NBA: All-Around Small Forward

Hello, fellow book lovers. In the vast sea of ​​people, I am honored that you can come and read my novel. I am a new author, you can call me Xiaobai. This is the first basketball article and the second novel I have written. Here, I would like to ask everyone, what are the poisonous points of basketball articles in general? I took a look at the basketball articles written by other authors, and found that some had harems. When I wrote about football, many readers didn't even want a single female protagonist. So if you find any poisonous points or mistakes in my novels, please tell me if it's convenient. Thank you all in advance. In addition to being a new author, I am also a reader like everyone else, but I am a reader who acts on impulse. Now I can read other people's books objectively, but I find that reading novels written by myself can sometimes lead to confusion. Each of your good suggestions is the nutritional element for my novel to grow into an excellent work.

It looks very comfortable, and it is obviously different from other basketball articles. He does not have those anti-human skills in anime, nor does he break records from the beginning and get 40 or 50 points. Although there is a system, he also grows step by step and conquers one by one. The protagonist has a clear sense of teamwork (with a God's perspective) and will not deliberately score points, at least for now, which I think is very good. Some basketball players score points in isolation, and almost only pass the ball to him alone in a game, which is very unrealistic. Having said so much, come on! I hope you will get better and better as you write more, and more and more people will read it.

I have read a lot of basketball articles, but I always felt that something was wrong. This one was very suitable for my taste. It is not invincible and slowly grows up. What surprised me most is that it did not travel very far. In other books, there are always plots of fighting against Jordan, against Kobe, against LeBron James. This book made me feel the feeling of a new star slowly rising in the new era. It is really good-looking.

In Mr. Qiao's battle of proof, he and his teammates were in charge of killing each other. He was responsible for the random killing, and his teammates were responsible for the killing.

Come on💪I will always support the author. I have read a lot of basketball novels, but I still think this novel has a different feel and is very good. Come on. Come on. I just wish I could update more and I just finished reading it [crying] [crying]

I haven't finished the book yet, but when I saw that the main character's name was Liu Xia, I couldn't suppress my complaints. I could already foresee the wonderful scene where the whole audience would shout "obscene" after the main character scored a good goal. There is nothing wrong with foreigners adding nationality before calling the protagonist, but people from your own country also add nationality when calling him. I think you are exaggerating the number of words [laughing and crying]

Recommended. I hope the author can add more tricks to a certain audio and video. Don't send love messages all the time. The audience will have visual fatigue and have already guessed the result. Since it is daily life, you can ask the team if they can share the team's catering, training machines, etc., And share entertainment projects (love volunteers must be included, but they can be easily carried through, and there must also be duels). However, this is a basketball novel, and the focus is on the basketball game. Don't write too much.

To be honest, it's okay. But brother, are you really doing it? Write about the game. You still have the contract with the sneaker brand. Don't the protagonists accept advertisements? I hope it can be written about life. Come on, brother [like]

Overall, it's pretty good. Here are some suggestions for the author. ① If the author really wants the protagonist to become that kind of fancy passer, it is still recommended that the protagonist changes to a point guard. The protagonist's various abilities are quite consistent with those of a point guard. For similar playing styles, you can refer to Magic or Nash. And I am also looking forward to the emergence of a traditional point guard in today's small ball leagues. ② In terms of configuration, the author can find a scorer for the protagonist (specifically, Kemba Walker... Can be used as a trading chip). Anyway, the protagonist organizes the offense, and the teammates are responsible for putting the ball into the basket. You can find some players like KD or Harden. At the same time, the protagonist also has three-point shooting ability, which can help them open up space and complement each other. ③The protagonist's offensive desire should not be so low. The small forward is the most comprehensive among the five positions. You can appropriately add offensive methods, such as mid-range shots and breakthrough layups, which can increase the enjoyment of the game and the excitement of the article.

When writing about basketball, write about basketball well. Elena and that Xiaoli write more than basketball.

The writing is very good, and the author often pays attention to the comments.

Come on, come on, don't collapse the male protagonist's data in the later stage (already added to the bookshelf) The protagonist's bravery in typing letters was well received

Very good. The subject matter is novel. It's not about joining the Lakers or being invincible. The plot is relatively new. I hope the author will continue to write well. Some ideas: You can add some plots about missed shots to create a little more suspense, otherwise it will feel like the protagonist will take the shot (add some suspense in the early stage, and in the middle and later stages, if the protagonist is strong, you can increase the difficulty, such as difficult shots, layups and dunks). To enrich the storyline, add some signed sneakers, merchandise, and make some small investments (shorthand and a few strokes will only serve to enrich the story and enhance the authenticity and rationality). The love line is about dating and playing during vacation time (it will break down if written too much), and the female protagonist does not provide much encouragement, support, and companionship to the male protagonist. Occasionally entertaining during the vacation (returning to the country, interacting with the stars, etc.)... So much comes to mind for the time being. The above are all personal thoughts, and the author can consider them. The writing is already very good, and you are very humble in interacting with readers. Keep up the good work! [Blowing kiss]

Brother, this book is really good. If you have a conquest level of 100%, you can fencing.

This book is very good, But author, can you be a little more? ! ! ! ! !

I had forgotten whether I had read it, but after reading the comment section, the author deserves 5 stars. The author has carefully read the opinions, suggestions, etc. Given in the comment area, thought about them seriously, and responded. This is what a good author looks like, and only in this way can we make progress! ! ! Come on! ! ! I've followed you, and I've followed your books. I hope you won't change your original intention, and your books will get better and better and become more popular! ! !

It's well written. Keep up the good work, the author, and keep writing steadily. I will keep pursuing it [Like]

Come on! Author, well written

I just like this kind of slowly growing ones. Those who are invincible at the beginning are still playing. Come on.

The book is relatively perfect. I personally think that the protagonist can win another championship. In that case, with six consecutive championships, he can compete with Jordan for the first place in history. And Jordan's 12 championships will be one more than Russell. From now on, he will be the one to award the FMVP.

Not bad! You are not invincible from the start! The auxiliary system becomes little by little! But the timeline is a bit late! As a result, it was written for five seasons! After all, the writer has to edit it himself! That's okay

It's rare to see such a long NBA novel written. Good luck to the author.

Very exciting, very good, keep up the good work

Chapter 44, so good for now!

Well written! Come on! 💪

No reason, it just looks good!

The content is okay, as long as the protagonist's jersey number is [laughs][laughs]

Come on, I'm waiting for you. I'll wait for you to update for a while.

I personally am very optimistic about three goals and 77, but they are rare on Tomato. Since I have encountered them now, I will give them 5 stars. "To be seen"

[Like] [Like] [Like] I won't say much more, this book is really beautiful.