Let Me Say It Again, Practice Cooking More, Don't Say I'm Cheating

The writing is quite good, but there is another classic question. Can you update it as much as possible? Scratching one's head

I rather like the author's writing style, and I don't think it has any bad points. Maybe everyone has their own preferences. The protagonist is not a virgin, but a relatively egoist, but at the same time he also has a touch of warmth in his heart. He is a growth-oriented male protagonist, and I like the setting of the male protagonist. In fact, I don't understand why some people think that for a girl who has been soaked in bitterness since she was a child, something insignificant to the protagonist would be considered a harem. And the author has said it in detail, just because the protagonist has the same experience as someone else, but what is different from that girl is that the protagonist has an old man who is willing to be sincerely good to the protagonist, plus other people's abuse and isolation of the protagonist and the difficulties in life. Selfishness is for sure, but there is also human nature, so I think these chapters may just be to highlight the personal image of the protagonist (possibly, just a guess), which means that human nature still exists. After all, how can a person live in the world without human nature and self, and I think this is very similar to some scenes in reality. , And it is very close to the facts. I can't remember where I saw it. Anyway, I can't believe that a person who only lived in the apocalypse for one day can be indifferent to everything. No matter how you say it, you will have a touch of emotion, and the protagonist is not an old man who has experienced many vicissitudes of life. However, I believe that if the protagonist encounters more and more things in the future, he will not be embarrassed by such things. (I wonder if I have taken too many moral education classes in junior high school. I laugh so hard that I can't understand it at all. But every time I feel that I have no morals and am in self-doubt...) Although I think it may be a bit unrealistic to talk about reality in novels. But sometimes these things may be very normal in reality, but appear abnormal in novels. After all, not everyone may want to see them. So most of the time there is no logic in reality but logic is required in novels. However, I still follow the author's setting. It should not be a harem. The current female protagonist should be a spider with white hair, and a god, hatched by the male protagonist himself. I feel like this setting is quite good, and the others also have their own backgrounds. It's impossible for the whole apocalypse to have so many people, and only the male protagonist is special. I have to make a detour myself, I don't understand why I have to write so many words, and I suspect that I am too busy to panic. . . But after writing so many words, I couldn't bear to delete them. Let's make a string of emoticons: [Sending hearts] [Blowing kisses] [Learned] [OK] [Like] [Love] [Eating melon] [Cover your face] [Smirking] [Attention] [Full] [Sneaky smile] [Cool]

The author's writing style is so sophisticated that I can't find any faults. An apocalyptic novel must look like an apocalyptic novel. It must be humane but not holy, calm and decisive, not irritable when it's time to kill, and the supporting characters are not brainless. It's okay. This book is worth reading! Sui Feng, do you know how this past year has gone by? I wanted to read but didn't dare to read. I finally finished a few chapters, so hurry up and burst into flames [Working on the draft]

Currently the lone wolf + t0 strength + child bride with great potential + invincible golden finger. The writing is fine, and so is the subject matter. The writing can keep the current plot under control, and there are no bloody tricks. Except for the first time the protagonist meets the little girl, which feels a little out of context and a bit abrupt, everything else is okay. I'm quite interested in it, and the rating of this novel can be improved.

Finished in one go, very beautiful, worth investing in The writing is smooth and fluent, with no typos (currently) Novel subject matter, maximum appeal (Ahem, there is a white-haired lolita now, and maybe she will become a white-haired lady in the future [laughing evilly] Very sexy~) The only bad thing is that the number of words is too few [angry][angry][angry][angry] Author, as long as you can't write to death, write it to death for me [laughing evilly] Main topic: The protagonist's personality is a bit stubborn, but he is very brave, has a gambling spirit, and is a bit deceitful. He has a very profiteer physique, is decisive in killing, and is a bit stupid. He uses several weapons in exchange for a few useless skills. What makes me fall into the trap is that the protagonist is Seidi [laughing evilly] Let's take a look at the current one (100,000 words). It should be a harem story. One of the characters is a spider that can be conquered. Another one is the daughter of the King of War (Chen Hai) whose appearance is described in a paragraph. But I haven't come across it yet, so I can't tell if it is from the harem. There is also a hidden small character who I met in a clothing store. She may also be the heroine in the future. Emma, I can't think of anything. If you want to know, please ask below and I will reply in real time.

