The Mismatched Female Partner of Cultivating Immortals Rises and Kills the Heroine at the Beginning

What I like most about this book is that every character in it is very vivid and has its own characteristics, and will not be overshadowed by the heroine, such as the talkative Xiangyuan; the hard-working and determined counterattack genius Mo Li; the meticulous Luo Mingchuan; the compassionate The crazy Jinguang Master; the miserable but kind-hearted witch Granny Hua; the ugly but miserable but extremely pyrotechnic butcher; the collector-obsessed master; the flexible and stretched Xiaoyaozi, and a series of supporting characters, all of whom have their own unique characteristics.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, I really don't rate it easily. This is the only book in the Immortal Cultivation category that I particularly like. It's not brainless or brainless in love (no cp for the time being). It's the best in the lower world, but it's still a manipulated puppet. Not only the heroine, but also the others are really written with very distinct personalities. The head brother of Sou, the protective and poisonous Xiaoyaozi, the righteous and evil senior brother, the arrogant little four-legged one, and of course the invincible genius master who silently shielded us during our humble growth period. All of them worked together to break the confinement seal of the upper world. There are endless challenges waiting for us when we go to the upper world. I feel really good.

The novel about cultivating immortals is pure and clear, there is no vulgar comedy, it is very funny when it is really funny, the plot and character creation are very successful, I like cp novels, but the author is very good at writing without cp, the heroine's aura is not so strong that she is invincible, but her heart is firm, the characters in this article are all very distinctive, good luck to the author

Ahhhhhhhh it looks so good, the author is asking for a sequel. I originally came in thinking that there was no cp point to read, but when I saw Lao Long and Wei Yue at the end, they really beat me to death. Why did it end so quickly? In other novels, the male and female protagonists have fought for 300 rounds. In this book, the two of them just held hands. I screamed when Lao Long called Wei Yue! Moreover, the structure of this book is very large, and it is more about what he has done for the common people in the world. This is really the structure of being a god, not the kind that destroys the world just by falling in love! The relationship between the two has been flowing for a long time, like an old couple. I really cried to death. I never saw them kiss once. We were so excited just holding hands. The author is asking for a sequel. I really recommend this book! ! !

Personally, I think the most outstanding feature of this book is that everyone is full and three-dimensional, with good and bad qualities. It's good-looking, funny, and the last sentence, "Stay with us forever and ever" is the most affectionate confession! Old Long, you really make me cry to death

I read it very carefully. It is a great group portrait. Each character has its own characteristics, advantages and disadvantages, and it feels more "flesh and blood". The whole text focuses on the "career of cultivating immortality", and the emotional lines (family, friendship, love, etc.) Are quite natural and will not make people feel stiff. Each character has his own way, his own pursuit and persistence. As for CP, this story can be considered CP-free. Weiyue and Zhu Yan have some very obscure love lines, and the ending is also open-ended. Whether they go traveling together as "friends", "partners" or "partners" is all up to you. If you are particularly concerned about the love line, then you can decide whether to read it or not. My favorite character is Master Jinguang. I feel sorry for his "loneliness" and admire his "tolerance". He is a true Buddhist. The speeches of the characters in the article are also quite interesting, and they often make you laugh. You can really give it a try.

It's much better than the many articles I've read that talk about love in the name of cultivating immortals. Although the heroine's cultivation is against the sky, it is more normal than others, and her strong mental power also gives a good explanation. The article I read before was vague about the heroine's powerful ability, and I don't know how she became so powerful. The heroine will not occupy all the treasures. The senior brother's lecture also touched my heart. The heroine also has a good personality, which suits me very well. I don't comment on the heroine's IQ, but in my opinion, many of the heroine's actions are not problematic. Some comments often say that the heroine's IQ is not good, she doesn't know how to embrace the master's lap, and she doesn't know how to profit from her identity. From a God's perspective, we will definitely disapprove of the behavior of some characters, but the characters themselves are uninformed, and they also have their own concerns and personalities. If you want to read a brainless and cool article, please leave the upper left corner, and you'll be welcome if you walk slowly [Love] [Love]

The best thing about this book is that each character is self-contained. The heroine and her friends grow up with each other. Each shines in their own field, is decisive in killing, has something to talk about, and has a team spirit. It is not the kind of protagonist who reserves his opinions on everything and finally shines by himself. So far, it is quite good.

After reading this book, I may not be able to look at other male protagonists for a long time. The emotional line is really smooth. I haven't liked a male protagonist so much in a long, long time. Although there are some plots that I don't like in the later part of the book, I can't completely reject the remaining 99% just because I don't like 1%. It's still very interesting. I look forward to the author's new book [Love] I have always been particularly fond of novels without cp. After reading this book, I realized that it's not that I don't like cp, but that I don't like the mindless emotional plot. This kind of natural relationship, I can't wait for them to get married where they are. Even at the end, I want to see a confession in the book. This kind of relationship really kills me.

