Wuhun*******

I really didn't expect to write about Yu Xiaogang. Quite new.

Not bad, just a little lacking.

Personally I think it's very exciting and beautiful, I hope it doesn't end badly.

It's pretty good, I hope it doesn't end well

I like it. I usually don't give reviews. This is really good. I hope it can be updated soon. I can send gifts.

I didn't expect anyone to write about Yu Xiaogang

The protagonist travels through time and becomes Yu Xiaogang. This Yu Xiaogang is not the same as before. After awakening and accepting disciples, the system becomes stronger. Start going further and further on the road of accepting disciples, and only accept your female disciples (currently accepting disciples: Xiao Wu, Lonely Yan, Ye Xixi, Ning Rongrong). Hey, hey, basically I will be recruiting apprentices, and in the end it should become my own harem story. I occasionally drive, occasionally protect the calves to get system rewards, and do whatever I want while dating beauties all over the world. Although the writing is good in the early stage, it does not prevent the writing from being poor in the middle and later stages. I didn't notice anything about the writing, but the plot was about the same. Since this is Tomato's first fanfic of "Douluo Dalu", it is written by Yu Xiaogang. I'll give it a four-star rating.

I just started reading it, I hope the author can support me

Very good, but does the author have a group? I'm so afraid that this book will be blocked! Or where else can I read this author's book.

Not bad. It's so comfortable to watch!

Fine! I just hope it doesn't end badly and is finished!

I just like this kind of author who catches all the beauties in one fell swoop and beats Tang San into a lunatic, haha.

It's so exciting, why is the score so low? ? ! ! Come on, author, work hard to update! !

It looks great. Are all the heroines included in the harem? 13?

The reason I gave it four stars is that it's too little. I can't get by without 20,000 to 30,000 words per day.

Author, can you see it? What happens next in Chapter 4? Why did he suddenly jump to another world, both innate and holy? After getting the soul ring in the second chapter, he met the Yu family in some forbidden place in the third chapter. It was only in the next ten chapters that it suddenly turned into a Douluo plot, and then directly accepted Ye Lingling, but what is the one in the middle? Is there a system error? It's so outrageous, I don't know what's going on here, why the plot is jumping around.

? ? ? ? ? ? ? How come it changed into a book in an instant? Not a Douluo fan? Why are you cultivating immortality again? Why don't I just watch an ad? Why did it change instantly?

It's good, but it's a bit unreadable. I'm afraid I'll lose it if I want to support it. Come on, author, stop it.

Work hard, just ask to write something astringent.

Ah, the author is really good-looking, please update soon! I hope this book doesn't end badly.

Very well written, keep up the good work

It's really fresh

Very good, but I suggest the author change his name and be careful about the blue and silver entanglement

How can I put it this way? A person in their 40s and 50s and a group of people aged 7 to 14 always feel uncomfortable. Oh, I despise you👎╭∩╮(￣▽￣)╭∩╮. But in view of your efforts, I will give you five stars.

The author should change the names of the characters in the book to use homophonic sounds, otherwise he will easily be blocked Protect the book and give it a low score

Then I'll just behave myself. Well, I haven't thought of anything that would make me unhappy, so let's leave it like that for now and see what happens next.

It's a good idea, I didn't expect it to work like this. Come on, author

Author, please speed it up! ! ! Thanks. 😂😂😂

You are my second five-star review since reading Tomato Novels

It's written by Yu Xiaogang, it's pretty good.