[Book-traveling theme + school beauty + single female protagonist]
Li Ze went through the books and became a college freshman. He wanted to return to reality with peace of mind after completing the tasks given by the system, but an unexpected combination of circumstances made the school belle become obsessed with him. Li Ze, who only wanted to go back, kept doing the tasks assigned by the system and leaving the school beauty aside. The aggrieved school beauty actually treated him...
Reader comments
It's very good, but the writing style is a bit immature. It can be clearly felt that the author really wants to advance the plot. Therefore, the pace of the book is a bit fast, so the description of the details is not very satisfactory. Lin Qingxue's psychological description is very good, at least I enjoyed reading it [smile]
So, who is this heroine? ()
If Li Ze and Lin Qingxue were together in the end. I would think that Lin Qingxue was a tsundere, and she had a secret love for Li Ze after he changed. It feels like Lin Qingxue's love is really cheap. She fell in love with one Li Ze's soul and another Li Ze's body. I feel really sad for "Li Ze", and it's also ironic. He may not have thought that the person he liked before his "death" could still like "him", and maybe it wasn't him either. I would rather see it be tragic in the end, but I still hope that Li Ze can find someone who is really worth liking. The world is turbid, sin and love sing together. (This is just what I want to say, the author can write according to his own wishes)
It's very good to watch, but I just need to torture the heroine more! 😍
The ideas are clear and concise, without any confusion. This is the best novel in this genre that I have ever read! But I personally think that the male protagonist is a little hesitant in terms of relationships. If he could be improved a little bit, I think it would be better. Big cheers for the author [Like]
Five stars, but I would like to make a suggestion, let Yi Wanxin be the heroine, or someone else can do it, but don't let Lin Qingxue be the heroine. How can I put it, letting her be the heroine would be weird ˃ʍ˂
Author, could the final ending not be so sad? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
It's so pretty. The more yandere Lin Qingxue is, the more I like it, hehehe.
It's really good and interesting, but Lin Qingxue should stop being yandere, otherwise Lin Qingxue will probably stab her later.
Come on, author! I give you five stars and I will withdraw.
The author should just write according to his own ideas and don't be influenced by others.
It's beautiful (♥∀♥), I like it like this
Very good, good luck to the author
Very good, cheers for the author [Like][Like][Like]
Author, the plots you wrote are the same as those I have watched before. Can Xu Min be the heroine?
Xu Min is much better. She might as well be the heroine. We are not watching the two parties become lovers later. We hope that the love story between the protagonist and Xu Min will be
Author, please don't give me a knife, I've been numb by the knife recently
Chapter 27, I still disconnected when I was watching it.
Is this chapter 56 the author's real experience?
It's very good. Is it a harem story?
This style of writing is rarely seen anymore. I like it very much.
Can you update two chapters every day? Only one chapter every day is not enough. You don't have any ratings now because there are too few words.
Not bad, not bad, keep up the good work! Don't take it off the shelves altogether
This is one of the best romance novels I have ever read. I like it very much and hope to continue doing so.
It's really good, but in the end, will the protagonist end up with Lin Qingxue?
It seems that Yu Huai's writing is pretty good.
Author I want a knife!
Is the heroine Xu Min?
If it were Xu Min, I would just stop watching it.
It's okay, come on
Author, I think there is something wrong with your sentence segmentation [smile]
My evaluation is that I probably watched Yu Huai again
It's not bad, but it's a bit too much for the heroine.
It's very good, but the writing style is a bit immature. It can be clearly felt that the author really wants to advance the plot. Therefore, the pace of the book is a bit fast, so the description of the details is not very satisfactory. Lin Qingxue's psychological description is very good, at least I enjoyed reading it [smile]
So, who is this heroine? ()
If Li Ze and Lin Qingxue were together in the end. I would think that Lin Qingxue was a tsundere, and she had a secret love for Li Ze after he changed. It feels like Lin Qingxue's love is really cheap. She fell in love with one Li Ze's soul and another Li Ze's body. I feel really sad for "Li Ze", and it's also ironic. He may not have thought that the person he liked before his "death" could still like "him", and maybe it wasn't him either. I would rather see it be tragic in the end, but I still hope that Li Ze can find someone who is really worth liking. The world is turbid, sin and love sing together. (This is just what I want to say, the author can write according to his own wishes)
It's very good to watch, but I just need to torture the heroine more! 😍
The ideas are clear and concise, without any confusion. This is the best novel in this genre that I have ever read! But I personally think that the male protagonist is a little hesitant in terms of relationships. If he could be improved a little bit, I think it would be better. Big cheers for the author [Like]
Five stars, but I would like to make a suggestion, let Yi Wanxin be the heroine, or someone else can do it, but don't let Lin Qingxue be the heroine. How can I put it, letting her be the heroine would be weird ˃ʍ˂
Author, could the final ending not be so sad? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
It's so pretty. The more yandere Lin Qingxue is, the more I like it, hehehe.
It's really good and interesting, but Lin Qingxue should stop being yandere, otherwise Lin Qingxue will probably stab her later.
Come on, author! I give you five stars and I will withdraw.
The author should just write according to his own ideas and don't be influenced by others.
It's beautiful (♥∀♥), I like it like this
Very good, good luck to the author
Very good, cheers for the author [Like][Like][Like]
Author, the plots you wrote are the same as those I have watched before. Can Xu Min be the heroine? Xu Min is much better. She might as well be the heroine. We are not watching the two parties become lovers later. We hope that the love story between the protagonist and Xu Min will be
Author, please don't give me a knife, I've been numb by the knife recently
Chapter 27, I still disconnected when I was watching it. Is this chapter 56 the author's real experience?
It's very good. Is it a harem story?
This style of writing is rarely seen anymore. I like it very much.
Can you update two chapters every day? Only one chapter every day is not enough. You don't have any ratings now because there are too few words.
Not bad, not bad, keep up the good work! Don't take it off the shelves altogether
This is one of the best romance novels I have ever read. I like it very much and hope to continue doing so.
It's really good, but in the end, will the protagonist end up with Lin Qingxue?
It seems that Yu Huai's writing is pretty good.
Author I want a knife!
Is the heroine Xu Min? If it were Xu Min, I would just stop watching it.
It's okay, come on
Author, I think there is something wrong with your sentence segmentation [smile]
My evaluation is that I probably watched Yu Huai again
It's not bad, but it's a bit too much for the heroine.