I think this article is much better than many on Tomato. It's not the first time I've read an article that combines apocalypse with games, but basically the protagonists are very selfish and their combat power is ruined. I think the plot and characters of this book are very good and different from others. I hope the author will work harder and update it, but don't overwork yourself, and then it will be bad, come on!

Classic question: Can there be more chapters? It's not enough. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

The writing is good and the author feels very good. After I commented on the previous mistakes, I not only replied but also corrected the mistakes. In short, it is a five-star review👍👍

Okay, finally found someone I can watch again [blowing kiss]

This book is considered to be the top one in the apocalypse in Tomato. The protagonist is not decisive in killing the two pets, but his attitude towards the two pets shows that he is cold-blooded towards strangers because of his childhood experience. Especially Chen Hai's description reflects the strength and responsibility of Chinese soldiers. It not only has the pleasure of refreshing writing, but also reduces the probability of the rhythm breaking with the communication between the characters. This book is one of those that has an apocalyptic feel but is not particularly dark, and I don't feel the need to control points. This book has no risk of being banned.

There are currently 109 chapters, let's rate them first. I hope the author will reply. [Praise] The content is very detailed, even very precise, and the subject matter is good. It was the first time I saw it, so I insisted on reading it. If it is not necessary, don't use the knife. Natural death is better and easier to accept. Open-minded and online IQ. Tujia Spider Girl is very good, this point is missed. [Criticism] In the middle of the book, people were a little drowsy, and then it became a little too watery. It is enough to introduce a species once. Don't introduce it all the time. It can easily become boring and even skip chapters. Although self-reflection is good, it should be done less often. Once or twice is fine. Looking back at the past every now and then makes me want to jump to the next chapter. You don't need to be so rigid, it's okay to be a little outside the box. [End] I hope the author will update it quickly. If possible, I will add the last star later.

I have been reading Ji Ling since 4 years ago. This book is also great. I felt so familiar from the beginning. It is indeed your book [laughing] Come on.

In this apocalyptic novel, the protagonist not only protects himself but also has the heart to save others. Standing in the place of absolute conflict between good and evil, he has a mobile fortress with me as the main character, adding a gray dawn to the apocalypse.

Regardless of the writing style, ideas, and outline, they are all very good, and there are no poisonous points. In my mind, the score of 9.2 Is really low. Only a score of at least 9.5 Is worthy of this book. Personal opinion: If you don't like it, don't complain [laughs]

How should I put it? It's a classic post-apocalyptic novel, and some of the writing is okay. We'll see how the plot develops in the future. So far, it's okay. I'm afraid that the world view is too grand and the editor won't know how to write it. I hope the author can make up for the mistakes. In that case, it will be very good, but I don't have high expectations. After all, it's a refreshing novel, but it's okay to watch it. After all, this is not what I'm here for.

It's quite good-looking, and the author's writing style is also quite delicate. Although it's a refreshing piece of writing, it's humane and not like a saint. It's comfortable to read, but the author's aesthetics are a bit hard to describe.

I haven't seen such a good book on Tomato for a long time. I haven't read any flaws so far. It's not messy. I feel good about the characters. I hope it won't fall apart in the future. I'll wait and see. If there are no problems at 100, I will give five stars. If there is a heroine, don't delay and cause trouble. Thank you. Finally, let me ask the author where he originally wrote the article? Okay, do what you say

It's very interesting, but there's only one question: can the author evolve into a tentacle monster? It's so interesting that two chapters in one day is not enough! It's so uncomfortable, why did I encounter such a beautiful novel? But it's not finished? Come on, author, you have to stand up! [Cover face]

A very good book, but lacking some details. I'm a little curious whether Jiang Ling will be taken in later. After all, the protagonist and Chu Xue are of different races, so there shouldn't be any problem taking in a wife of the same race, right?

