"As one of the outstanding young people of the 21st century, a handsome man with a bright future was kidnapped by an unknown system. Is this a loss of morality or a distortion of human nature..."
"That's enough for you! I just made a mistake accidentally. Besides, who doesn't want to experience time travel? Why don't you feel satisfied if it falls on you?" The tsundere system shifted its gaze guiltily.
"Then tell me what it is like to die of illness just after traveling through time! Gan" Luo Feng clenched his fists.
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Reader comments
I think the author has used too much ink to describe Diya. This article is mainly about the protagonist, and the protagonist will definitely feel lonely when traveling through various planes. Although the system is here, that loneliness will definitely not disappear. I think it is unnecessary for the protagonist to be so kind to Diya, because he is an orphan in this plane! Even if he doesn't think about it, he will definitely be sad, and Diya's parents are still alive. Although they are too busy, they are not like the protagonist who has no parents in this dimension. Moreover, he also borrowed money to buy rainbow stones to give to Diya. There is no need. 😱[Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The younger sister appears too much in the early stage, which only lets people know that the protagonist loves her very much. It has no practical significance. Although there is a little foreshadowing, I think it is still too much.
I think the author has used too much ink to describe Diya. This article is mainly about the protagonist, and the protagonist will definitely feel lonely when traveling through various planes. Although the system is here, that loneliness will definitely not disappear. I think it is unnecessary for the protagonist to be so kind to Diya, because he is an orphan in this plane! Even if he doesn't think about it, he will definitely be sad, and Diya's parents are still alive. Although they are too busy, they are not like the protagonist who has no parents in this dimension. Moreover, he also borrowed money to buy rainbow stones to give to Diya. There is no need. 😱[Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] The younger sister appears too much in the early stage, which only lets people know that the protagonist loves her very much. It has no practical significance. Although there is a little foreshadowing, I think it is still too much.