Pirates: Fishing for Thunder Fruit and Kaleidoscope at the Beginning

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years. Yuwen Tuo has waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng has waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, and White Snake has waited for Xu Xian waited for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yushu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a man was lying weakly on the bed. His face was pale, but the corners of his mouth were trembling slightly. Tears shone in the corners of his eyes. He murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update..."

Give yourself a review~! I just came to Tomato Report, and it is now the third day of opening the book. I would like to ask you how you found my book~!

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Jingxue waited for Baili Tusu In 900 years, Solanum nigrum waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for J Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, but I have been waiting stupidly for your update.

To be honest, I don't want the protagonist to join other people's forces. I still like the protagonist to create his own forces. It's not that I hate the father's or other people's forces. It's just that I don't like it very much, but the writing is still very good. Come on, author.

Let's put it bluntly, it's so good, why are there so few chapters? I've been short of books for so many days, and I finally found a good one. Tsk, it's not enough. I'm really convinced! Hurry up and update. My dear brother, there are only 3 chapters left. I couldn't bear to read it. Hey!

Author, I also want to write a book. After reading your content, I know which direction to take it in. Thank you, brother. The writing is really good, come on brother

Come on! Very nice. Hold on, don't collapse

The first day I set up a stall, I sold 13 yuan. People thought it was not delicious, so they smashed the stall and compensated me 500💰. I refused to accept it and argued with me, but I was beaten. After negotiation with the police, the other party compensated me ①w💰. The net income on the first day was 10,513 yuan. I called it a day. I wish you good luck tomorrow.

It's wonderful, the author writes it very well, I like it very much! I've read a lot of pirate fan fiction, and this is the best one I've read so far. Come on, author! ! !

Come on, my brother likes your novel very much. But my elder brother doesn't like the speed of your updates.

Good! I hope you continue to work hard and persevere [please update].

Every book across the sea is top notch, and the protagonist in every book will never tell Whitebeard that Ace will be caught. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

This is my first time reading a pirate novel, and I have seen more than a hundred pictures. And the only one. Come on, author! How can I tell you? I take back my five stars now. When did it become longer? I'll give it another five stars. If it was always this short, it would be one star. Men, don't be so short. 5,000 Words is fine, but if 10,000 words is really not possible, 6,000 words is fine.

I finished reading it in one go. The plot of Zefa, Fujitora, and Midori joining the pirates is quite novel. And it's the Whitebeard Pirates. To be honest, the war on the top is an eternal pain in the hearts of many One Piece fans. Whitebeard and Ace's body injury are hard to calm down in the hearts of many One Piece fans [I'm about to cry]

Author, who are you? The Guinness World Record is typing 807 letters per minute. Assuming that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type approximately 134 letters per minute. Since you are not a Guinness World Record holder, let's set it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep standard is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, 40 minutes going to the toilet, 20 minutes washing, one hour exercising, two hours for inspiration, and one hour of free time. , You should have nine hours to type, and type approximately 435,780 words, based on at least 2,000 words per chapter, but why do you only have so much content every day? Honestly, are you shortchanging it? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take a break like you!!!

How, how, how could there be such a beautiful book?

In the original war, because Ace was not his biological grandson, there was nothing he could do about it despite his deep feelings. But what if Luffy and Ace were tied up together for execution? Will Karp still be able to sit still? Should he choose to continue to uphold his justice or abandon justice to save his only grandson?

This book is quite good, I basically read it every time he updated it (this is because the author's updates are too short and weak [laughs])

I saw a book, the first Pirates book, a long-winded pirate novel. Although I haven't read fifty or sixty pirate novels, there are still more than thirty.

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

Hurry up and update it, every time you see the most exciting moment, it will be gone! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

Very beautiful, come on! ! ! Please update quickly! ! ! !

I read a few chapters and commentaries. . . The protagonist said he would join the Whitebeard Pirates, and then started to complain, run away, etc.! ! All I can say is that you can see it even without opening the introduction. It is mentioned at the beginning of the introduction that the protagonist will join the white group [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I am blind and blame others! I don't know if the book is good or not, I haven't read many chapters yet! Just come to the comment area to complain first [cover face][cover face][cover face] After seeing Chapter 84, is War on Top still written according to the original novel? Have they all joined the Whitebeard Pirates? Nothing has changed? The protagonist doesn't know which corner he's fighting in! ! ! To highlight the protagonist's awesomeness?

It's really good. I don't know why the rating is so low? ? ? ! !

It's really good, thank you to the author!

It's okay. I saw that I was going to save Whitebeard, but I felt that everyone except the male protagonist had become completely useless. I've read a fanfic about Fuan Ryu. The male protagonist became a nanny because he was too powerful. Although this is not a nanny, it feels almost the same. He constantly solves the crisis of the Whitebeard Pirates. It feels like a savior and the hope of the whole village.

I haven't watched it for a long time. It's good to come back. Really, I don't think it's blocked. First of all, I never believed in this rating. I watched a little bit last time because the art may have come back. If I really want to score, I think it can get more than nine points. It's not blocked at all. It's their business that they can't understand. Come on, I'm back.

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Update soon! Update soon! [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

The pirate part is very good, the plot is okay, it is basically an invincible novel, as long as you see the pirate plot, there are many problems with the Naruto part. The author should specialize in writing One Piece type, all four of them are about One Piece

The overall feeling is very good. I hope it can have some Chinese style.