Raven******

I didn't understand the title of the book at first, but then I thought that the literal translation of Ravenclaw is Raven Claws.

It is not recommended to watch if you are not a senior magic fan, but you can also watch it while searching for information.

Yes, but I don't think it's necessary to take Hermione with me. The top people in the world don't think Hermione is worthy.

I want to know if the wizards in Harry Potter are so powerful? The performance in Xingyue vs. Heroic Spirits is useless in Harry Potter. Or should I say that the author has enhanced the Harry Potter world. Please reply. This is just my personal opinion, please don't comment. In other words, the front part feels good. Although there are too many magic systems, it is still acceptable. But when I get to the back part, I don't know why it feels like it is not as good as the front part. The following is completely exaggerating the strength of the wizards in "Harry Potter".

The author wrote it very carefully, but to be honest, I don't particularly like it. If there is such a book, I think the Shangqing sect's classics on cultivation techniques, the golden light curse and thunder technique under one person, or other learning methods can at least lead to immortality or eternal life. It is just a personal opinion. I really have no feeling about Western magic. There may be some magic that is more practical, but I prefer Eastern magic.

Since going to Hogwarts requires a magical bloodline, but obtaining the bloodline is so difficult, why do you have to get it? Except this one is a bit weird, everything else is fine

The book is a good book. One star is deducted for the authors of "Hermione and Her Dog Lickers" [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

How to say it? The early stage of this book is still remarkable. The cheats are not particularly big. At least they are more reasonable than those that give you a lot of things when you sign in. Whether it is a copy of Xingyue Death God or a Marvel copy, they are very interesting, especially the Marvel copy, which is very exciting, especially It did not rely entirely on the movie universe, but mixed in many plots such as Zeus, the origin of fear, Sithorn, the god of the underworld, and even brought in oaa and oba. However, the copy of Immortal Sword took a turn for the worse, but it was nothing. After all, even Dao Zu spoke up and talked about the protagonist's talent for cultivating immortals. The character is a complete mess, and there are also some poisonous points about Hermione. Personally speaking, it is actually nothing. It can be forcibly summarized as the protagonist, just on a whim. After all, the mage is a profession that requires communication. Cultivating a powerful wizard at the same level as yourself is always full of a sense of accomplishment. It can be said that the protagonist's purpose in the copy of Death is very clear, just to save Ginny. After leaving Hogwarts, the description of going to other colleges and obtaining the four original powers is quite good. It also unfolds some of the author's private settings, about the African voodoo magic system and the Japanese shikigami system. What I personally feel is worse is that the protagonist does not need to have a good relationship with those pure-blood families. After all, they give me the impression that they are just a bunch of losers. The protagonist only needs a dog, even if he can only cast a few nine-ring spells, or at worst, summon the evil god Cthulhu to play with them. Of course, dying together is just a metaphor. At least let them know that you have the ability to flip the table. Fear and intimidation are faster than building a good relationship. In the early stages of the world, at least when the protagonist creates the four-element plane, the world has always been unconscious and even ignorant. The protagonist is completely You can replace the heart of heaven with your own heart, eroding or even completely replacing the consciousness of the world. This method should be feasible. There are such settings in many novels, so that the protagonist has such a magic book that contains all-encompassing mysterious knowledge. There should be a spell similar to this. If it doesn't work, the protagonist can take a test. Think about transforming yourself into a light-and-dark sensitive parasite, that is, an ancient god, turning yourself into an eroded fallen Titan. The release ability gained in this way is better than using the art of Onigalu to change your own bloodline and transform yourself from an archmage with unlimited future into a warlock with limited strength to some extent. Of course, the above words are purely my complaints. After all, in my opinion, the author's book could be written better. Of course, maybe the author is not a full-time book writer, mainly considering some objective factors, but this book is still a conscientious work among Tomatoes.

This book seems to have been taken off the shelves and cannot be found [almost crying][crying]

Although your book is not decorated with gorgeous language, it impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model of a book! This plain article shows extraordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself.

The author, the Xingyue volume and the Marvel volume are quite good, but the Fairy Sword chapter is a bit out of topic. Don't be influenced by others, just stick to yourself. People who can read this book will not influence the author. For people who can't read this book, no matter how much you adjust, you won't be in agreement with them.

