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It's very imaginative~~~ It's refreshing! [Eat melon]

The subject matter is very novel, and the writing style is also very good. I hope I won't be overwhelmed by the writing in the future. The author is really too short

Really, I was very surprised by the writing of this book. As a new author, my writing skills are much better than those of new authors like Tomato. The rhythm is tight but there are no irrelevant parts. The writing style and historical knowledge are generally not faulty. The characters are really well written. This book is outstanding from top to bottom. The only shortcoming is that, who are you writing it for? Can you write more [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

This book mainly focuses on ancient people and the past and present because of the protagonist's inn travel. It can give some difficult feelings or heroic songs to change the destiny, and it will not affect the actual history in the novel. For example, in the book, Ying Zheng changed the destiny of the Qin Dynasty by understanding the death of the second generation. It left enough reverie for Da Qin fans. In addition, there are Li Qingzhao, Prime Minister (as for which Prime Minister you are, it depends on whether you are a good wife), and Liu Che of Han Dynasty. There is even an interesting plot in the book where Emperor Qin called Xiang Yu his brother even though he didn't know that he was one of the murderers of Qin, and asked Yu Ji to call him brother Zheng. After learning that Xiang Yu was one of the murderers of Qin, he cut off Xiang Yu's hair to comfort the kings of Qin. It is worth mentioning that when Shang Yang entered the inn, he happened to encounter two people fighting. To sum up, all of the above are oral descriptions. If you want to understand the main text, you might as well click on it first (putting pressure on every author [laughter])

I like the content very much. I once thought about writing about an ancient apartment, where people who have been famous throughout the ages live, but unfortunately I can't do it. The content is a problem. If it is funny, it will become boring after a long time. I feel so tired after seeing this sister.

A great book with novel ideas

So far it seems okay. Author, please don't write too much. I have seen many stories over the years that have a wonderful start but are terrible at the end. In the end, the author writes better and better

Everything else is good, but I am disgusted by Momonosuke-like Hu Hai. I hope he will be sent away or his role will be reduced to almost non-existence. No one will like people like Momonosuke. You will lower the score of your book.

There are no big problems, but small problems continue. Although Li Qingzhao is a poet of the graceful school, he can be said to be proficient in drinking and gambling. He has also published a book on gambling. Hua Mulan has been in the army for many years and no one found out that she is a woman, but as soon as she entered the inn, she was discovered by everyone. Hu Hai was seven years old and was hugged by Li Qingzhao and Hua Mulan. I remember In ancient times, there was a rule that men and women were seated at different ages when they were seven years old. Moreover, Hua Mulan was twenty-three years old, so she was almost Hu Hai's aunt. Generally speaking, women in ancient times got married at the age of thirteen or fourteen. Let's assume that Hu Hai's mother was sixteen when she gave birth to Hu Hai. Then Hu Hai was seven years old, and Hu Hai's mother was twenty-three. She is three years older than Hua Mulan, so isn't she her aunt?

For now, it's great and interesting. I don't need to worry too much about the details. After all, it is a funny daily article. The author remembers his promise to me and will write about Brother Zheng and the others playing with their own heroes later. Hahaha. I want to see their strategies and tactics, mutual losses, and see how Zhuge Liang strategizes. Brother Yu How to charge into battle, "You five are surrounded by me", watch Li Bai drunkenly shouting slanderous words, chase the opponent, watch Brother Zheng dodge majestic but polite, and then fight Brother Yu with a small sword to complete their unfinished "one-on-one"... That's it, hahaha, there is one more thing...

I will definitely meet people. From now on, this is really beautiful, beautiful, how can I say it? He and I were the crazy Dave of Konoha in One Piece. These three and him, I can finish them all in one go. And whether Xiang Yu will come back or not.

It's good-looking, and it gave me a feeling of "Love Apartment" when watching it, which was warm and cozy. But without losing the humor. I read it in one go, it was so enjoyable.

The subject matter is very good and the plot is also very good. I give it a five-star rating👍

Why are there two people, Hu Hai and his sister? The key is to just write. I feel that the writing about Hu Hai and his sister has lowered everyone's IQ. The other parts feel good. Come on, author.

Come on, the author, I really like this type.

Okay, great, support, thumbs up, come on! Author, please remember to take a rest.

The author's writing is very good, but I have a suggestion, why not add some foreign characters? For example, Caesar, Alexander, Hannibal... Of course, I hope that the author will be pertinent when writing about them, that is, write according to history and try not to bring too much personal subjectivity (it is okay as long as there are no magic changes) Because I don't have much money, I can only watch all those advertisements every day and use my love to generate electricity [face covering]. Please forgive me, the author.

It looks okay. This star is for Mulan. I feel that the description of Mulan is not as good as the description. She has a bit of a unruly temperament and is unreasonable. Anyway, I feel that it does not fit the impression of Mulan in my mind.

The five stars given because of the "big man", I owe you the review first.

It's written too slowly [smile] If it's so slow, I'm going to pay for the one-star review for the next chapter.

Not bad, very interesting, but too little. Can there be more? ! ! ! !

It's a good book, the characters are vividly drawn, and the output is high. It's six chapters in less than a day. But there are two questions I want to know. The first is where can I buy this generation of tables that are so durable and have anti-armor? The second is when can Shang Yang go to the Qin Dynasty?

I like it very much, the subject matter is novel Overall it's very good, but the chapters are too few and not enough to read. I hope the author will update as soon as possible.

666 There are very few tomatoes that I can add to my bookshelf for a long time. It is in the leopard head stage. It has good layout and long-term book activities. If there is a rank for writing a book, after the author finishes Tiger Tail, he will immediately ascend to Immortal Emperor My second treasure-level novel about gods in Tomato

Overall, it's okay. Keep working hard. It would be more interesting to add more celebrities from various dynasties who promoted the historical process.

Five-star praise is given

The author wrote it very well. Come on! [Sending Hearts]

Not bad, hope to keep it up

Can Hu Hai die? Can Hu Hai die? Can Hu Hai die? Hu Hai must die [anger] [punch] [stare]

Not bad, a bit mindless writing