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It's okay, just a bit short, please post a few more chapters.

꧁Hurry up and update twice a day? Can the author? May I? ꧂ How many protagonists does the author have in these pictures? Too bloody.

This is the first fanfic I've read about the Magic Soldier, and it's also one of the best fanfics I think. When I started reading it, I actually just read it with the intention of having fun, but later I realized that I was wrong. Both the changes in the protagonist's mentality and the strategies of various characters are well written. From this point of view, I think it is far better than most fanfics of this type. I hope the author can stop it from being unfinished.

Very good, but too short and not enough to read. Bei Ming Lei is finally dead, so happy.

I hope there will be a female protagonist in Dongfang Tiexin

In fact, it's okay for the heroine to be Bei Mingxue. After all, there isn't much to hate about Beimingxue. She was originally a very kind person. It is normal for him to hate the male protagonist because he killed his brother and many guards. After all, those people grew up with her, and Bei Minglei was his brother. If she doesn't hate the male protagonist even after he kills his brother, then isn't she just a love brain? Do you think this is good? How about adding the heroine with twin spirit swords?

I always feel that the protagonist still needs a master who can teach him to change his state of mind. Otherwise, as he goes on, he will become stronger and more self-centered, and he will be no different from the leader of the heaven and earth alliance. So far, the two female protagonists have not played this role, and it is reasonable to have a master who can make him stronger (personal opinion)

It's pretty good. The author is not slow in updating. It doesn't matter who is the heroine. It mainly depends on how the author writes it. After all, some like a single heroine, some like a harem, and some like no heroine. It depends on how the author arranges it. I'll leave that aside for now.

The writing is good. I hope Dongfang Tiexin will be the heroine and the only heroine.

Except for the incident with Bei Mingxue, which was a bit cruel, overall it was okay.

Author, author, I like the books you wrote very much. Now the second season of The Magic Soldier has been updated. Can you also update the second season? I really want to see you continue writing. Author, author, please, please, please, can you satisfy my wish? I really want to see you continue writing. And I think that in the second season, Dugu believes that his Nine Dragons Flying Knife can be further strengthened, like Nangong Wentian's. Nangong Wentian was Nuwa's side with the Sky Crystal Beast at the beginning. After returning, his strength has greatly increased. I think if the author updates the second season, the Nine Dragons Flying Knife can be strengthened in its second form. For example, the tenth flying knife can be awakened and the nine flying knives can be combined into one. Author, can you make a second season? The Magic Soldiers have been updated to the second season. And I think part of your writing is very good. I analyzed it, and if it were me, I would do the same. First of all, if Dugu Xin does not tell his life experience, considering the safety of his own home, everyone would be suspicious, and for a person who wants to destroy his home, even if you don't do it yourself, you are on his side, you said If I were to come out, not many people would believe it. If I were Bei Minglei, I would have tied him up and cut off his hands and hamstrings if I knew he was the young master of the Heaven and Earth Alliance. Moreover, killing him would still destroy his home, so I would also ask for a spell from him. If I don't control my home, it will still be destroyed. Let's not say whether I want to get the Divine Weapon Beast or him. Even if you don't want to get his magic weapon beast, you are doing it for the safety of your family. I don't think there is anything wrong with the author's writing of those paragraphs. I have also read other books before. Some people say that those authors ruin childhood. I don't think so. I think this article is very well written, and it is a novel anyway, not the original anime, such as If it is written in the original anime with just an additional character, and the plot is still the same as before, then what's the point? I might as well have traveled directly and become Nangong Wentian. But to be honest, I wrote Bei Ming Lei a bit greedily, but I don't like Bei Ming Lei myself. Why should I speak about the author for someone who doesn't like it? Moreover, the writing is also very good. Also, I strongly urge the author to release a second season. Please, I really like what you wrote.

Author, please make the male protagonist not too sadistic! Not for anything else, but because Liu's character was also called Dugu in ancient times. I really can't stand why Liu's character is also tortured in the novel.

