy quickly. Overall it's still worth watching

I like the protagonist very much, especially the way he beats up the ugly looking guy. It's so awesome that I didn't even see the words in his eyes clearly. I just remember that his parents were very ugly. Shouldn't Wuhan be glad that not all of his ghosts are so ugly? Otherwise, if you were to dance crazily on the protagonist's aesthetic point, you might have been wiped out by the group long ago, right? This novel is really good and beautiful. The conflict between the Jiguo brothers is also resolved by the author in this book. It may not be resolved, but it is much better than the result in the original work. It is a great article.