Historical Tales: The Spring and Autumn Inn

It's very imaginative~~~ It's refreshing! 🍉

The subject matter is very novel, and the writing style is also very good. I hope I won't be overwhelmed by the writing in the future. The author is really too short

Really, I was very surprised by the writing of this book. As a new author, my writing skills are much better than those of new authors like Tomato. The rhythm is tight but there are no irrelevant parts. The writing style and historical knowledge are generally not faulty. The characters are really well written. This book is outstanding from top to bottom. The only shortcoming is that, who are you writing it for? Can you write more 😏😏😏

This book mainly focuses on ancient people and the past and present because of the protagonist's inn travel. It can give some difficult feelings or heroic songs to change the destiny, and it will not affect the actual history in the novel. For example, in the book, Ying Zheng changed the destiny of the Qin Dynasty by understanding the death of the second generation. It left enough reverie for Da Qin fans. In addition, there are Li Qingzhao, Prime Minister (as for which Prime Minister you are, it depends on whether you are a good wife), and Liu Che of Han Dynasty. There is even an interesting plot in the book where Emperor Qin called Xiang Yu his brother even though he didn't know that he was one of the murderers of Qin, and asked Yu Ji to call him brother Zheng. After learning that Xiang Yu was one of the murderers of Qin, he cut off Xiang Yu's hair to comfort the kings of Qin. It is worth mentioning that when Shang Yang entered the inn, he happened to encounter two people fighting. To sum up, all of the above are oral descriptions. If you want to understand the main text, you might as well click on it first (putting pressure on every author [laughter])

I like the content very much. I once thought about writing about an ancient apartment, where people who have been famous throughout the ages live, but unfortunately I can't do it. The content is a problem. If it is funny, it will become boring after a long time. I feel so tired after seeing this sister.

A great book with novel ideas

So far it seems okay. Author, please don't write too much. I have seen many stories over the years that have a wonderful start but are terrible at the end. In the end, the author writes better and better

Everything else is good, but I am disgusted by Momonosuke-like Hu Hai. I hope he will be sent away or his role will be reduced to almost non-existence. No one will like people like Momonosuke. You will lower the score of your book.

There are no big problems, but small problems continue. Although Li Qingzhao is a poet of the graceful school, he can be said to be proficient in drinking and gambling. He has also published a book on gambling. Hua Mulan has been in the army for many years and no one found out that she is a woman, but as soon as she entered the inn, she was discovered by everyone. Hu Hai was seven years old and was hugged by Li Qingzhao and Hua Mulan. I remember In ancient times, there was a rule that men and women were seated at different ages when they were seven years old. Moreover, Hua Mulan was twenty-three years old, so she was almost Hu Hai's aunt. Generally speaking, women in ancient times got married at the age of thirteen or fourteen. Let's assume that Hu Hai's mother was sixteen when she gave birth to Hu Hai. Then Hu Hai was seven years old, and Hu Hai's mother was twenty-three. She is three years older than Hua Mulan, so isn't she her aunt?

For now, it's great and interesting. I don't need to worry too much about the details. After all, it is a funny daily article. The author remembers his promise to me and will write about Brother Zheng and the others playing with their own heroes later. Hahaha. I want to see their strategies and tactics, mutual losses, and see how Zhuge Liang strategizes. Brother Yu How to charge into battle, "You five are surrounded by me", watch Li Bai drunkenly shouting slanderous words, chase the opponent, watch Brother Zheng dodge majestic but polite, and then fight Brother Yu with a small sword to complete their unfinished "one-on-one"... That's it, hahaha, there is one more thing...