First of all, this is not a cool article. If you like cool articles, don't come in. This book is quite good. The character creation is very clear. Jiu Ying, who was cunning at the beginning, became loyal to Dugu Xin, the hypocrite of Bei Ming's family and the kindness of Bei Mingxue. Dongfang Tiexin's attitude towards Duguxin has changed... The plot is also very exciting. The protagonist will encounter various difficulties. I like to see the protagonist solve various problems. Rhythm-wise I feel pretty good. It's good to calm down and watch. More authors! ! Come on, there are too many poisonous points [grievance]

[Continued from Chapter 59] In the snowy land of Beiming, a strange man appeared in a mass grave. The clothes he wore were obviously not of this era, and he had a strange aura about him. One of his eyes was red and the other was golden. It seems to represent light and darkness, the balance is constantly disintegrating, and the two energies seem to be eroding each other. He spoke softly: "The world of the young magic soldier?" It seems that this world is a little different. Are you a time traveler or a reincarnation person? ! How interesting. "His face showed many emotions and personalities, joy, despair, fear, happiness, excitement, anger, darkness and light. He continued: It seems that just the original people of this world can make such achievements, which is enough to prove the value of this world. Let's upgrade it from the deputy time and space to the main time and space. The chaos of time is about to begin again. There is no way to play in this interesting world, so let the clone go."

There weren't many books about the Magic Soldier before. Even if there were, they would only update a few chapters. This book is really good.

It's beautiful, wonderful, and the human heart is indeed the scariest thing. I cried when I saw Dugu Xin being tortured by them. I was really anxious at the time. The author's writing is great. Come on!

It's one of the few fanfics that can write so much and keep me reading. I look forward to your follow-up and hope you won't finish it <(_ _)>. For your next book, I hope you can try to write a fanfic of Jackie Chan's Adventures_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_. The heroine Xiaodama ヽ(´∀')ノ must not have an emotional line like Bei Mingxue( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )~, I still prefer a gentler one (´∀｀)♡, bye (*'▽'*)♪

I saw that many people gave this book low ratings, and I said it's not necessary. This book is about the Mysterious Weapons, so if you want to read about the crazy boy, you can read Xiaodou's book. Generally speaking, Xiaodou's book is about childhood, and this book is about reality.

I think it's very good, but the main character is too sad. Also, I wonder if the leader of the Heaven and Earth Alliance can write more. And in the end Tie Xin will be with Dugu Xin [I'm about to cry]

Alas, except for Beimingxue and Beimingxue, which are a bit miserable, the other places are very beautiful.

I don't know how to evaluate it. There are chapters that I like and there are chapters that I don't like. I hope the author can write better. I'll take my leave first. I read this book because I missed my childhood memories. Thank you so much to the author for writing this novel. I hope the author can write more exciting novels.

Author, you must finish writing, write well, and do it faster, it's not enough to read. Author, you successfully created my childhood goddess Dongfang Tiexin completely, unlike other authors who write all kinds of nonsense.

The writing is very good, it depicts human nature, desires and rights are all written out, which makes me feel a little frustrated, but it is not a problem. Life is not always smooth sailing.

Author, your book seems weird at first, but the more you read, the better it gets. I hope the author can write at least 800 to 1,000 chapters. Please don't mess around with a harem. If you must, don't bother with more than two. It's really good for the time being. If you write two chapters a day, you can give me 💯 points.

The subject matter is novel, the plot is rich, and the characterization is wonderful. The role of the original protagonist is weakened, but the follow-up is a bit hasty. The male protagonist is a bit kind-hearted, but the creation of the female protagonist feels a bit problematic and a slight failure. I kinda want to watch Jiuying's extra episode [Eating Melon] (personal opinion, don't curse)

I have to say that it is very well written. 🔪My heart is in a state of shock [stunned].

It's a very good book, and the plot is very thoughtful. However, the ending was a little hasty, maybe because the author consumed the plot, or because I didn't understand it well. I didn't quite agree with the ending of this book. I hope the author will think more carefully about this in his future books. Come on! [Cool][Awkward laugh]

It's extremely interesting. The book reveals the darkness of the human heart and the nature of the world. The protagonist, who originally yearned for light and love, was pushed into the abyss of killing by people's hearts.

What to say! Although it is a bit ruinous, it is one of the few fanfics that made me look at it from a more realistic perspective (the law of the jungle can be seen everywhere)! I hope that a single heroine (Bei Mingxue) is okay, not a harem! … Come on, there are too few novels like this, I hope the author can stick to it! [Like][Like][Like]

Dark Wind must have mixed reviews. I originally wanted to give it 3 stars, because although the main characters and villains in the original work are innocent, it is a children's anime after all, and it doesn't give people a brainless feeling. It can be regarded as a classic and it is actually a bit inappropriate to change it to a dark style. But considering that bonuses such as childhood memories may affect the rating, well, three and a half stars, forget it, four stars. Seeing that the plot becomes more and more outrageous later on, I feel like I still have to lower my score.