So far it's very interesting, the author's writing is very good, the plot is not draggy, I like the heroine's character very much, and some parts of the article are quite funny. The interaction between Xiao Sijiao and the heroine is very interesting. I hope the author will maintain the style and change the map in the future.

Nice! Nice! Nice! Say important things three times! Hey hey hey! Everyone's IQ is online! The hostess doesn't say much! As long as there is a chance, I will kill the original heroine! For me, a bookworm of more than ten years, this book is a treasure! The author is so great, why do you only have one book? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

The heroine is decisive and quick, and she doesn't hide her clumsiness. It's really fun to stab the original heroine more than a dozen times at the beginning. Although she doesn't die completely, it's also fun to suppress the original heroine. The heroine is also the favorite of the sect (higher in seniority), so I can read it in one sitting! ! Finally, I hope you will be updated with great encouragement! [Love][love][love]

It looks good, the rhythm is okay, and the plot is smooth, but the front is not as exciting as the back, and the back is really good, because Miao Yun died, the front main line is completed, and it is finally no longer monotonous [face covering] The front is all about playing against this woman, although it is necessary to ascend, but it is still a bit annoying after watching for a long time. There is not much space for other characters, basically the heroine Miao Yun Zhuyan occasionally Ling Xiao, It's more fun when we get to the upper realm, and there are more roles for other people. The original male lead has become normal now without Miao Yun. The previous bosses have become "ordinary people" because they have reached the upper realm, and they are not so particular about the strong demeanor. They all let themselves go. Each one is more funny than the other [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] The characters feel fuller and more relaxed and humorous. There is no delay in advancing the main plot, which is very nice.

The pitfalls have basically been filled, everyone's image is relatively vivid, the story frame is solid, and there are no unfinished parts. Good reviews

It is a qualified orthodox novel about cultivating immortals. The overall plot is attractive. The laughs are not outdated even today, and the writing is not childish. After reading half of it, I feel that the most uncomfortable thing is that there are still many stereotypes about women. There are also some descriptions and jokes about women that are uncomfortable, and there are far fewer female characters in the group portraits. But because it is an old novel four or five years ago, I understand a little bit, and I can lower my standards and endure it. I still can't stand the next hundred or so chapters [laughs awkwardly]

I think the heroine is quite wise and I like her very much. It's very funny when I see those chapter reviews. When I was young, I wanted to make the heroine scream at the sky and the earth. I also called her a holy mother, and said that she was hesitant. I was speechless! Everyone's profile shows that the heroine is not a cool heroine, but a growth-oriented one!

I read it in one go, it was so exciting! The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the writing is fluent, and it makes you feel like you are on the scene. After reading it, I feel empty. I recommend it with five stars. Stay tuned for updates!

It's really the most interesting thing I've ever seen. The protagonist is decisive and upright in doing things. He takes revenge directly when he takes revenge. Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters are well written. He doesn't just focus on the protagonist the whole time and he is a hard-working protagonist. I almost died laughing at the part about Xiao Hong. Overall, it's really good. There is no male protagonist. This is the only book I want to comment on. I haven't read so many books. This is really good.

It's quite interesting, with a compact plot. I read it in one sitting and kept up with the updates. Like everyone else, I hope that the heroine will be beautiful alone. There is no need for a male protagonist. There is no need to talk about love in pursuit of immortality. It will only affect the speed of the heroine's sword.

After reading more than 200 chapters, it feels like nothing to me. The advantage is that it's a group portrait. The flaws don't hide the good points. There's no big problem. You can read it when you're short on books. It's entertaining. You can also read it when you're usually stressed and want to relax. Not suitable for babies who love to pay attention to details and love to watch strong women. ① The author is most likely not very good at describing battle scenes. At least there are not many battle scenes so far, and there is nothing exciting to bring to me. It is over in a few sentences. The protagonist does not have any memorable combat skills. The current way of fighting is to throw talismans and hold ice swords to use ice spells (she is not a swordsman and cannot use swords. The sword may be a magic damage bonus¿). After watching it for so long, I still have no real sense of her "strength", but this is not a shortcoming. Maybe it has something to do with the writing style. ② The male-female ratio is out of balance. To put it mildly, it is irreversible (currently). The female characters are either villains or have less roles. Miaoyun and Granny Hua are the more memorable female characters currently (conservative). Other than that, I can't think of any other female characters. Seeing that most of the core characters are male (of course, there may be more outstanding women in chapters I haven't seen yet?) It's not boxing. I think this problem is quite obvious. I read a little more and added some thoughts. I saw a plot that I was very disgusted with. In order not to spoil it, I can only say that it was a joke that made people speechless and angry. The author really wrote it in such a way that it was forced to be funny for the sake of humor. The protagonist who was teased was senior brother Bu Yuan. I don't understand the meaning of writing this paragraph. ? [Laugh][Like][Like] My evaluation is good luck 666 It's not that the heroine doesn't know how to use a sword, it's because the author rarely writes about the specifics of the heroine's strength. Except for the heroine's detailed process of learning talismans, almost all of her other skills come from the book of ice skills and immortal roots given to her by her master (roughly, my memory is average).