It's nice to watch, I like it a lot, but I don't know if there will be a female protagonist, and I don't think there will be one (○ﾟεﾟ○)

Start with all the worlds, mysticism, it's better to practice immortality

Holy Grail has no feeling. For those who don't like watching this anime, I don't feel it at all. The front part is very good.

The author really doesn't need to work hard to correct some people's complaints. You can't make everyone happy, so as long as you can write wonderfully, it is the truth. Here is five stars to support it. I hope this book will get better and better.

It feels good to read, and everything the protagonist does is of moderate width and length. Does the author recommend any similar fan fiction? It's true that the further you get to the back, the less interesting it becomes.

[Like] The setting is interesting and the logic is tight. The writing is also very smooth, it's rare to see such good magic writing. The main plot seems to be Harry Potter for the time being. You can travel through other worlds. If you write it more grandly, it can be very long. Come on.

It gives people a feeling of sudden enlightenment. Even people who are not familiar with the magic system will not feel uncomfortable reading it. It is a book worth reading. Highly recommended.

Yes, it ranks among the top ten books I've read on Tomato. The plot is not watery, the protagonist's purpose is clear, and the actions are not delayed. The IQ levels of the characters in the book are also online, and there are no side plots that do not promote the main plot like most authors. It's just that the protagonist doesn't have any skills that cause serious damage, so he relies heavily on props. Also, the psychological portrayal of the protagonist is not vivid enough and feels too bland. There is a passage in the book when the protagonist goes to kill the werewolf because of the words of the master, saying that he will not become a werewolf. It feels too stiff. Also, the protagonist directly merged his body with the members of the four families into one body, which felt not cautious enough. I think the protagonist should use part of himself to merge with the four people to form a new body, and then have one soul and two bodies. Isn't it beautiful? Hehe, I like to watch "Japanese" the most (I seem to have exposed something) The biggest drawback is that the number of words is too small. Also, the protagonist is too young and is inconvenient to do many things. Summary: It is a novel worth reading, but it still needs to be cultivated or it will not be enough. It's a pity that there is no interesting plot. (It seems like I said a bit too much [laughing])

The book is good, but is Voldemort so powerful? Can't even defeat the heroic spirits

Is this book also called: Things about me having a universe-level golden finger, but still dawdling in Novice Village?

If the protagonist is a dragonborn, can we explore the world of Zhagenbao, and learn how to roar like a dragon? It would be very beautiful [laughter]

I read in the comments section before that Hermione traveled through time with the protagonist, so I clicked in several times to look at the introduction and then exited. This time I finally clicked into the content and looked at it, and found that Hermione did not travel with the protagonist. I wonder if the author changed it later. It's pretty good to watch, but sometimes I didn't understand the confusing behavior of the protagonist, and there were also some copies that I wasn't interested in, so I just skipped through them. Overall, it was pretty good.

Why is the rating so low? This is a really good book. The subject matter is novel and the author's writing is powerful. I feel that it may be delayed by the name. It is better to change the title to a book that is suitable for both refined and popular tastes. Come on, author!

It is recommended to write more about other worlds. Also, don't spend a lot of pen and ink writing about one event, or write more events. Pay attention to the connection of events. It is recommended to divide it into more sections, otherwise it will be too tiring to read. Write more about the anime world. There is no main context, no suspense, and no foreshadowing. It is recommended not to use one world as the main body, and you have written too much. I am confused because I have not read it. I only read the front and flipped through the comment area. The book is already useless. I suggest writing a new book about the heavens and the world, and don't spend a lot of time writing about the main world. That's okay. Create your own world, or write about the world of animation. If you want to write about Harry Potter in this book, just write about Harry Potter. It is too complicated, and many things are not explained clearly. It is recommended to complain more and write jokes, not so serious, otherwise you will not be able to follow it if you are not a true fan. You can read "The Ghost Knocks on the Door at the Start, I Pushed from the Twelfth Floor" and learn more

The content and settings of the book are basically to my liking, but for a book involving multiple planes, the extremely important power system is integrated and given a universal scalar. It is still lacking. I did not give this last star. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve.

It is a rare protagonist that does not revolve around Harry Potter. There is no dark Harry. It feels like Dumbledore is not portrayed as a shameless politician, but more like a background board. Good book

I wonder if there is a female protagonist? I prefer the one without cp, so if I ask if there is one, I will find another one to read.

So far it's pretty good, but can you tell me a little bit about the new world? I haven't watched some of the anime, so I was a little confused. [Shy][shy][shy]

On the Tomato side, this book is of good quality