A Martial Artist in Genshin Impact

As an author, you can't give yourself too much credit. 😁

It looks good, but there are a lot of details missing. For example, the introduction says there is no harem, but it is ambiguous with too many female characters. It doesn't mean that you can't talk to your character unless you have a harem, but just don't be so ambiguous and just chat normally and be friends. The second is the power of the protagonist. The power of the protagonist described now looks like the past, but it is far from enough to deal with the enemies in the plot. The author is writing about warriors, so you can write about Qi and blood, and there is no shortage of materials to improve Qi and blood. I think the setting is Ning Guang's younger brother, and he will not be short of money. There are so many materials in Yuanyuan, and there are all kinds of them. Finally, come on, the author!!

The writing is okay, I hope you will continue to work hard.

Okay, come on, author.