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I read both books at once and they were very exciting.

Very good, the type I like to watch

One more thing, after the semi-finals of the loser group, we have to play dyg. Jc, but you can skip it, author. You can actually consider developing the protagonist only in the direction of wild shooting, so that he and Yinuo form a dual core, which is convenient for writing later 2020 games, such as ag's Mabuhu. However, I still want to mention whether the 2019 autumn finals can still be played by the original team, because this is the first championship won by ag after returning, and it is an explanation to the fans, so the original team is the best. And after that, the coach will retire, so the protagonist of the Winter Champions Cup can continue to play in the wild, and maybe he can win the championship. As for FMVP, it is okay to give the protagonist a promise. After all, there will be a Summer Champions Cup later. One more important point is not to include a female protagonist. To be honest, e-sports novels are not popular because they have female protagonists. There is a saying that there is no love in e-sports, so it is better not to write about female protagonists. This will make many e-sports fans lose the fun of reading. At least I have seen that many people abandon the book as soon as the female protagonist comes out in e-sports novels, but if you want to write it, you can write it in a side story. By the way, don't separate the gp combination and the six-one combination. Behind the protagonist, you can play three or two with the team, and the midfielder and shooter assist. This is okay. Xiaoying will be at his absolute peak at that time, and he will not be good. If it is written like this, both the protagonist and Yinuo will shine. It does not mean that the protagonist is invincible and the novel is cool. If the writing is good enough, it can beat many novels of this type. Of course, the above are suggestions for the author. Whether you adopt them or not depends on the author. That's all. I hope the author can use this novel to make up for the regrets of ag players and fans. Thank you.

Sage of Six Paths: Come and divide the chakra, one for each tail and one for the nine tails. One portion for the second tail and one portion for the nine tails. One for the three-tails, one for the nine-tails... Okay, after dividing up the remaining 82 portions, all are for the nine-tails [Shiba Inu]

Why is it over again?

Why is it finished again? Both books were finished after writing dozens of pages?!

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

This book is particularly beautiful. The previous book is also on the bookshelf.

It's okay, but can the author change the written picture, like the previous one?

I finished reading two books in less than an hour, so why is the second one finished at chapter 29? ? !

His grandma's, hurry up and update it, it has nothing but good looks [laughing]

Why is the friendship over?

If you weren't a big brother, why would you end it again?

I don't know how to say it, it's beautiful.

Gone? Is that all? [Cover face]

It looks good if you like it

The author worked hard, it's really beautiful Didn't the author leave out the back part? It's quite nice.

Why did it end again?

Why is it over again?

I was finally moved once, but you made me lose so completely.

What happened to the author? Why don't you write it?

Author, the size of your "book" is not long.

I have read both books, please update faster, gogogogogo

Somewhat familiar, I feel like I've seen it before

No, brother, why are you finished again? I thought it was written by myself, but I didn't expect it to be a certain Lu porter.

Ollie, Ollie, I thought you couldn't write anymore

It looks good, good luck to the author!

... It's finished again 😓 Great cheers

Why is it over again? Can't get enough!

Very good, very beautiful