The heroine's character is decisive and decisive, and the plot is very exciting. Even the shadow of a big boss lying on the heroine's fairy root looks like the male protagonist! I don't have any emotional scenes at the moment. Let's watch the back to make sure the male lead is here~

I enjoyed reading this book so much that I couldn't bear to skip a chapter. I accept it with or without CP. I'm a fan of it myself. I've read a romance about cultivating immortals before, and it has a similar plot. The heroine is a mixed race of eight major races, and the hero is a god and demon. They live in the female body, grow together, accompany each other, and redeem each other. It's very fun to laugh at.

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go, it's so good! ! It's not enough at all, ahhhhhh [crazy] [crazy] Master Ling Xiao and Senior Brother Bu Yuan really fulfilled all my imaginations about powerful immortals and fellow seniors, I love them so much! [Send heart][Send heart] The characters of all the characters are very distinct and unique. There will be no names that do not match the characters and events. They are really awesome [Like] [Like] It's just a bit unsatisfactory, a little missing [note]

It focuses on cultivating immortality rather than falling in love, which is good There is cp, which is the heroine and the dragon she met at the beginning 🐉 (but there is almost no sugar, or no sugar, just a long stream of sugar, mainly for cultivating immortals) Everyone's role is clearly portrayed, such as the monk, master, senior brother, the original male protagonist, the butcher, Granny Hua, etc. There are many roles. It is different from the usual novels where the heroine is the main character and everything is saved by the heroine. However, in this novel, each character has its own characteristics and content. Not everything is written for the heroine to save, but for everyone to work together to save. Oops, I'm not good at organizing words, but it's pretty good-looking anyway! ! ! The only drawback is that there is no extra story, and the final ending with the male and female protagonists left me a bit unable to get up and down. I hope there will be more sweetness at the end.

It's very beautiful and funny. I like every character in it. They are all very unique. For example, after the original male protagonist left the original puppet female protagonist, the characters were okay. They have IQs and are very enjoyable. I like Master Jinguang and Wang Ergou the most [smile] [smile] It's a pity that some of the previous ones have disappeared, such as Guangguang [laugh]

This is the first novel about immortality that I have read so far. I haven't seen the emotional line yet, but I have to say that it is very interesting and very interesting. I really like the author's unhurried pace of writing... It doesn't have the heart-wrenching and tight feeling when reading the article. It just goes with the flow and doesn't feel like a forced CP. It suits my taste very well. Isn't it good to have a career? ! Why do we have to go through all kinds of hardships for love~~

It looks pretty good so far. If I have CP, I hope it will be a small four-legged one. The small four-legged one is so cute [eating melon] Follow up and see where my comments are [Hold]

This novel is really to my liking. I have always disliked novels about sticky romance. It would be annoying to me and I hope the heroine can start her own career. This novel has a very clear main line. The male and female protagonists have their own things to do and never fall in love. However, you can find a lot of sweetness in getting along with each other. It's really cool! The supporting characters created in the novel are also very lovable. Each supporting character has his own personality, life and goals. They are not just tools to serve the protagonist. The whole novel seems more flesh and blood. I won't say anything else, five five stars, five stars, five stars! !

This is the only book on Tomato that I can read without skipping a chapter. The supporting characters in it are all cute and funny Even evil people are not the kind of disgusting people who gnash their teeth. No one looks down on the heroine for being framed and hated for no reason. Generally speaking, it looks very comfortable. I won't degrade the heroine to be worthless for the sake of the plot and the story, and then slap her in the face. There are no emotional scenes like those slimy, yandere scenes. In fact, I can write more emotional scenes, hahaha

This is the first book about cultivating immortality that I can read through without skipping chapters. It's really amazing! The heroine doesn't procrastinate in doing things. What I've seen before is to kill someone and leave the original heroine to die at the end. In this rebirth, it's so cool to kill the original heroine in the first place! He didn't hesitate to slap her ears.