I'm a Mess, and You Want Me to Live with a Succubus?

This is my first time writing a book, so please urge me to update it more. If you are capable, you can also give me a free tip~ The new book issue is updated five times a day~ Finally, give yourself a five-star rating!

First: there are too many irrelevant things. Second: There are quite a lot of holes dug. Third: Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, there must be a limit to hiding yourself. Currently at chapter 57, my patience is declining rapidly. Fourth: The villain is a bit brainless. If you want us to read it without brains, you can treat it as a brainless novel, but don't treat readers as fools. Fifth: The update is a bit slow. If you are still thinking about how to dig holes, stop it first and fill in the current holes. Sixth: If the introduction is just to seduce people, there is no need to do so. This will only lower your rating wildly. Seventh: Control the quality well, don't add icing on the cake and do some fancy things, which will make people think it's just waste materials. Eighth: I hope it can be improved. I will give you five stars for now. The follow-up remains to be seen. (I actually wanted to curse, but I held back, and so should other readers) (Please read the follow-up reviews slowly, these are the only ones for now)

The author is very small at first glance

It's my type, but a bit short

The writing and plot are very good, and the content is rich, but Leer's behavior makes me angry. She regards the male protagonist as a tool to break through the cultivation level. It's hard for me to see her sincerity in her feelings for the male protagonist. In addition, I was unhappy when she slandered the male protagonist in the square for her own selfish desires at the beginning. This makes the male protagonist the public enemy of all the boys in the school. How can she endure being humiliated everywhere? In the end, the heroine has to solve it! Isn't this a female queen in disguise? I'm still annoyed now. This is just a trial read for new readers, so you can enjoy it yourself...

Dim lights Toast to each other and make a couple The world is impermanent Childhood plums and bamboo horses are in turmoil Looking through the autumn water Leaning on the door and hoping for your return The full moon enters the window Pick up all the lone lights fleeting dream At that time it was in its prime Like stars and moon Just teach each other a lifetime A clear night's sleep Melancholy and confusion Thousands of worries and easy to sell Love is hard to sell Looking back at the past Whose youth is it? It's cold tonight Why share mandarin duck pillows? Thinking about the neon clothes of those days Everlasting grudge with Junge Drunk a thousand times Still remember the green silk sachet

I originally came to watch the driving, but found out that I didn't know what it was, and the more I looked at it, the more confused I became [face covering]

Not bad I felt very uncomfortable just now Later, the male protagonist was regarded as a passerby and the female protagonist was regarded as I think it's okay Not recommended to watch

I personally think it's very good. If I can keep writing, it's possible to publish a book. Come on, author. PS. The protagonist of the novel I wrote in high school is also named Lin Han. He also has an unknown background and identity. It's the same type of novel. Come on, author. Give me some inspiration.

It's pretty good, but if it doesn't work, the author should buy some popularity.

Author, where do you live? I'll send you special products! ! !

Why is the rating so low? This kind of love with purpose and skin

Hurry up and write as soon as you have the manuscript saved! !

Come on author, gifts and stars have been arranged, don't be too naughty [laughing][laughing]

Okay, very handsome

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.

I hope it's a single heroine

If the author doesn't change the protagonist, the rating won't be high.

Em, just give me five stars (dog head)

It's stuck very well. Don't get stuck next time and it will make you tired easily.

2024.5.2 (End) If not, it's gone [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

It's quite interesting, but sometimes it's too slow, like the word count is low, but I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's a very good book, but not many people have read it. [Sinister smile]

It feels pretty good and suits my appetite.

I like reading it very much. The author must keep writing. School is about to start. I will come back to read it during the National Day. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It still looks good

Like very much

The car door is welded shut, please open it. Where are people? Where has the author gone? Just tell me, stop being a eunuch!

Very nice, but a little short

I hope to include all the women who have romantic relationships! ! !