Nice looking, not tacky. The protagonist's IQ is online, and it seems that he is not a virgin for the time being. Although some data judgments are written a little wrong, it does not affect the overall quality of the book. The plot is tight and the logic is rigorous. The most important thing is that the male protagonist has a white-haired lolita wife! [Current reading chapter 72] What a good boy! The thief is obedient! So cute! What a sensible person! Thieves can fight!

I have read several similar books, about ten thousand times increase and so on. This one has the most rigorous data. The use of plug-ins is also smart. They are all the best I have read in the same genre. Good work, author. Only with clear ideas can you produce good works. I hope that the data will not collapse like some in the future.

There are currently no poisonous points. The reason why the rating is a bit low is because there are many people who keep books. If the author keeps this quality up and updates it more, it will definitely become a hit. The main thing is to be able to stick with it, this is a novel full of potential. (The affirmation of a long-time bookworm)

I haven't read much yet, but I've read four or five chapters. Hmm... It's quite good. I thought about it, so I looked through the comments, and then I realized that this author is very active, and he can also beg for help [face covering]... It feels... So cute! Take away the five stars, no thanks [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I really think this book is good. I have read a lot of post-apocalyptic books. I hope it can be updated more often. Also, are you the one who also wrote Ji Ling Chaos Jue? [Stunned][stunned][stunned]

Faster, faster, more [Flying kisses] [Flowing kisses] [Flowing kisses] [Flying kisses] By the way, I would like to ask the author whether this book has a single heroine? ? I always like the Spider Queen. Wuwuwu [crying] [crying] [crying] I want 1v1 [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

I originally wanted to give this book four stars because the updates are too slow, but this book really attracted me. I am a picky person who can make me read my novels seriously. There are few books that can be considered one of them, so I must give it a five-star rating. There should be only two people who can become the heroine of this book. The first one is the strong woman. The second one is the white-haired and red-eyed lolita from Chuxue. There should be the one behind the hero who helped the girl chase the hero. In short, I will definitely finish this book. Looking forward to~[thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Remove the word "I" in front of the novel you are reading.

A highly recommended book To sum it up, the male protagonist is not a virgin but he has a basic bottom line and human touch. This alone really hits my mark [shy][shy] Furthermore, the plot is good and the logic is complete. To be honest, this is the first time I have read a novel where I couldn't figure out more sexy tricks with the golden finger that the male protagonist got. In the novels I read in the past, the male protagonist acted like an NT. He got a golden finger but behaved himself, not daring to try to fix bugs or anything like that. This novel is the first crazily buggy novel I've ever read, and I really like it. The writing style is also good. Although it is still an updated novel, it is the kind of book that hits the mark and has no poisonous points. The logic is perfect but not broken. The male protagonist is not a virgin but has a bottom line. In summary, it is a rare good book. As long as I keep writing like this, I will definitely pursue it to the end.

Not bad, hurry up and update it. I read this word count in half a day, how can one chapter only have more than 2,000 words? At least 4,000 words. Others write one chapter with more than 10,000 words, two chapters a day, so they make a lot of money.

There are too few, and everything else is very good. The combat power setting is not broken, and it cannot be compared with humans. It is mainly compared with the dangers that the male protagonist is facing now. There is no sense of depression. It is good that the number of female protagonists may not be single. If you don't think blindly, you won't feel brainless. Just follow the author's ideas. It's very good! It is recommended to enter the pit! ! !

Recommended viewing, the protagonist's IQ is online and the story logic is clear. The origin of skills is introduced. This book is different from other books in that it does not have an illogical self-contained system for crossing the book. Now this illogical and brainless cool article is too popular with the public. Is it a brainless cool? ? The protagonist next door has a system and no brains! ! Looking at it makes me want to go in and have sex. Let's talk about the protagonist of this article. There is a reason why it is worth appreciating and reading. When he does not obtain the [Sublimation] skill, the protagonist calmly observes the situation and looks for a suitable house for survival. No anxiety, no laughing while acquiring skills, calm thinking. The character creation is really good, just to let you know that I can still live a healthy life without cheating. After cheating, it is the icing on the cake. This article is not without its shortcomings. The skill introduction and some descriptions are a bit too detailed. It could be a little simpler, which would make it easier to read. Finally, come on, author, this is a good novel, please try to update it! ! ! ! ! ! !