Reborn: The First Player

For my own book, five stars is not excessive! [Blowing kiss]

So who can tell me why such a beautiful book has such a low rating? .[Stare][Petrochemical]

I think I just moved here not long ago. This book is second only to The Super Mechanic in online game writing. It will definitely get a score of 9 or above. Just wait, it is now 7.7

The author's writing is quite good, and the plot is at least not that popular. Those who gave negative reviews only read the front and not the results. In fact, there are not so many bad points. I think this book is very good among all online game books. Come on, author, I believe this book will get better and better! [Sending Hearts]

It looks comfortable, please support the author

Four stars, I haven't seen the back yet, but the part where the protagonist's true identity is exposed is considered a poisonous point, and it feels a bit like forcing the plot. After all, the enemy's power is stronger than the protagonist now, and the enemy's people are nearby, and there is a risk of identity exposure. In addition, there is also my old grandfather, so I have to move the position just for the safety of the old man, and there is no shortage of money.

It's okay so far. Some suggestions: 1. When you get rich, you can cooperate with the jungler to build houses in an area. The contracted people go there and have unified management. It's good, mainly because the contact with that ball is a bit unbearable. 2. I remember that the Holy Law Guild was quite strong in the protagonist's previous life, and I think we can join forces later. 3. At present, there are not many top experts in the guild. You can use the advantage of the prophet in your previous life to win some experts. 4. From the current point of view, this article might have been a bigger deal if it had a female protagonist, Akiba, but it's actually quite good. 5. In terms of equipment, there can be a set type, and it should be possible to create equipment in the game. 6. You can also write about large-scale events and the like

It's a decent book. It's pretty good, but it didn't appeal to me very much at the beginning. I almost didn't read it. But it became quite attractive later on. However, I hope that if there is a love line, the female protagonist can be a female protagonist who has not interacted with the male protagonist in his previous life or who has changed due to the male protagonist's rebirth. Finally, come on, author, please update more.

This book should be slow to read, it will take a long time to read, but the main reason is that the protagonist's mentality is a little calmer, too impatient, giving people a bad impression, and the emotional scenes are not very good, but there are good and bad, you can read it when the content is boring, after all, Du Min also has interesting points, in short, it is still recommended. The identity is exposed, but not completely exposed, just a little bit poisonous. But it is also highly recommended,

The settings, values, and world view can be said to be firmly in the top three in online game literature. The only shortcoming is that the main plot is not thick enough and does not match the grand world view. Secondly, the three-dimensional sense of character personality is very weak. Compared with the author of online games such as Snail, Butterfly, and Leaf, it lacks the depth of characterization. But it does not affect the viewing of the novel itself. Finally, and perhaps the reason why this book is not so popular, is that the protagonist's opponents are too weak, and the several encounters are basically dimensionality reduction attacks. Although it does not affect the advancement of the main plot, it will make people lack the excitement. The main setting of this book still comes from Legend, Journey and WOW, but compared with several similar novels recommended by Tomato earlier, it is more reasonable and logical. It is also the only book in three years that I have read 50% and am willing to write a review. Many books appear in our field of vision, not necessarily because the books themselves are good, but because of the needs of the platform or capital promoters. For those who really want to read good books, they are just the same thing. So when we see a good book, we should do our part to help her appear in the eyes of more people who may like her. If the subsequent plot can surprise me, I would like to call it first-class and definitely worth reading.