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It's like Luffy's rebirth. It feels pretty good, not like a time-travel novel?

Fujitora and Green Bull, can these two characters join in?

Will you still stick to it?

Yes, but would Luffy take action against Nami, Robin and Hancock after traveling through time? Looking forward to [laughing evilly]

Overall, it's okay, at least Momonosuke is dead.

Very good, but can the system be reused?

Not bad, but the training space for the protagonist is not hidden at all. I just say that I wish everyone knew about my cheat. Although they were companions destined to be together in the future, they were not familiar with each other at first, so they told their secrets so carelessly.

Personally, I like it better. Although he is a time traveler, he is not lewd and has the same personality as Luffy.

Nice! The plot is very exciting There is a typo in the name, and Luffy sometimes knows the plot and sometimes doesn't.

Not bad, good cheers, author.

Okay, just a little bit less

Very good novel.

Dominance can be learned, but domineering color cannot be learned There are so many bugs, and there are a lot of typos. Zoro's name is Roronoa Zoro, not Roronoa Zoro.

Ok ok Just don't be a straight man Come back quickly and continue to update. Just treat this as the ending and just say it first. This book is starting to become popular.

I feel like I can let Ace into the training space

The plot is okay, but it ends too early. Why don't you write more? I still want to read more.

Does the author have a female protagonist? Robin or Nami or Hancock?

The ending is perfect and deserves five stars [I learned it]

Brother, I have read this novel on another website. Is it the same author?

Not bad, keep it up I feel like the content of one chapter is a bit short.

I personally think it's okay

I hope the author will come back and continue

There are a lot of errors in details, but other than that there are no big problems

I think it's quite interesting, but I never have a concrete idea of ​​the strength of Luffy and his friends.

Which website did you find it on? I can't find it and can't read it. Send me a website [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Can there be a female protagonist? Single female protagonist, dual female protagonists or multiple female protagonists, but at least one female protagonist There are a lot of typos, and Sauron's skill names are a bit wrong.

However, I am uneducated, so I can go all over the world with just one word. I feel like Luffy can be more ruthless and decisive Author, come on, come on, come on, don't give up.

I'm so touched. After many days, I finally updated it [crying][crying][crying]

The fan fiction is well written and the characters are well written. Thumbs up.

Update, why don't you update it? I just found a book that I like to read, but suddenly it doesn't update anymore. It's so sad😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